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Alice tripped over Dana when she jumped off of the couch to get the door. Since Alice and Dana were laughing on the floor, tangled in one another and not able to get up, Tina got up to get the door. She was still laughing at the site of Alice and Dana trying to stand up when she answered the door. Tina?
Oh hi Robin, come in. Have a drink with us. Tina said walking back to the living room.
Bette was lounging on Shane when she saw Robin come in. She jumped to her feet. Hi! She walked over to Robin and hesitated for second, glancing at Tina from the corner of her eye and kissed Robin. Unfortunately, she missed a full kiss on the lips and got half cheek. Trying to escape what she knew she was going to hear about later, What are you doing back so soon? Im glad youre here and are going to join us, Im just surprised.
Robin was trying, without much luck to hide her displeasure at the scene in front of her. They were all obviously drunk and Bette was trying too hard. She felt like an uninvited guest. So soon? Bette its 1 am. Since you were left here without a car, I figured Id come get you.
How is it 1 already? I didnt realize the time. We just got caught up. Sorry. I should have called.
Its not a problem. I just wanted to make sure you were ok. Are you ready to go?
Bette looked around the room at everyone and realized that she wasnt ready to go. She wasnt sure if she ever would be, Why not just have one drink with first?
Because I have a meeting at nine and you have to be at the gallery early. Robin looked over at Alice, Thanks for the invite, maybe an other night?
Give me a few minutes and we can go. I want to finish up my drink, ok?
Robin leaned in to Bette, Can we talk in the hall?
Bette wasnt having it, What is there to talk about? I want to stay for a few more minutes with my friends. Its been years since weve all been together. Cant I just finish my drink and we can go?
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Great update.Bette needs to dump Robin.
As always another great update! Your description of how the group felt about each other is spot on.
K
Very cute of all of them. I agree, dump Robin ASAP.
lucia – great chapter – please please please don’t wait as long to post this time. it’s torture.
Bette needs to dump Robin ASAP. What a kill joy. Bette isn’t in love with her anyway…she is in love with Tina and should work in out with her. Then the family is back together and the good times can roll again. Dana needs to pay close attention to what happened in Bette and Tina’s relationship and decide if she can live the rest of her life without Alice. I don’t think she can, and I think Al will only take so much before she pulls a Tina and moves to Washington for good.
enjoyed throughly!
Another great chapter. Haha Dana is clever I bet she fell asleep in Alice’s bed on purpose. I cant wait for the danish to be together again! Please post really soon!!!!
just love it and I hope alice and dana get back together with tina’s help or by themselfs post soon
ok, first how can somebody believe can touch the sacred milky’s lol, of course except for Dana :P I still have hope, please post soon.
That was great. I agree that Bette needs to dump Robin. One of the things I like most about the show is the depth of their friendship. I think that really comes out in the story. Please post soon, I can’t wait to see what happens with Dana and Alice!
I’ve been completely remiss in leaving you feedback, but I just have to say that the Breast Reduction story was absolutely hilarious. And I loved Dana’s reaction to Alice asking her if she was okay sleeping downstairs. Aw. And then the ending. Aw. It really is those little things that make up a relationship, and I’m so thrilled with how you illustrate those points rather than making huge, grand statements, which are all very well and good, but ultimately sort of boring.
Anyway. Every chapter is an improvement on the previous chapter. This is one of those stories that just keeps getting better and better.
Great update and family scene. When will Dana see sense?
Lovely! I loved every bit of it. Now I am dying to see what Alice’s reaction to half dressed, pillow clutching Dana is going to be?!
I have to agree with the others. Robin has got to go, and our girls B&T must be together again. Can’t wait till your next posting.
Good fun. Bette wrestling Tina…Tina hugging too long? Sounds like they’re both getting a little grabby.
Robin can’t have a seat due to the stick up her arse, I think.
Yup…Bette needs to do some dumpage. Poor Alice and Dana.
Wake up Dana before you lose Al. I agree Robin needs to go! I know she’s jealous of Tina but she doesn’t seem to like the ‘family’ either. I think she will dump Bette.
I agree with the others… Robin’s gotta go! My favorite part (one of the best lines ever in my opinion): “Maybe a little.†She answered, “but just because I didn’t have a chance with Alice.†At this, Bette wrapped her arms around Tina and playfully wrestled her off of the couch.
I really enjoyed this. Thanks for posting. Looking forward to your conjured scenarios as this unfolds. Thanks!
Have been looking forward to this update, very nice…Robin’s not happy with Bette…dinner with Alice is going to be interesting…Bette and Tina hugged for a few seconds longer than needed that gives me hope! Looking forward to Bette meeting Cara for the first time what will this do to Bette?
Oh god i could go on with the question but i wont..can’t wait for the next chapter.
Thank you.
“There would be issues if she came home without her milky whites.†There sure would have been! I’m gonna have to agree with the consensus…AW!! To Dana lying in the bed. Are you sure your not evil also? I think you’ve been studying from my master for ending it where you did… :P
lovin’ this! can’t wait what happens next! please, don’t make us wait too long :) these cliffhangers are killing me ;)