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Double Vision 7
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Bette gazed at Helena in surprise. Is it me or did Helena just…Bette shook her head. Must be wishful thinking on my part. She made an attempt to lighten the mood, “So! What brings you here tonight?”
“I was looking for… some company for tonight” Helena replied with a self-conscious laugh.
Bette laughed and tried to make Helena feel more at ease “Ok let’s see. Have you been adequately inebriated?”
“I have! Can you not tell?”
“I had an inkling” winked Bette. It was true; Helena did seem a little tipsy and probably wouldn’t want to take anyone home, but Bette carried the conversation anyway. “Right. Let’s survey the candidates”
“Already have”
“And?”
“Nothing” huffed Helena.
“Nothing? No one to your liking?” Bette was surprised, but a little relieved she had to admit, it stamped out the little jealous fires that were cropping up.
“Nope”
“Helena! Your standards are too high!”
“They are indeed” smirked Helena.
Enjoying this side of Helena immensely, Bette asked “So if you can’t find anything here, just where do you hope to find what you want?”
“Oh I’ve found it” said Helena suddenly turning to face Bette, her eyes ablaze.
The look taking her breath away, Bette sat amazed. She was a breath away from claiming Helena’s lips with her own. It would be so easy intruded the tempting thought. She wants you, you want her. But… gazing back into Helena’s eyes, Bette could see the hints of alcohol, making those eyes glaze a lot more than slightly.
Despite her wavering control over focusing, Helena could see that Bette was hesitating. And it was a blow right to the heart. She doesn’t want me…
“Helena…I don’t think…” I want to do this right
“It’s alright” interrupted Helena, offering a weak smile “my standards are too high”
~~~
“You don’t think so?”
“I don’t”
“Oh come on!”
“I’m sure of it”
“Really?”
“Mm hmm”
“Hmm” said Estelle as she leaned back in her chair, still glaring at Jenny quizzically “We’ll see who’s right then”
“We sure will” Jenny smiled at Estelle, whose company she was actually enjoying. Estelle had come round to Jenny’s house after helping Tina pack her things for the move.
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Yay first LOL. Good job V, this was again one very delightfull chapter. So who busted them this time our dear friende nosy nose AL??? LOL. Please don’t wait that long again to post another chapter although we understood you were really busy.
I really love this story, VVitch. I can’t wait for Shane to find out about Estelle and Helena. I certainly hope Bette’ll just toss caution to the wind and throw Helena on some flat surface and have her way with her. Great job.
Funny about Helena and Estelle, they all comfuse about these twin and now whos come behide them, Alice lol. Helena and Bette should talk and tell each other about their feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
I’m so glad to see you continue this story Master V. I do believe Yoda Shane has figured out the mystery twins. I like the pace you are keeping the story. Very, very excellent job
phew! I might die a little inside if Helena continued on thinking Bette’s rejecting her… some kind of pheramone must be released when these two get together ’cause someone’s always there to catch them pwahah (Uh…well, I *wasn’t* going to comment so that you’ll have less work to do next time, but oh well…)
*waving* Yey V!! Glad you were able to come up for air and agreed to my proposal without me having to flex any muscle. I am so enjoying this as always. Who? I agree, Shane or Al. This indeed was not the KOD…just a sweet smooch ;)!
okay, that was so cute, but you gotta stop leaving us hanging for sooooo long….because this is soooo good. b&h have such chemistry. post soon. THANKS!
Yippi ! Yippi ! I’m so glad you’ve updated, Vvitch. I’m so enjoying your story ! Really, I already loved it in the very beginning, but it just keeps getting better and better… I am officially totally addicted !Anyway, about the cliffhanger, I too think it’s Shane, even though it would be more typical of Alice to make that kind of ( theatrical ) entrance ! LOL ! Thanks again for sharing your gift with us !
First off, official congrats this time! Second, great update! I love this story. I think it’s Kit–just to be different. But this story is really wonderful–I like how you’re bringing in all the girls and their take on what they think they see. Also like how you’re getting into their inner thoughts. Love those cliffhangers! Will I be right? And definitely post your next chapter immediately to make up for that far-too-long wait!
Fantastic chapter V!! Funny as hell, as usual! I LOVE your writing, your just so damn good at it! Eeerrmm i’m going to go with Shane too. i’m with Pands, i too would love Tina to suffer and be jealous. Congrats on finishing your dissertation, and being done with uni, you clever clogs you! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
i think youre flirting with the rating lines there buddy cuz for a minute i was all ” shouldnt this be an NC-17 LOL. Yeah i like speedy’s idea as well!!!! I love this story though!!!!!!!!
Just a quick note to what adumgenius said: Nooooo! Don’t avoid commenting to give me less work! i LIKE work, so do comment!!! :D Ok now that I’m here, many thanks to those who commented so far: BeL, Speedie, ut, Squirl, Dum, Niki, Choc (sweetie, I’m so very sorry for leaving u hanging! It won’t happen again, I’ll try my very hardest, ok? ok?)
vvitch, again a splendid chapter. After Bette seeing Helena in despair, Barbara wasn’t even in the picture anymore. Great character analysis. I just love Helena but I have also a weak spot for Estelle. It’s Estelle who is adressing them isn’t it?
Okie, I was instructed to use the next 3 minutes you have to leave a nice comment at your fic, but YEAH! I was meaning to msg u at work, but was busy. You want to know what I honestly think? It’s fantastic! Your writing style has evolved strongly into something that is sentimental, but not too angsty. I like the whole flow. The emotions of Helena and Bette, how they slowly realise that they can’t be without each toher… You get the drift. Fantastic work V. Great! loved it!
First off, I was a bit surprised by the sex scene…not that it wasn’t good…because a-hem..it was ..just that I was at work and read it…and got all flustered…hehehehe I feel bad for Helena thinking Bette doesn’t want her…I feel bad that Bette is still thinking about what all went wrong…I’m glad Bette didn’t sleep with the Sentor, AND I want Bette and Helena together now…ok? Also it’s just me maybe but I really want Tina to suffer and get jealous…but that’s just me…probably…Great job, keep up the good work, I eagerly await your next post!
pms i bet it was al
ohh, actually a little bumby, this chapter :D Indeed really really enjoying, as usual with you :) I only hope you can straight this big misunderstanding that is keeping those two beauties (Bette and Helena, of course :grin: ) from getting down on each other LOL And I must admin that I’m starting to like Estella as well, her nerve and wild spirit are always a bit lovely too me even when I hated her for all the shit toward Bette :P Good work, vicky :grin: Thanks a lot
Another masterpiece and a HOT one at it too!!! I like Speed_Racer’s idea a lot :) This is another brilliant chapter v. Just love the way you write and most especially your unique descriptions. Great stuff and can’t wait to see what you’ve got in store for us next! So, is it Shane?