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Alice made a face “What, missing the good part? Do you want popcorn?”
“Uh huh” replied Bette “keep going and you’ll have to live in that state of utter confusion forever”
“Oh puhleease. I so know what’s going on. I knew wayy before”
“Pff”
“The hell does that mean? What pff? Why’re you pff-ing at me? I don’t even know what pff means!”
“It is a sound of disbelief. Now will you just shut up?! I can barely hear what they’re saying!”
“Serves you right, for being here. Why aren’t you there, consoling Angry Helena anyway?
Bette paused. She had actually tried to go after Helena to explain but was waved away by both Helena and Estelle. “Well, why aren’t you there?! It’s all your fault, saying kiss, kiss, ki…”
“At least I didn’t participate in that lip-lock! Obviously, not your best move…”
“There was no move. Our lips barely touched and…”
“Still a kiss” sniggered Alice.
“Al, when I kiss, people are going to know it. Not just the woman I’m kissing, but everyone around” Bette paused for effect before saying smugly “You should know…”
“Shut up” scowled Alice. And there was silence once again.
~
(Back to centre stage)
“Helana… you know I don’t poach” said Estelle and waited, still holding her sister, for a response.
“I know” came the muffled response. Helena pulled back and shrugged, sighing deeply “But it’s her, Estelle…”
“I know, I know. And for that I’m sorry but there…”
Helena waved her hand “Don’t apologise. It didn’t mean anything and I know you were cornered” She gave a wobbly smile as she stepped away “I guess I just envy you”
Estelle arched an eyebrow “Envy me? Oh please” She peered over Helena’s shoulder and grinned “Now would be a good time, no?”
“It would, indeed” replied Bette, standing behind Helena
“For what?” Helena turned around in surprise. “And since when have you two understood each other so well?”
Estelle laughed and winked “We do now”
“Mm hmm” murmured Bette, slowly running her hands up and down Helena’s arm “Now that we have someone in common”
“Oh do you?” said Helena, pressing herself closer to Bette
“Mm hmm” Bette leaned in a nuzzled Helena’s neck.
“Mmm… now is a good time for what, Bette?”
“To kiss you…”
“So Bette?”
“Mm hmm?”
“You need to kiss me now”
(tbc)
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I find Bette and Estelle so funny. But now Bette and Helena are all that matters… kiss her! kiss her! ;)
Glad you and this story are back! Alice…doesn’t know when to stop! And finally, will we see what so many have clamored for? PPS!
You did it again, this was really great. I so love Alice, she’s amazing. Please post soon.
I so much love this, vicky, I sooo much love this!!!You have this unbelievable lovable way of mixing up comedy and romance, I sooo much love it (I know I already said it but it really is!)When I saw only two short pages, I thought I would have to protest (kidding, of course) but at the end I was simply too much in love with this all to say anything else than : I sooo much love this fiction and how you write and in fact I think I love you :OOOO LOL
Oh, my ! I can’t believe you did it ! I can’t believe you stopped there ! Threachery !!!! LOL ! Well, this is a perfectly fine chapter, Lady V. Did I mention before that I loved the interaction between Bette and Alice ? Well, I do. I truly love their complicity and they totally crack me up. Furthermore, that mischievous and roguish side of Alice is so funny !… Yet, are you sure “hmmed” is a word ? You know, I couldn’t find that one in my dictionnary. LOL !All right, on a more serious note, now I think I’d like to see Helena make her real entrance on the stage as she’s been a little too absent in this chapter. I know it’s for the sake of drama, Vvith, but we’ve been missing her… Anyway, I’m soooooo looking forward to reading your next installment ! In fact, is there a way to bribe you so that you can post a new chappie like… Tomorrow ? LOL ! ( whispering : just let us know, Vvitch…). Thanks for sharing your tremendous talent as an autor with us.
and I forgot, it’s sooo damn funny how Bette could react with a EEK thinking to kiss the wrong twin LOL It’s soo BETTEsque :D
and how to forget the best funniest line in years? “The hell does that mean? What pff? Why’re you pff-ing at me? I don’t even know what pff means!” ahahahahhahahahah!!!! you really have talent, girl!
You know? You know… HAHAHAHA, your fanfic was amazing! :D Hilariously funny! I liked the part when you made every thing so crazy, and have Helena walking through the door. Godwin man… AND, you’re right about me losing another bet. I did lose. How did you guess? GREAT JOB V! YOU’RE THE BEST! I LOVE THIS STORY (AND YOUR OTHER INSANE MIND-READING ONE) SOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSOSO MUCH!
This is absolutely awesome! Everytime you write a new chapter, you surpass your last! This was so romantic, funny, everything! I love ALLL your stories SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO much tooooooo!!!!! I really hope you post us another soon :)
Aw! That has got to be the sweetest first comment I ever got! Thanks SO SO SO much yes_their_real!!! You’ve made my day!
Where Did U go? lol I LOVE this Story SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO SO Much
Good chapter. They are so funny and Alice is crazy. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Love this story! Well done. Yet another great chapter. I look forward to the next.
Hey vvitchy glad to see you found the time to update this one as well cuz it really is my favorite story. I couldn’t stop laughing at the part wxhere the real helena went bezerk after seeing her evil twin kiss Bette. And Bette’s face at the idea of kissing the wrong twin I could so see it in my imagination. Your writing style is so wonderful sweetie, please keep up the good work and update sooner if you can. Huggies BeL’s
great~~~~~ alice is hilarious … as usual. …. haahha.
Excellent! I love how Alice was shut up with Bette’s comment…although…you need to get some Tina Jealously in there…she could have walked in and seen Estelle and Bette “lip locking”good job now do more…hehehe
Vvvvvvvvvvv! Please forgive me for arriving late. Well let me say that I absolutely love it and of course, the day that you posted it! Thank you for the well wishes *big toothy smile* Your stories are a treat and always make me smile…warm my heart and very often, LOL. Estelle playing dead by filing her nails…B being her cocky self….Al, of course nosey as heck…the appearance of the other Helena…a little twin war…and a Belena kiss to close. Soooo V, where are we going from here? PPPS