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Double Vision 6
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Previously…
“Listen Bette, I was wondering if you could take Angelica to get her sh…” Tina was distracted by something on Helena’s almost bare back “…to uhmm…get her shots tomorr…” or rather, the lack of something there. Tina stopped as she stared at Helena’s back.
“What? What is it?” asked Bette. She looked back and forth between Tina and Helena.
Helena’s eyes widened as she realised what Tina had noticed. Uh-oh…
Chapter 6
“Tina!”
Tina’s eyes snapped from Helena’s back to Bette “What?” Ok how do I tell my ex-girlfriend that my other ex-girlfriend is missing a tattoo in a normally-covered area and that I noticed its absence because I used to find it oh-so erotic?
“What’re you looking at?” asked Bette, and immediately struck up a conversation with herself. Why am I asking? Why do I need to know? Tina can look at whomever she wants now. Oddly enough, it wasn’t Tina’s involvement in The Look Giving-Receiving interaction that Bette minded.
Surprised at Bette’s insistent need to know, Helena glanced at Bette, before turning to face Tina’s increasingly accusing eyes. Bloody tattoo. I’d forgotten about it completely. And Estelle would have done well to remind me. I bet she did this on purpose!
“Where is it?”
“I…uhh…had it removed?” Helena cringed at hearing her statement come out like a question.
“Did you now?” Tina was finding this very suspicious indeed.
“Yes” Helena raised her chin, and hoped the inevitable question wouldn’t come.
“How?”
There it is, dammit. I should’ve brushed up on my tattoo removal techniques! She hazarded a guess “Laser?”
The inner, more devious Tina perked up. “Did it hurt?”
Uh oh! Is it supposed to hurt? “Not really”
“I guess it wouldn’t have hurt you. I mean, it didn’t hurt you even when you got that intricate tattoo, right?” smirked devious-Tina.
“Right!” replied Helena. She wasn’t aware of any tears shed by Estelle since they started walking so she was quite certain that a little tattoo (God, what is it a tattoo of?! I don’t even remember that much!) wouldn’t reduce her proud and tough sister to tears.
“Aha!!!” exclaimed Tina triumphantly. In fact, she’d been told that it had hurt ‘like fucking-hell-and-whoever-told-me-it-wouldn’t-hurt-deserves-to-bloody-rot-in-that-fucking-hell’ and had actually involved a lot of tears- but Tina was the only one privy to that bit of information. Wait! What does this mean? That Helena doesn’t remember? Her eyes widening now, Tina peered at Helena’s face.
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This was a pleasant surprise! I totally agree with pands! That’s all we get? Great chapter! Loved the humour and professional writing style. Can’t wait to see where you’re taking us next! Thanks and post soon!
Vvitch, that was indeed absolutely hilarious ! The dialogues are just brilliant and your style is so… incisive and witty. I really love it ! I must say I think this whole story is told in a very clever manner. Just keep posting Vvitch ! …And thanks again for sharing this with us…
Wow. I have just catched up on this story. It’s great btw. Bette and Helena, yay
ditto on all of the above, funny, great writing, post soon!!!
Ssssssshhhhhssshhhh…..hey, is this thing working? Hey V, indeed I got the LIN (please refer to previous comment for decoding)….” The Room Formerly Known As Bette and Tina’s Room” …oh, the secret is out….oh boy….does that mean what I think it means? Are you sure you want me to make that call and push the red button?? V…..V….Sssssssshhhhhssssshhh V……V…….come back……VVVVVV…….please confirm ASAP….innocent lives may be in danger!!! BTW, loving the story…hurry back.
This is funny and like it. Post soon please, thanks!
Let me find out they are gonna start double dating. So will Tina go with Estelle? Please post soon.
I don’t know who’s funnier; Helena and Estelle or Bette and Tina. The comedic twins are a riot; both vying for the attention of either Bette or Tina. While at the same time, I don’t EVER recall reading a story in which B & T had a pleasant break-up. Looking forward to your next chapter. Did someone say double date? OMG!! If that should happen, there will be no way, just no way I tell you, that I could read this anywhere but home. Too much laughter will make my co-workers think I’m not doing a damned thing!!
Great chapter Vvitch, I love the way you write this fic it is so funny and creative.. I can’t wait to see Bette/Helena and Estelle/Tina together… Thanks for posting….
now why would you be soooooo cruel and just leave it there. Still I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!! and seeing how it is your birhtday i will not give you a guilt trip…..this time : )
Just catching up…Loving the story. PSS!
V…..V….Sssssssshhhhhssssshhh ssshhsshshsh….V……V..can you hear me….V…….please confirm….Vee—–! Hurry back :)!
VVVVV! It’s hillarious! How did you find time to do it admist your work? SLACKER! Oh yar, I loved the part on “Ahem, the room formerly…” BRILLIANT! :D
great work V as always but much toooooooooooooo short babes. LOL. Post soon please
V tht was amazing….I really cant wait to read your next post….Wow unless a tattoo is discreetly placed it cud get you in tricky situations…..brilliant absolutly brilliant read
That’s it? That’s all you’re giving us?? Vvitchy that is sooo bad!! I loved this latest though keep up th e good work!!
What they said! Can’t wait for your next installment! BTW, double dating would be too many kinds of wrong!
wow, I’m sooo in love with this fic :D It’s so funny and hilarious :P Great job, vicky, you’re talented for comedy!! And I can’t wait to see Bette and Tina to go out with the two twin sisters LOL LOL I’m so grateful you decided to end B&T pairing without problems :D
tonight was dedicated to all your stories! put a bib on me ’cause I want more! the ease and clicking between Helena and Bette
hey = half my comment got destroyed! “…clicking between Helena and Bette (love!) the exchanging of remarks between Bette and Estelle (love!) the love Estelle has for Tina (teehee!) I bet Alice is going to be the last to find out about the twins, huh? heh heh heh
Was catching up with this one after my holidays. I don’t know why, but this story is for my brain the most challenging thing I’ve ever read in thefanfic section. I really really like this one, it’s so full of humor and plot wendings that I can hardly keep up with it. And then again all those cliffhangers, girl you’re wearing me out. Now I can’t hardly wait for the next chapter, sure hope it will come very soon. If it was for me, you win the next “Best Humor -Laffing Like A Loon Award-“.
hey niki…Shhhhshshhh…yeah i can hear you…shhhhh… *grin* hey look the connection’s clear! heheh..sorry about the long wait for the next chapter. sorry guys, but the big deadline for uni is within a week so i’m a bit stressed about that! but i DO hope to post soon! not long now, ok? ok? thanks for understanding! :) cheers, v
Alritey i think i’m a tad bit late commenting on this, but i am completely loving this, please oh please have them meet in DC! Here’s hoping you get all your work done so you can hurry and post the next chappy!! Cheers!