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Drowning 19
Putting huge smile on her face that she didnt really feel, It was good Tina. Tiring, but good. Im going to head into the shower, Ill be down in like twenty minutes. She walked over to Cara, Hi Sweetie! Ill be down soon and we can go to lunch, OK? Dana said, reaching down to hug the girl, Ucchh. Aunt Dana, You all wet.
Dana chuckled to herself, OK, Ill be down soon. And dont worry Cara, Ill be dry then. She waved as she went upstairs to shower.
When she got around into the bedroom, she looked around she room they had shared and all of the memories their room held. She reminded herself quickly that it was Alices room now. She felt the tears start to fill here eyes as she thought about not sharing this room with Alice anymore. The sadness was encompassing when she imagined where her life would be without Alice in it. The idea of Alice moving on, she would eventually let go. She also knew it would take some time, Alice was a loyal person, possibly the most loyal person she had ever met. Eventually, out of sheer frustration and hurt, she would move on though. That thought caused Dana more sadness than anything in her life to date.
She was glad that Tina was here, but she wasnt exactly sure what Shane thought that would accomplish. Did Shane really think that she hadnt thought this through? That she hadnt tried to come up with any other possibility before leaving the woman that she wanted to spend the rest of her life taking care of? But in all honesty, she did this to take care of Alice. Even if Alice never knew it, Dana was comforted knowing that she was trying to do what was best for Alice, to protect her.
A part of her laughed that all of her friends thought of her as a wishy-washy type of person. It wasnt really true. She wasnt indecisive, actually it was quite the opposite. She always knew what she wanted in most things in her life. What she lacks isnt the decisiveness, but the self-assurance to move forward with that want. For some reason, she found it easier to let people think she just didnt know what she wanted rather than the fact that she thought herself too weak to act accordingly. Alice, however, knew the truth. She called Dana on it years earlier, before they ever started dating. Straight out just called her on it, Dane, I know you know what you want, why wont you just go after it? Dont you think youll have a better chance of getting it if you try? Doing nothing isnt the best strategy ever, you know?
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(79 votes, average: 3.62 out of 5)
Once again you have done a phenomenal job conveying all the Danish heartache. I am glad that you are trying to make sense of the lovely mess that Dana has created. Dana is probably one of the most misunderstood characters on the show. I am glad that you pointed out how she really isn’t wishy-washy. Please post soon.
Bette can be a little selfish at times. I’m happy Shane called her on it before it could get out of hand. “One day soon, she would have to explain all of this to her, and then who knew what would happen.” That sounds scary…
Great Chapter, post soon!
lights has said what’s on mind, being a big Dana fan, I’m really glad that you made sense of her action which is severly lacking on the show.
Lots of stuff happening in this one, but mostly, it looks like wheels have been set in motion for what could be a bumpy ride.
Great chapter. You’re killing me though! What in the world is going on in Dana’s mind? Can’t wait to find out.
Great chapter! You’re a tease with all this drama, but I’m loving it! Doing such a great job with Dana’s POV. I’ve got my fingers crossed for an (eventually) ON-FOREVER Danish!
Loved it, loved it! Can’t wait for your next post. I’m very interested to see what you’re going to do with B and T and love the Dana and Alice interaction!! You’re awesome! More please! :)
Great one! *5* I like that there’s other plot lines and not just Danish. But it’s going soooo slowly with Danish ;) but please, continue like this (Julia better tell Tina how she feels – situation reminds me of Alice and Dana). I still have hope for happy Danish ending.. and hopefully Dana is worrying for nothing, and Alice can handle what ever is coming.
Amazing. How true to character you portray ALL of them! I absolutly love this fic, update soon PLEASE!!!!
Great chapter…And Shane is absolutely objective with the whole B&T saga. *applaudes* Loved it!!
Another great chapter Lucia.
Thank you looking forward to the next one.
great chapter. can’t wait for the next.
5 stars as always.
I love it and i do hope that alice and dana can work though this and get back together even if it is a long road to go down I just hope that dana will find that there is only alice for her but I will have to wait and see please post very soon
Dana’s explanation of herself in this chapter was very well written. I can’t wait for her to explain her big dark secret to Alice though. I wonder if she will tell Tina at dinner! Its starting to look like Dana’s secret is wicked heavy. I liked how you gave Julia more depth as well. So… where is the next chapter. *looks around*