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“Two of who?”
“Two Helena’s. Stay with me Alice” Honestly, too much explanation was ruining her cunning plan.
Utter one more word Bette Porter and I swear…! Fumed Estelle silently. Oh hold on… she paused as a wicked thought occurred to her.
Bette, in the meantime, was marvelling at how good she seemed to be at acting. I must’ve learned something from the welder girl with the off-the-shoulder sweater! Something-dance, wasn’t it called? Anyway, Bette caught herself before the feigned worried face slipped. It’s not in your best interest to let Alice know there’re two of you Peabody’s, Estelle, so you better play along.
And miraculously so, Estelle did play along. “You’re right, Darling,” she nearly spat that word, having to direct it to Bette, but the quicker I agree, the quicker I get out of here. “It’s time Alice knew”
“It is?” stared Bette, completely flabbergasted at having her plan to unnerve Estelle backfire.
“It is” nodded Estelle confidently as she looked at Alice, hoping this statement would satisfy their interrogator, not to mention make her forget the dreaded act of lip enmeshment.
“Hmm” hmmed [yes, it’s a word] Alice disbelievingly.
Bette blinked, still struggling to keep up with this character swapping- since when had Estelle agreed with her, and since fucking when had Alice been so hard to convince?!
Silence prevailed as Alice’s suspicious eyes flitted from Bette to Estelle to Bette to Estelle to Bette to Est… well, you get the idea.
Good God, Alice! What will it take for you to believ…
“Kiss”
Shit! If Estelle’s little voice in her head was in fact a little person, it would have, at this point, covered its little face with its little hands and squeaked in its little voice Argh! Estelle got up from her seat and moved to Bette. You know what, to hell with this. I’m just going to bloody kiss bloody Bette and…
Bette’s eyes widened at seeing Estelle’s determined approach. Eeek! just about summed up her expression and the content of her thoughts
…and show bloody Alice that there is not, in fact, two blo… ranted Estelle as she smackered a kiss on Bette’s pursed mouth. Without a further glance at the kissee, she turned to face Alice “Happy?”
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I find Bette and Estelle so funny. But now Bette and Helena are all that matters… kiss her! kiss her! ;)
Glad you and this story are back! Alice…doesn’t know when to stop! And finally, will we see what so many have clamored for? PPS!
You did it again, this was really great. I so love Alice, she’s amazing. Please post soon.
I so much love this, vicky, I sooo much love this!!!You have this unbelievable lovable way of mixing up comedy and romance, I sooo much love it (I know I already said it but it really is!)When I saw only two short pages, I thought I would have to protest (kidding, of course) but at the end I was simply too much in love with this all to say anything else than : I sooo much love this fiction and how you write and in fact I think I love you :OOOO LOL
Oh, my ! I can’t believe you did it ! I can’t believe you stopped there ! Threachery !!!! LOL ! Well, this is a perfectly fine chapter, Lady V. Did I mention before that I loved the interaction between Bette and Alice ? Well, I do. I truly love their complicity and they totally crack me up. Furthermore, that mischievous and roguish side of Alice is so funny !… Yet, are you sure “hmmed” is a word ? You know, I couldn’t find that one in my dictionnary. LOL !All right, on a more serious note, now I think I’d like to see Helena make her real entrance on the stage as she’s been a little too absent in this chapter. I know it’s for the sake of drama, Vvith, but we’ve been missing her… Anyway, I’m soooooo looking forward to reading your next installment ! In fact, is there a way to bribe you so that you can post a new chappie like… Tomorrow ? LOL ! ( whispering : just let us know, Vvitch…). Thanks for sharing your tremendous talent as an autor with us.
and I forgot, it’s sooo damn funny how Bette could react with a EEK thinking to kiss the wrong twin LOL It’s soo BETTEsque :D
and how to forget the best funniest line in years? “The hell does that mean? What pff? Why’re you pff-ing at me? I don’t even know what pff means!” ahahahahhahahahah!!!! you really have talent, girl!
You know? You know… HAHAHAHA, your fanfic was amazing! :D Hilariously funny! I liked the part when you made every thing so crazy, and have Helena walking through the door. Godwin man… AND, you’re right about me losing another bet. I did lose. How did you guess? GREAT JOB V! YOU’RE THE BEST! I LOVE THIS STORY (AND YOUR OTHER INSANE MIND-READING ONE) SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSO MUCH!
This is absolutely awesome! Everytime you write a new chapter, you surpass your last! This was so romantic, funny, everything! I love ALLL your stories SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO much tooooooo!!!!! I really hope you post us another soon :)
Aw! That has got to be the sweetest first comment I ever got! Thanks SO SO SO much yes_their_real!!! You’ve made my day!
Where Did U go? lol I LOVE this Story SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO Much
Good chapter. They are so funny and Alice is crazy. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Love this story! Well done. Yet another great chapter. I look forward to the next.
Hey vvitchy glad to see you found the time to update this one as well cuz it really is my favorite story. I couldn’t stop laughing at the part wxhere the real helena went bezerk after seeing her evil twin kiss Bette. And Bette’s face at the idea of kissing the wrong twin I could so see it in my imagination. Your writing style is so wonderful sweetie, please keep up the good work and update sooner if you can. Huggies BeL’s
great~~~~~ alice is hilarious … as usual. …. haahha.
Excellent! I love how Alice was shut up with Bette’s comment…although…you need to get some Tina Jealously in there…she could have walked in and seen Estelle and Bette “lip locking”good job now do more…hehehe
Vvvvvvvvvvv! Please forgive me for arriving late. Well let me say that I absolutely love it and of course, the day that you posted it! Thank you for the well wishes *big toothy smile* Your stories are a treat and always make me smile…warm my heart and very often, LOL. Estelle playing dead by filing her nails…B being her cocky self….Al, of course nosey as heck…the appearance of the other Helena…a little twin war…and a Belena kiss to close. Soooo V, where are we going from here? PPPS