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Drenched Ch 5
“Fuck, Shane…uunnnhhh!” Tina was rapidly losing control of the situation and her body so she quickly grabbed the bottom of Shane’s t-shirt and pulled it off her body. At the same time Shane pushed Tina’s pants down her ass and was presently assisted in the completion of this task by Bette.
Regaining the control she craved, Tina pressed Shane’s wrists to the bed and sucked her nipple into her mouth as she cultivated a slow grind of her drenched center against Shane’s hard-on.
Shane wasn’t prepared to acquiesce so easily; hence she sat up, pulled Tina’s vulva tighter in and pressed her erection to it as she drew Tina’s mouth away from her breast into a highly charged duel of a kiss.
Refusing to wait any longer, Tina did as Bette had instructed. She took what she wanted. She released the button of Shane’s fly and unzipped the shiny black dildo to its full 7 inches.
“Oh my fucking God,” Tina almost screamed as she took and Shane thrust the shaft without one iota of hesitation into her drenched core.
Bette had by this time placed her body behind Shane’s on the bed, and had begun pressing her breasts into Shane’s back. She kissed and sucked the skin of Shane’s neck and shoulders as she pinched her nipples.
Between the almost unbearable headiness of Bette’s actions and the sight, feel and fuck of Tina about to explode in her lap, Shane decided to give it up to the women who had her in the thrall of the most erotic episode she had never imagined.
Tina tried to keep her eyes open as she ascended the shaft and the limits of her ability to stave off sexual rapture; staring directly into Bette’s eyes and sharing the mind-boggling intensity of this moment.
Bette’s thumb circled Tina’s engorged clit as the shaft of Shane’s dildo stroked excruciating pulses of pleasure into her core. Bette enclosed Shane in the warmth of her sensual safe harbor, stimulated her breasts and her senses beyond reason; slipping her hand down between sweaty bellies to assist Shane in the premeditated undoing of the woman she loved.
“Holy fuuuuuuuuck! Shaaaaaaaaaaaaane!!! Baaaaby!!!!!!!!!!” Tina screamed as her body was tossed over the precipice of a mounting erotic force that was sooo fucking good until the convulsions of her orgasm took it right off the map.
Without a sound Shane’s entire body shook, arching itself back into Bette; her head pressed close and helpless against her shoulder.
“I’ve got you,” Bette soothed as she cradled Shane through her unwinding and grasped Tina’s back as she fell into Shane, breathing hard and trembling.
“Fuuuck!” was all Shane could say.
TBC
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(53 votes, average: 3.66 out of 5)
THUD. I don’t have the energy to write anythiing eles. I’m out of breath.
I have to admit, I didn’t think I would like the BTS three-way, but OMFG that was hot. Bring on the other two wishes!
coop…talk about having friends w/benefits! Ilove your NC-17s b/c they are bold and different and nuclear hot. Not everyone’s cup of tea but definitely creative and isn’t that what good sex is all about. You have writing skills and that’s what separates your stories from some other NC-17s.
wow…wow…so erotic…pretty good…
Very arousing!
Holy fucking cow, this is so fucking hot and I need to take a cold shower now, damn damn damn. So good and please post soon, thanks!
Running to the shower as fast as I can without killing myself by running into furniture on the way.
Still don’t agree, but thats just me, BUT WAS HOTT AS HELL, AND I HAVE A FEELING U AINT DONE YET!!!!!
Oh my damn! My body temp just shot up 25 degrees. That was some writing! On to the next wish!
I was so happy to see you post the next chap to this story. It has become my FAVORITE ! Very , very hot…whew ! Shane is not my type, but after what Tina and Bette just did with her, she’s looking pretty good. Can’t wait to read what Tina and Shane wish for ??? You have a great imagination and have such a gift for communicating your thoughts to words. Post again real soon and thanks for making my evening.
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCCKKKKKKKKK is all i can say as well…
lacoop u outdone urself with this one more plz more
OK I know I commented this a couple of chapters ago, but THIS is now one of the hottest chapters I’ve ever read and PLEASE do not let it stop here!
Okay girl, what are you trying to do…kill me???? That was so HOT, I need to go take a cold shower!!!
OMG!!! shanes comment at the end summed that up! lol great read!
OH MY F*CKING GOD! HOT does not convey how arousing that was! I am definitely into reading your chapters multiple times. Good Lord, I love this! I wish I could be sitting in the shadows of the room, watching and listening and using every sense I have to take in that lovemaking session! Now, that would be some episode on the show! Got Damn, that was exciting! Please post again soon! I am so anxoius to see what the others wish for when it’s their turn. This is a hotter than hot threesome! God, I love brunettes! Mmmm… mmmmmm! Thanks for this fantasy! I’m lovin it!
Whoa… that came smoking hot out of left field!
Hey there! OK so I don’t usually read your stroy between trying to write mine and real life but for some odd reason your summary prompted me to come in here…add to that the rating no doubt. All I can say is..OMFG! That was VERY arousing and how happy I am to be jumping in a cold pool in about 10 minutes! I wouldn’t have paired Shane with Bette and Tina to do a threesome, but shit now I want that on the show! GOod writing..keep it up!
i never understood why a couple who is happy in love have the need to get someone else to participate in something so private as making love? if they were in trouble or needed to improve their sex life, then i could see why would they invite shane to do a 3-some but B&T seemed to be fine doing it by themselves in previous chapter…i could never share someone i love with anyone else…call me old-fashioned or whatever…sorry, just not my cup of tea
holy shit coop are you fuckin tryin to kill me with freakin hot as fcuk fanficomfg …..my ac is on and i am sweatin like am in sahara :) dude you rock …i need to take care of myselfbye
O-MY-MUDDDDDDAAAAAAA-FUCCCKKKKIINNNG-GGOD! Lacoop that was HOTTT I actually had to pause for a couple mins to get my heartrate down which is still goin! Despite my feelings on the shane threesome that was the shiznick! More please!
Despite my trepidations about a BTS threeway, gotta admit, that’s was awfully fantastic………………..
Hot…hot…hot. As always, fucking HOT! I’m off to shower. Thanks for shifting my brain backwards…lol. Fucking awesome. P.P.S.
I as I have said before think that Bette and Shane together would be soooo hot, as a one time thing, and was glad to see this chapter, even though Tina was included. I don’t like the use of the strap on and it ruined it for me. Oh well.
Ohhhhhhh Yeah!Shane and tibette mmmmm!Nice One!
that was fucking hottttttttttttttttttt just B&T nobody else ok
That was interesting. But I think I prefer B&T as the jealous/no sharing type.
FUUUUUCK!!!!!! My computer just melted, that was so hot……I think I’ll go in and wake up my GF now :o)) Please post very very soon, it’s a great idea about the 3 wishes.
BTW – the movie ‘Inside man’ is really great and Jodie Foster….WOW LOL.
i think you just set my computer on fire!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!