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Double Vision 7
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Jenny laughed “You know her well!”
“Well yes, we’re kind of related, my twin and I” the reply dripped with sarcasm. “Hence, she would not be in state to charm her way to Bette”
“Who’s charming her way to Bette?” Estelle and Jenny both looked up startled to see a dishevelled Shane enter the room.
Shane flopped down on the couch next to Jenny and regarded the other two women curiously. What the hell is going on here? First Helena is laughing with Bette and now she’s buddy-buddy with Jenny?
Estelle racked her brains for an answer and said the first thing that came to her mind “Uhh… Tina?”
“Tina??!”
Shit. Good going Estelle
“Why would Tina be charming her way to Bette? They just broke up, didn’t they? You’re telling me Tina wants to get back together with Bette?” asked Shane her voice rising unnaturally in her alarm. She knew lesbians had their drama but really, this was a bit much.
“No!” replied Estelle, a bit louder than she intended. No one was getting to Tina before her!
“Then?” Shane was utterly confused. She looked back and forth between ‘Helena’ and Jenny.
Help! Estelle looked frantically at Jenny, who seemed to be giving her a what-the-hell-are-you-doing?! look. Thankfully, before Estelle could make a bad situation worse, Shane spoke again.
“Anyway, I thought you were interested in Bette”
Estelle burst out laughing. “Me? Interested in Bette?” The thought tickled her way too much to consider that Shane had indeed observed her twin making eyes at Bette.
Shane narrowed her eyes “So…no?”
“Not bloody likely”
“I see” said Shane, leaning back in her seat, deep in thought.
Uh oh thought Jenny as she eyed her friend. Shouldn’t have said that, Estelle. Now Shane is really going to know how different you and Helena act around Bette
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(Next day, everyone back in WeHo, finally)
Bette walked into the Planet, needing an urgent session of am-I-really-falling-for-her with Kit. And ran smack bang into the topic of discussion. “Helena!”
Helena recovered from her too-close-for-sanity proximity with Bette. “Bette, hi. I was uhh… just waiting for Alice. I’m going to take her to yoga”
Realising that Helena was still embarrassed and hurt at being let down that night in DC, Bette decided to skip the niceties. “Helena… about that night…” please tell me you understand
“Oh please… it’s alright. I was just… being silly” said Helena cringing at the recollection.
“No no, you weren’t. It’s just that…” fuck! Bette tried to frantically recall her lost vocabulary.
“Bette, please. Let’s not talk about this”
Tell her you want to do this right! urged on the little voice. “Helena. It’s just that I want to…” Not again!! Bette’s jaw dropped as the song playing in the background made itself heard.
“What? What is it?” asked Helena, seeing Bette’s sudden change.
This…this song!” Bette sputtered, hardly believing her ears. “This song is following me around! I heard it at the bar the other night and before that too, when…” Bette trailed off as it finally dawned on her.
“When?” prompted Helena, wanting to know too.
“Everytime I see you, actually” said Bette, surprised that she didn’t realise that she’d indeed heard the song the last three times she’d seen Helena. She tilted her head as the song finally reached the chorus
I know you love me
And soon you will see
You were meant for me
And I was meant for you…
Helena listened, touched beyond words. She felt all words flee her when she heard when she heard Bette say softly.
“Very apt”
They were both so wrapped in The Moment that neither of them was expecting to hear a triumphant exclamation coming from behind them:
“I knew it!!!”
(tbc)
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Yay first LOL. Good job V, this was again one very delightfull chapter. So who busted them this time our dear friende nosy nose AL??? LOL. Please don’t wait that long again to post another chapter although we understood you were really busy.
I really love this story, VVitch. I can’t wait for Shane to find out about Estelle and Helena. I certainly hope Bette’ll just toss caution to the wind and throw Helena on some flat surface and have her way with her. Great job.
Funny about Helena and Estelle, they all comfuse about these twin and now whos come behide them, Alice lol. Helena and Bette should talk and tell each other about their feeling. OK post soon please, thanks!
I’m so glad to see you continue this story Master V. I do believe Yoda Shane has figured out the mystery twins. I like the pace you are keeping the story. Very, very excellent job
phew! I might die a little inside if Helena continued on thinking Bette’s rejecting her… some kind of pheramone must be released when these two get together ’cause someone’s always there to catch them pwahah (Uh…well, I *wasn’t* going to comment so that you’ll have less work to do next time, but oh well…)
*waving* Yey V!! Glad you were able to come up for air and agreed to my proposal without me having to flex any muscle. I am so enjoying this as always. Who? I agree, Shane or Al. This indeed was not the KOD…just a sweet smooch ;)!
okay, that was so cute, but you gotta stop leaving us hanging for sooooo long….because this is soooo good. b&h have such chemistry. post soon. THANKS!
Yippi ! Yippi ! I’m so glad you’ve updated, Vvitch. I’m so enjoying your story ! Really, I already loved it in the very beginning, but it just keeps getting better and better… I am officially totally addicted !Anyway, about the cliffhanger, I too think it’s Shane, even though it would be more typical of Alice to make that kind of ( theatrical ) entrance ! LOL ! Thanks again for sharing your gift with us !
First off, official congrats this time! Second, great update! I love this story. I think it’s Kit–just to be different. But this story is really wonderful–I like how you’re bringing in all the girls and their take on what they think they see. Also like how you’re getting into their inner thoughts. Love those cliffhangers! Will I be right? And definitely post your next chapter immediately to make up for that far-too-long wait!
Fantastic chapter V!! Funny as hell, as usual! I LOVE your writing, your just so damn good at it! Eeerrmm i’m going to go with Shane too. i’m with Pands, i too would love Tina to suffer and be jealous. Congrats on finishing your dissertation, and being done with uni, you clever clogs you! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
i think youre flirting with the rating lines there buddy cuz for a minute i was all ” shouldnt this be an NC-17 LOL. Yeah i like speedy’s idea as well!!!! I love this story though!!!!!!!!
Just a quick note to what adumgenius said: Nooooo! Don’t avoid commenting to give me less work! i LIKE work, so do comment!!! :D Ok now that I’m here, many thanks to those who commented so far: BeL, Speedie, ut, Squirl, Dum, Niki, Choc (sweetie, I’m so very sorry for leaving u hanging! It won’t happen again, I’ll try my very hardest, ok? ok?)
vvitch, again a splendid chapter. After Bette seeing Helena in despair, Barbara wasn’t even in the picture anymore. Great character analysis. I just love Helena but I have also a weak spot for Estelle. It’s Estelle who is adressing them isn’t it?
Okie, I was instructed to use the next 3 minutes you have to leave a nice comment at your fic, but YEAH! I was meaning to msg u at work, but was busy. You want to know what I honestly think? It’s fantastic! Your writing style has evolved strongly into something that is sentimental, but not too angsty. I like the whole flow. The emotions of Helena and Bette, how they slowly realise that they can’t be without each toher… You get the drift. Fantastic work V. Great! loved it!
First off, I was a bit surprised by the sex scene…not that it wasn’t good…because a-hem..it was ..just that I was at work and read it…and got all flustered…hehehehe I feel bad for Helena thinking Bette doesn’t want her…I feel bad that Bette is still thinking about what all went wrong…I’m glad Bette didn’t sleep with the Sentor, AND I want Bette and Helena together now…ok? Also it’s just me maybe but I really want Tina to suffer and get jealous…but that’s just me…probably…Great job, keep up the good work, I eagerly await your next post!
pms i bet it was al
ohh, actually a little bumby, this chapter :D Indeed really really enjoying, as usual with you :) I only hope you can straight this big misunderstanding that is keeping those two beauties (Bette and Helena, of course :grin: ) from getting down on each other LOL And I must admin that I’m starting to like Estella as well, her nerve and wild spirit are always a bit lovely too me even when I hated her for all the shit toward Bette :P Good work, vicky :grin: Thanks a lot
Another masterpiece and a HOT one at it too!!! I like Speed_Racer’s idea a lot :) This is another brilliant chapter v. Just love the way you write and most especially your unique descriptions. Great stuff and can’t wait to see what you’ve got in store for us next! So, is it Shane?