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Drowning 19
Dana was stunned that she actually saw it. No one ever had before. She also knew she would stun her friend if she answered honestly, that what she wanted was Alice, but she never thought she would be good enough for her. Looking back on it now, she realizes she was right. She never should have allowed it. As much as she has loved the years she got to share with Alice, she knew all along she would ***** it up. And now she might just lose her totally. It wasnt fair to Alice that she finally let herself go after what she wanted, all she did was hurt the woman she loved.
She looked over at the clock and saw that she was running late and needed to actually get herself in shower if they were going to make lunch. She got herself in and out of the shower in record time and looked through the closet for something to wear. Of course, most of her clothes were at Shanes, but she didnt care. She found an old pair of jeans of Alices and put them on. They didn’t exactly fit right, but it made her feel so good to feel close to her. She found a tank top, pulled her hair back in a ponytail and ran down the stairs.
Hey – guys, you ready? Sorry it took so long. Dana said apologetically, her eyes betraying the pain she felt but was trying to hide behind a smile.
Tina looked at her friend, Dana, we can wait a few minutes. Talk a bit. I havent had a chance to talk to you alone since I got here.
Dana let her smile grow wider, hoping it helped to convince Tina that she was really ok, Nah lets get to lunch. Maybe we can do dinner later, Alice will be out with Bette, remember?
Tina gave Dana a look that told her that she knew she wasnt ok, Sure, dinner will be great Dane. Lets go.
Dana walked up to Cara and lifted her up, Come on, lets go see your other Aunts. Her smile real for the moment, she always smiled with Cara, plus she was going to see Alice. She wasnt sure how long she would be able to that. One day soon, she would have to explain all of this to her, and then who knew what would happen. But for now, she was going to see Alice and that was all that mattered in Danas world.
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(79 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Once again you have done a phenomenal job conveying all the Danish heartache. I am glad that you are trying to make sense of the lovely mess that Dana has created. Dana is probably one of the most misunderstood characters on the show. I am glad that you pointed out how she really isn’t wishy-washy. Please post soon.
Bette can be a little selfish at times. I’m happy Shane called her on it before it could get out of hand. “One day soon, she would have to explain all of this to her, and then who knew what would happen.” That sounds scary…
Great Chapter, post soon!
lights has said what’s on mind, being a big Dana fan, I’m really glad that you made sense of her action which is severly lacking on the show.
Lots of stuff happening in this one, but mostly, it looks like wheels have been set in motion for what could be a bumpy ride.
Great chapter. You’re killing me though! What in the world is going on in Dana’s mind? Can’t wait to find out.
Great chapter! You’re a tease with all this drama, but I’m loving it! Doing such a great job with Dana’s POV. I’ve got my fingers crossed for an (eventually) ON-FOREVER Danish!
Loved it, loved it! Can’t wait for your next post. I’m very interested to see what you’re going to do with B and T and love the Dana and Alice interaction!! You’re awesome! More please! :)
Great one! *5* I like that there’s other plot lines and not just Danish. But it’s going soooo slowly with Danish ;) but please, continue like this (Julia better tell Tina how she feels – situation reminds me of Alice and Dana). I still have hope for happy Danish ending.. and hopefully Dana is worrying for nothing, and Alice can handle what ever is coming.
Amazing. How true to character you portray ALL of them! I absolutly love this fic, update soon PLEASE!!!!
Great chapter…And Shane is absolutely objective with the whole B&T saga. *applaudes* Loved it!!
Another great chapter Lucia.
Thank you looking forward to the next one.
great chapter. can’t wait for the next.
5 stars as always.
I love it and i do hope that alice and dana can work though this and get back together even if it is a long road to go down I just hope that dana will find that there is only alice for her but I will have to wait and see please post very soon
Dana’s explanation of herself in this chapter was very well written. I can’t wait for her to explain her big dark secret to Alice though. I wonder if she will tell Tina at dinner! Its starting to look like Dana’s secret is wicked heavy. I liked how you gave Julia more depth as well. So… where is the next chapter. *looks around*