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Alice put her hand on Danas head, pulling it down towards herself so that Danas head resting on the couch and facing backwards at Alice, while Alice lowered her head to look at Dana, actually look upside down at Dana asked, Dane, can you nix the wine and make it a vodka tonic? I think its going to be a long night.
Dana was momentarily stunned by Alices proximity to her. A flood of memories came back to her in that moment, brought on by a combination of alcohol and laughter. Dana could smell the wine on Alices breath from this angle and her mind was brought to a place she had been trying shut out for days. Her haze was thankfully lifted when she heard someone talking to her. Dana?
Oh yeah, sorry. Ill go get it. Dana answered with a strained voice, rising from the floor, careful not to touch Alice.
Thanks, hon. But Bette was asking you to get her a drink.
Oh, yeah, Ill get that too. Wine, right Bette?
Bette started to softly laugh, Actually Dana, I asked if I could get a vodka too. I think I have a lot of catching up to do.
Oh, sorry. Yeah, Ill be back. Anyone else? Dana asked. When Shane and Tina both declined, she walked into the kitchen.
What was that about? Bette asked when Dana was in the kitchen.
Shane answered with a knowing smirk, Im not so sure Dana is so ready to walk away from the ace reporter over there yet.
Tina and Bette grinned and nodded in agreement with Shane, while Alice just sat silently. Very un-Alice like. So do you want to hear this story or what?
Not waiting for a response, Alice began, So my old editor told me about a friend of his, who went to a plastic surgeon for a breast reduction. She and the plastic surgeon planned and made an appointment for the surgery. She was going to go from a D to a B. Well, the doctor thought she shouldnt go any smaller than she was. Like a D is small, he should try carrying them around. It isnt fun.
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Great update.Bette needs to dump Robin.
As always another great update! Your description of how the group felt about each other is spot on.
K
Very cute of all of them. I agree, dump Robin ASAP.
lucia – great chapter – please please please don’t wait as long to post this time. it’s torture.
Bette needs to dump Robin ASAP. What a kill joy. Bette isn’t in love with her anyway…she is in love with Tina and should work in out with her. Then the family is back together and the good times can roll again. Dana needs to pay close attention to what happened in Bette and Tina’s relationship and decide if she can live the rest of her life without Alice. I don’t think she can, and I think Al will only take so much before she pulls a Tina and moves to Washington for good.
enjoyed throughly!
Another great chapter. Haha Dana is clever I bet she fell asleep in Alice’s bed on purpose. I cant wait for the danish to be together again! Please post really soon!!!!
just love it and I hope alice and dana get back together with tina’s help or by themselfs post soon
ok, first how can somebody believe can touch the sacred milky’s lol, of course except for Dana :P I still have hope, please post soon.
That was great. I agree that Bette needs to dump Robin. One of the things I like most about the show is the depth of their friendship. I think that really comes out in the story. Please post soon, I can’t wait to see what happens with Dana and Alice!
I’ve been completely remiss in leaving you feedback, but I just have to say that the Breast Reduction story was absolutely hilarious. And I loved Dana’s reaction to Alice asking her if she was okay sleeping downstairs. Aw. And then the ending. Aw. It really is those little things that make up a relationship, and I’m so thrilled with how you illustrate those points rather than making huge, grand statements, which are all very well and good, but ultimately sort of boring.
Anyway. Every chapter is an improvement on the previous chapter. This is one of those stories that just keeps getting better and better.
Great update and family scene. When will Dana see sense?
Lovely! I loved every bit of it. Now I am dying to see what Alice’s reaction to half dressed, pillow clutching Dana is going to be?!
I have to agree with the others. Robin has got to go, and our girls B&T must be together again. Can’t wait till your next posting.
Good fun. Bette wrestling Tina…Tina hugging too long? Sounds like they’re both getting a little grabby.
Robin can’t have a seat due to the stick up her arse, I think.
Yup…Bette needs to do some dumpage. Poor Alice and Dana.
Wake up Dana before you lose Al. I agree Robin needs to go! I know she’s jealous of Tina but she doesn’t seem to like the ‘family’ either. I think she will dump Bette.
I agree with the others… Robin’s gotta go! My favorite part (one of the best lines ever in my opinion): “Maybe a little.†She answered, “but just because I didn’t have a chance with Alice.†At this, Bette wrapped her arms around Tina and playfully wrestled her off of the couch.
I really enjoyed this. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to your conjured scenarios as this unfolds. Thanks!
Have been looking forward to this update, very nice…Robin’s not happy with Bette…dinner with Alice is going to be interesting…Bette and Tina hugged for a few seconds longer than needed that gives me hope! Looking forward to Bette meeting Cara for the first time what will this do to Bette?
Oh god i could go on with the question but i wont..can’t wait for the next chapter.
Thank you.
“There would be issues if she came home without her milky whites.†There sure would have been! I’m gonna have to agree with the consensus…AW!! To Dana lying in the bed. Are you sure your not evil also? I think you’ve been studying from my master for ending it where you did… :P
lovin’ this! can’t wait what happens next! please, don’t make us wait too long :) these cliffhangers are killing me ;)