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Drenched Ch 6
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“I love you, T.”
“I love you too.” Tina said, suddenly feeling the need to check in, given the extraordinary nature of this evening’s turn of events.
“Go to her, baby.” Tina whispered.
Bette was awestruck by the beauty of the outdoor light illuminating Shane’s fair skinned upper body. Approaching her with care, Bette lightly slipped her fingers into the hand that hung at Shane’s side. Then she stepped into Shane’s line of sight and very simply and lovingly looked into her eyes. Setting their beers aside, she placed her lips right up to Shane’s ear and, for the second time tonight, asked,
“May I kiss you?” …and it was equally moving to both women when Shane eyelids dropped and she uttered,
“Please.”
With infinite gentleness Bette brought her lips to graze just barely against Shane’s. Their breathing hitched as Bette let the tip of her tongue brush against Shane’s full bottom lip. As electricity charged the air between them Bette hovered just out of reach, forcing Shane to come to her. As she did their nipples skimmed and a sharp intake of breath by Tina triggered a battle of wills between the two brunettes, to see who could suck the other’s tongue into her mouth first.
Able to restrainer herself no longer, Shane lifted her hands to Bette’s breasts testing their weight and superb softness before using tentative fingertips to gauge the affects of what she was doing. Restraint was the essence of Tina’s being right now, as she was nothing less than spellbound in voyeuristic nirvana.
“God!” Bette moaned, leaving no doubt in Shane or Tina’s minds how turned-on she was. Stilling Shane’s hands and pulling back from the kiss to drag her mouth to the pulse point on Shane’s neck; Bette sucked, licked and then whispered,
“Can I taste you…fuck, I need to taste you!”
“Uuunhh…!” Shane felt a gush of silken fluid in her pants at the mere mention, yet was still on edge about letting go so totally.
“Please…baby…I want to make you come so bad”
In that instant Shane’s ache for release at the hands (and mouth) of this exquisite woman toppled every other instinct in her mind or body.
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Hot damn… speechless here.
i’m with gumby… standing in that line… holy fuck… this has to be a dream… tina will be waking up… or shane will be waking up… why i say its a dream… shane just happened to be packing… she said she wasn’t going anywhere… but this is too hot… dam girl… to have both bette abd tina on you at the same time… i think we all would die and be in heavin… please continue
Oh Lacoop…you are so bad! I saw your post and did a happy dance. I knew it was going to be HOT, but you always amaze me with how HOT your writing is. You definately have to win a fanfic award for this story. It is absolutely SMOKING. Actually, they should come up with a Totally Smoking Award, and hands down this story would win. Thanks again for delighting me with such a great chapter. ( great big hug for you)
I’m with gumby, where’s the line?! Who do you have to talk to to get in this line?
Well, gurl…you’ve gone where no man or woman has gone before! LOL. It not just NC-17, it’s beyond just sex and fucking. It’s edgy and has a quality that is difficult to describe. It’s the essence of sex, just pure pleasure shared among friends. And these ladies do not hold back!!! Can’t wait for Bette’s fantasy.
Love it – love it – love it -its my total fantasy of Shane and Bette together (thats why I wrote a fanfic about it ) – but yours is so great. Please keep it goin ‘specially Shaney babe and Bette.ThanksSee yaFAY
Damn that is all that I can say. It was erotically hot and sexy. I wonder what Shane’s wish is going to be. Maybe take Bette the same way the she took Tina.
This is THE hottest story out there! I wish I were Shane. WOW, WOW, WOW! **THUD**
I’m bowing to you, LaCoop. That was seriously hot..
OH my god…I am gonna be tossing and turning all night. This was so hot! I bet Shane was like “what did I do to deserve this?…I just came over to say hello”…I don’t know if I can even take the 3rd wish…oh my damn! *One eye open* okay I am ready bring it on….
sweet jesus
i had to re read your story again to have a delightfull night….Line who doi have to talk to get in line i would so love to be the freakin fly on the wall to watch this sizzlin caring and sharing between friendsby far this is the most hottest story i have read on fanfichats off
Ow my! Wow I don’t know what else to say. So I do hope Shane gets to do to Bette what she asked with your words and my visual imagination, WOW.
Fantasy is GREAT.
Damn so fucking hot!!!!!!!!!
OMG ….Why do you do this babe…Right before i have to start work…its so not gonna be fuckin easy to concentrate on work while thinking all day abt one ms Shane mccutcheon gettin Double treat from b and t…I dun even have time for a cold shower anymore…loved the post
Is there a line forming behind Shane for turns? I’d like to stand in line to be worshiped by Bette and Tina TOGETHER! WOW….so worth taking a break for!
Got f*cking damn! You know, I love being a voyuer and your chapters never cease to amaze me. Sh*t,this is one SCORCHING story! Good, Lord, need I say, “Please continue?” I am lovin every word of this! Ok, as always, I gotta go read this again! =) Just so you know…. YOU F*CKIN SIZZLE BABY!
hotttttttttttttttttt
*thud* Damn! That was a nice break! Post soon!
Dang! I just decided to click on this and WOW! I’m another true Tibetter, but this was HOT HOT HOT! Guess I’ll have to go back and read the rest. Good thing I’m in my office alone…
yeah ma still here, the sex scene is good, I’ll admit, but I still don’t go for B & T with anyone elsE. BUT THATS JUST ME, SO NOW I ASSUME IT’S BETTE’S TRUN CUMMIN UP????????
dang you never seize to amaze, here it is i didnt think the story could get any hotter but alas it did
Absolutely incredibly HOT. So now Shane gets the 3rd wish????? I hope it involves Bette or all 2 together. Great story.
Like arkaycee I’m a true B&T girl, but this is so fucking hot and utterly sexy….WOW!!!!! I would give anything to be in Shane place right now LOL. More please and soon because I think Bette is ready to burst….
for the first time in my life, i am so damn jealous of shane!!!!!!!