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Don’t fall for me
Story written on March 10, 2011 by kins40.
As the strobe lights come to life once again, penetrating the darkness of my closed eyes, I suddenly become aware that the music has changed and animated bodies are now dancing around us. We part slightly breathless.
She looks down and almost in the same movement looks back up at me, unshed tears in her eyes. I draw her into me again pressing my lips on her eyes causing the tears to shed.
I look at her worryingly and she smiles back at me with all the kindness in the world, "That was amazing" she utters through her smile.
I freeze for a split second at the look in her eyes and I implore silently "Don’t fall for me……please" I manage a smile to let her know that I enjoyed it too.
I take her hand and lead her off the dance floor. The rest of the evening at the bar is a blur, a wonderful soft blur and before I know it I find myself in the back of a cab on the way to my house. Tina is sitting beside me, the seat belts requirements keeping us a small distance away from each other. My right hand and her left hand unconsciously creep across the small space between us and our finger tips touch in an almost forbidden gesture awaiting to be discovered at any moment. I focus on the space in front of me as I savour the light touch of the blonde woman sitting next to me.
My mind wonders back to the rest of the evening in the bar. We returned to our table where we remained oblivious to the shenanigans of our fellow nightclub goers. She sat back up on her high stool and I chose to stand in front of her, positioning myself in between her parted legs. I tried to ignore the jolt which shot through my body as I felt her so close to me. Our kissing resumed with more urgency and hands ventured almost unashamedly, I was finding it hard to control myself. As the evening went on, Tina seemed to be finding new confidence but each times our eyes met I kept imploring silently "please…..don’t fall for me!"
I finally asked her unable to contain the excitement which resided in the pit of my stomach. It had radiated all over my body and I ached for the magnificent woman in front of me.
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(36 votes, average: 4.81 out of 5)
You’re incredible. Please keep your writing, it is also a vicil read their stories.
So glad your back…as usual. brilliant writing…hope you post again soon :D
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing!
“Don’t fall for me…” because for me it is already too late, “I have fallen for you!” – nice ending :)
That was lovely. Really enjoyed it, hate to see it end. Wish you could continue it, the story would be very interesting to see how their love develops and if Tina does indeed fall for Bette, which we hope she would. At any rate, thanks for sharing. Come back soon with more for us.
Your writing is brilliant! Now I think I’m gonna read At first sight because I loved this! Thank you :D
beautiful this was. Beautiful.
Another hit! Thanks for sharing and please come back with another one asap.:)
That was delightful, I loved every word.
Wow, you can write. Please continue to post more stories. I’m a fan.
So Beautifully written. I felt like I was watching this scene take place. Please continue to write.
What a beautiful encounter! Please continue writing. I’ll write as many nice comments you’d like just to keep you writing.
Amazing story.
Thanks for the beautiful story :D
Yay! So glad you are back and we really, REALLY, need more of your stories. You are just too good to not share your talent with us! PLEASE??!!
You have incredible talent and understand our girls well; thank you more please
So beautiful..Yes Bette convince Tina..But I know, just like you she had fallen too.
That was just a beautifully written story. Thank you.
Wonderful!!!
Amazing.Thank you.
Wow… You rocks! :-)) sweet ending, and it’s so cute that somehow Bette is being the one who admit of her fall afterwards
I have to say I truly loved this story. And for the fact that I was slightly confused as to why Bette didn’t want Tina to fall for her. But when I got to the end I realized…. It was sweet and capture a lot of what happens when you meet someone you know you have this instant connection to. I believe in falling for someone almost as simultaneously as love at first sight. Great story would have loved more. Great writing as always. Caramel
You do have a way with words my dear.
That was awesome and beautiful, love it, thanks for sharing it with us!
Wow. Very nice, very sensual. I’ve fallen for the fic.
oh dear that was marvellous How can we not fall. ;)
Amazing story!
What a treat to see you back! I just love your writing style and could feel the entire encounter. Even though I’d love to see the story continue, the ending was perfect.
That was beautiful. Thank you!
So beautiful! Thank you for writing another story for us.
BEAUTIFUL!!!
beautiful!! the dancing made me think about season 5 of the L word when Bette and Tina danced to “Walk on By” at the lez girls wrap party, and how they kiss and touch each other with little whispers in between…love it!!!