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Double Vision 5
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Previously…
Helena snuck around the side, and entered the yard of the house next door. It was a grungy house with a shed, and Helena wondered fleetingly who lived there. But she brushed this thought aside before it registered; more intent on the task of looking over the fence into Bette’s pool. She peered and saw that the bay windows leading to the pool were open, leaving her with a view of the girls seated around the living room. Helena squinted, trying to make out which of the girls were there. She saw Estelle, Bette…
“Interesting” came a voice from right behind her. “I see you in there, and yet I see you right here too. Now how can that be, Helena?”
Chapter 5
“Jane?”
“What?”
Ok wrong name…fuck! Helena tried frantically to remember the doe-eyed young woman’s name. Yes, the same young woman now standing in front of her with an expression that was a cross between amusement and oh-this-I-have-to-hear.
“Want to try again?” Jenny tilted her head to the side and smirked at the woman who obviously didn’t know her.
“Janet?” Helena tried again, still hoping she could salvage the situation. A little voice informed her that she should also be thinking of a good excuse for not knowing the girl’s name. Amnesia perhaps? suggested the voice helpfully.
“Nope” Jenny grinned, before adding “you’re not Helena”
“Aha! I am!” Cried Helena, thinking it gave her some sort of an upper hand. Hmm, maybe not.
“No you’re not”
“I am, I’m quite sure!” laughed Helena, finding the girl’s quirkiness charming. “Call it even?”
“Sure” Jenny grinned and held out a hand “I’m Jenny”
“Ah! Jenny! That would’ve been my next guess. Helena Peabody” Helena shook the offered hand and smiled.
Jenny walked to the fence Helena was looking over a minute ago and said casually “So why are we spying on the girls and why is there someone who looks remarkably like you?”
Helena joined her by the fence, responding just as casually “Yes, that tends to happen with identical twins”
“Hah! I’m guessing it was your sister who’s been here all this time? Never noticed that humour before”
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you cant stop there dude.now how long are you gonna hang us on tht cliff hangerwould you be a sweety and post soon coz this is a really intrestin story i usually dun do betty helena hookups but am kinduff likin this one lolwhat a smart banter
tattoo? mole? birthmark? come give!Pansy??? Pansy??? nope no more soup for you! and you purposely made it Jenny and not Shane…shame on you!!…p.s it’s after the tailgate party…I’m a bit tipsy!!!!
okay…so now i can safely guess Tina is next….right? and who is next to Tina…ummmm….my guess go to…..da da…..Shane….this’s really interesting….read ur story like play a puzzle game…..hahahha………
Cool! I think Shane would be next. Tina would be the last! :D Helena’s bare back?! Ho ho ho! Great work V!
*looking around suspiciously* secret message 1: The brown cow moos loudly after dusk. Please keep this one on the DL b’c if this leaks…someone will surely die…LOL. Jenny, very cool….I’m lovin’ it. Yeah, you provided me with the “laughs I need” (note: new code LIN), but I need them with more frequency so please post soon and post often…..Out.
Hey, this is one brilliant chapter! But then again, all your chapters are wonderful…your writing is definately fantastic…and another cliffhanger…grrr…make sure you post soon right…can’t wait to see what happens next!
So Tina knows that that is someome different. Jenny was so cool. how can you be so cool around someone you are breaking up with? Bette and Tina never crease to amaze me. thanks
Sad to see B&T split. Jenny is cool and funny and now Tina find something is wrong and let see whats next, thanks!
Watch out. Tina’s gonna find out. I hope Helena is quick on her feet with the missing body mark. I can feel the B&H love coming on. (Yes!!!!Pumping arm ala Tiger Woods)
Whaoooo ! Very nice chapter Vvith ! I just can’t believe I had not seen sooner that you had posted this chapter 10 days ago. Only today, when I saw that you had posted chapter 6 ( and got so excited ) have I realised I had missed chapter 5. Anyway, I loved it! The continual squabbling, bickering and teasing between Estelle and Bette just crack me up ! And that sentence : “Bette was being comforted by Alice, though it seemed like it was the other way around ” had me laughing my ass off, since I can totally picture that !! Now, I only hope Tina’s not gonna get too annoying once she realizes B & H are really getting along quite well… Thank you for this great chapter Vvitch . Ok, off to read your latest installment now…
oh oh there we go again what is it now huh? I guess Helena is usted for real now as Tina is the one who can now as she has seen her naked before LOL. Great job V, please go on
oh, I love this one sooo much :D I laugh out really loud every few lines I read :P Thanks so much for bringing us this and I really hope you’re getting into a Belena direction :D Keep it up and thanks again!
that was funny…jenny was so jenny- very funny. the entire bette, helena and estelle dynamic is written very well. please post soon!!
What happened…we were just about to find out what Tina saw and then the page ended…WTF. What’s the point in hiding anymore. For some reason Tina likes Estelle…and Bette and Helena are getting along swimmingly…time to unveil the surprise…sad to see B&T split. They seem to have the same taste in women. Please post soon
That was so funny you did a great job, especially with Jenny… I’m happy for Bette, now she is free to be with Helena! I can’t wait to the next chapter I’m really curious!!!
Yes yes i’m alive, and totally loving this fic!! she’s missing a tattoo isn’t she, yep that’s it, or maybe a scar, hmmm… well it’s something! Post soon please this is one of my absolute favourites!!
I missed this post, too! Not sure how that happened, but like clarice, I didn’t notice it until I started reading the newest one! Great, great, great! Now, off to the next post!