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Cant argue with him on that! Dana added excitedly, they really are quite nice.
Hey, stop it, everyone is looking now.
Like they werent when you started the story Alice, please. Youre telling a story about your *****, did you think your ***** friends werent going to glance down? Dana said, defending herself.
Bette, who had finished her drink and started on another during this story, was openly gaping at Alices chest. She tried to pull her eyes away, but they were just drawn, Alice, shes right. We have been staring. And Ive seen them!
Tina lightly slapped Bette on the arm, Hey, stop embarrassing her and we dont need reminders about you and Alice. It was forever ago. I dont even know if it still counts.
Oh no, it counts, I remember it and it was good! Alice proudly stated. This warranted a slap from Dana and Tina.
Shane simply laughed, Tina, are you jealous?
Maybe a little. She answered, but just because I didnt have a chance with Alice. At this, Bette wrapped her arms around Tina and playfully wrestled her off of the couch.
The girls spent hours catching up, drinking, laughing and enjoying the brief glimpse into the life they all used to share. There was something about the five of them together that was home for all of them. They all had their lives and their homes now. They had even learned to enjoy the lives they had. But until they all sat in a room, like they hadnt for so long, even if just for a night, no one had noticed that the feeling of home had disappeared. Somehow over the last six years, slowly, that feeling of comfort was forgotten and replaced with a feeling of content. It happened so subtly, that no once even noticed it happened. Life had just changed and like with a death, over time, though you never forget what you lost, you can forget the actual feelings that went with what was lost. Youre left with a vague recollection of good times and warm feelings, but not the real deal.
Suddenly, through one brief few hours with friends, they were reminded of what they had given up. They lost themselves in the night. Telling stories like teenagers at a slumber party, except for the alcohol, which just loosened them up more. This new found feeling of home was disturbed when the doorbell rang.
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Great update.Bette needs to dump Robin.
As always another great update! Your description of how the group felt about each other is spot on.
K
Very cute of all of them. I agree, dump Robin ASAP.
lucia – great chapter – please please please don’t wait as long to post this time. it’s torture.
Bette needs to dump Robin ASAP. What a kill joy. Bette isn’t in love with her anyway…she is in love with Tina and should work in out with her. Then the family is back together and the good times can roll again. Dana needs to pay close attention to what happened in Bette and Tina’s relationship and decide if she can live the rest of her life without Alice. I don’t think she can, and I think Al will only take so much before she pulls a Tina and moves to Washington for good.
enjoyed throughly!
Another great chapter. Haha Dana is clever I bet she fell asleep in Alice’s bed on purpose. I cant wait for the danish to be together again! Please post really soon!!!!
just love it and I hope alice and dana get back together with tina’s help or by themselfs post soon
ok, first how can somebody believe can touch the sacred milky’s lol, of course except for Dana :P I still have hope, please post soon.
That was great. I agree that Bette needs to dump Robin. One of the things I like most about the show is the depth of their friendship. I think that really comes out in the story. Please post soon, I can’t wait to see what happens with Dana and Alice!
I’ve been completely remiss in leaving you feedback, but I just have to say that the Breast Reduction story was absolutely hilarious. And I loved Dana’s reaction to Alice asking her if she was okay sleeping downstairs. Aw. And then the ending. Aw. It really is those little things that make up a relationship, and I’m so thrilled with how you illustrate those points rather than making huge, grand statements, which are all very well and good, but ultimately sort of boring.
Anyway. Every chapter is an improvement on the previous chapter. This is one of those stories that just keeps getting better and better.
Great update and family scene. When will Dana see sense?
Lovely! I loved every bit of it. Now I am dying to see what Alice’s reaction to half dressed, pillow clutching Dana is going to be?!
I have to agree with the others. Robin has got to go, and our girls B&T must be together again. Can’t wait till your next posting.
Good fun. Bette wrestling Tina…Tina hugging too long? Sounds like they’re both getting a little grabby.
Robin can’t have a seat due to the stick up her arse, I think.
Yup…Bette needs to do some dumpage. Poor Alice and Dana.
Wake up Dana before you lose Al. I agree Robin needs to go! I know she’s jealous of Tina but she doesn’t seem to like the ‘family’ either. I think she will dump Bette.
I agree with the others… Robin’s gotta go! My favorite part (one of the best lines ever in my opinion): “Maybe a little.†She answered, “but just because I didn’t have a chance with Alice.†At this, Bette wrapped her arms around Tina and playfully wrestled her off of the couch.
I really enjoyed this. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to your conjured scenarios as this unfolds. Thanks!
Have been looking forward to this update, very nice…Robin’s not happy with Bette…dinner with Alice is going to be interesting…Bette and Tina hugged for a few seconds longer than needed that gives me hope! Looking forward to Bette meeting Cara for the first time what will this do to Bette?
Oh god i could go on with the question but i wont..can’t wait for the next chapter.
Thank you.
“There would be issues if she came home without her milky whites.†There sure would have been! I’m gonna have to agree with the consensus…AW!! To Dana lying in the bed. Are you sure your not evil also? I think you’ve been studying from my master for ending it where you did… :P
lovin’ this! can’t wait what happens next! please, don’t make us wait too long :) these cliffhangers are killing me ;)