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Drenched Ch 6
“Fuck yesss!”
Bette nibbled and licked her way from Shane’s neck to her sternum. She licked all around her breasts, intentionally avoiding the nipples while she unbuttoned and unzipped her jeans. Sliding her hands around Shane’s ass as she pushed the pants lower, Bette couldn’t help but pull her in and press the now exposed strap-on against her vulva.
“Holy fuck!” Bette breathed; her need for a release of her own ticking like a time bomb.
Bette’s utterance caused Shane to buck into her insisting, “Bette, let me fuck you!”
“No, this is Tina’s wish remember…and it’s about you…and I want you…my way” Bette gasped as she expertly unbuckled the side strap securing the dildo to Shane’s body. Done teasing Shane’s breasts, she unrepentantly sucked her right nipple into her mouth as the toy and Shane’s pants dropped to the floor.
“Unnnnhh…Jesus…then don’t make me wait, PLEASE!”
Never one to deny such an insistent plea, Bette dropped to her knees and sucked the soft flesh of Shane’s inner thigh into her mouth, leaving her mark and absorbing the juices flowing down. She then pressed her nose into the crevice between Shane’s outer labia and her soft, moist thighs, licking, sucking and breathing her in.
Tina had, at this point, reached the limits of her self-control. She had an urgent and all-consuming need to aid and abet in the thorough undoing of one Shane McCutcheon.
As Bette’s tongue flicked the tip of Shane’s clit, Tina’s mouth made contact with the nape of her neck. Shane bucked her hips and moaned simultaneously leaning back into the most magnificent pair of breasts she had ever felt.
Her body was on sensory overload, but she needed it and wanted it and was letting it fill her to capacity as every stroke of Bette’s tongue brought her closer to complete and utter liberation. Unable to maintain her balance any longer, she propped her hands against the glass of the bedroom window as Tina’s tongue slipped into the crevice of her ass.
“Oh my fucking God” she cried out as Bette sucked mercilessly at her nub while Tina’s tongue stabbed into her core lapping her juices and tormenting her aching need.
Spread-eagled on the tip of two tongues, slow, insistent swipes of inexorable pleasure pressed in and around Shane’s clit and slit, sending her to the brink of unrelenting bliss. Bette and Tina did a little tongue dance with each other as they licked away any remaining traces of doubt from Shane’s body.
Three fingers of Tina’s hand slipped into Shane’s drenched core, twisting and pressing against her ribbed ecstatic treasure, tossing her head over heals right into the arms of the Goddess:
“Uuunnnnnnnhhh…Don’t Stoppppp! I don’t thinnnkk….I can take it if youuuuu STOPPPPPPP! Fuck meeeeee…..fuck mee……fuck me.”
Cum literally poured down Tina’s arm as her fingers were squeezed by the strong contractions at Shane’s core. Bette pulled away from her clit as she held Shane around the waist and absorbed her weight on her shoulders. Shuddering and shaking, Shane slowly came to her knees as Tina eased her fingers from her folds.
Bette brought Shane’s head to her shoulder as Tina held and kissed her from behind.
“We’ve got you sweetheart.” Tina intoned.
Bette raised Shane’s face to her own and kissed her sweetly on the brow and then the lips.
“We’ve got you…” Bette whispered.
“My God…do you ever…” Shane finally breathed.
TBC
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(54 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
Hot damn… speechless here.
i’m with gumby… standing in that line… holy fuck… this has to be a dream… tina will be waking up… or shane will be waking up… why i say its a dream… shane just happened to be packing… she said she wasn’t going anywhere… but this is too hot… dam girl… to have both bette abd tina on you at the same time… i think we all would die and be in heavin… please continue
Oh Lacoop…you are so bad! I saw your post and did a happy dance. I knew it was going to be HOT, but you always amaze me with how HOT your writing is. You definately have to win a fanfic award for this story. It is absolutely SMOKING. Actually, they should come up with a Totally Smoking Award, and hands down this story would win. Thanks again for delighting me with such a great chapter. ( great big hug for you)
I’m with gumby, where’s the line?! Who do you have to talk to to get in this line?
Well, gurl…you’ve gone where no man or woman has gone before! LOL. It not just NC-17, it’s beyond just sex and fucking. It’s edgy and has a quality that is difficult to describe. It’s the essence of sex, just pure pleasure shared among friends. And these ladies do not hold back!!! Can’t wait for Bette’s fantasy.
Love it – love it – love it -its my total fantasy of Shane and Bette together (thats why I wrote a fanfic about it ) – but yours is so great. Please keep it goin ‘specially Shaney babe and Bette.ThanksSee yaFAY
Damn that is all that I can say. It was erotically hot and sexy. I wonder what Shane’s wish is going to be. Maybe take Bette the same way the she took Tina.
This is THE hottest story out there! I wish I were Shane. WOW, WOW, WOW! **THUD**
I’m bowing to you, LaCoop. That was seriously hot..
OH my god…I am gonna be tossing and turning all night. This was so hot! I bet Shane was like “what did I do to deserve this?…I just came over to say hello”…I don’t know if I can even take the 3rd wish…oh my damn! *One eye open* okay I am ready bring it on….
sweet jesus
i had to re read your story again to have a delightfull night….Line who doi have to talk to get in line i would so love to be the freakin fly on the wall to watch this sizzlin caring and sharing between friendsby far this is the most hottest story i have read on fanfichats off
Ow my! Wow I don’t know what else to say. So I do hope Shane gets to do to Bette what she asked with your words and my visual imagination, WOW.
Fantasy is GREAT.
Damn so fucking hot!!!!!!!!!
OMG ….Why do you do this babe…Right before i have to start work…its so not gonna be fuckin easy to concentrate on work while thinking all day abt one ms Shane mccutcheon gettin Double treat from b and t…I dun even have time for a cold shower anymore…loved the post
Is there a line forming behind Shane for turns? I’d like to stand in line to be worshiped by Bette and Tina TOGETHER! WOW….so worth taking a break for!
Got f*cking damn! You know, I love being a voyuer and your chapters never cease to amaze me. Sh*t,this is one SCORCHING story! Good, Lord, need I say, “Please continue?” I am lovin every word of this! Ok, as always, I gotta go read this again! =) Just so you know…. YOU F*CKIN SIZZLE BABY!
hotttttttttttttttttt
*thud* Damn! That was a nice break! Post soon!
Dang! I just decided to click on this and WOW! I’m another true Tibetter, but this was HOT HOT HOT! Guess I’ll have to go back and read the rest. Good thing I’m in my office alone…
yeah ma still here, the sex scene is good, I’ll admit, but I still don’t go for B & T with anyone elsE. BUT THATS JUST ME, SO NOW I ASSUME IT’S BETTE’S TRUN CUMMIN UP????????
dang you never seize to amaze, here it is i didnt think the story could get any hotter but alas it did
Absolutely incredibly HOT. So now Shane gets the 3rd wish????? I hope it involves Bette or all 2 together. Great story.
Like arkaycee I’m a true B&T girl, but this is so fucking hot and utterly sexy….WOW!!!!! I would give anything to be in Shane place right now LOL. More please and soon because I think Bette is ready to burst….
for the first time in my life, i am so damn jealous of shane!!!!!!!