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I cant wait to meet her. Tina said that we could come by to see her this weekend.
Shane jumped out, Oh *****, Im going to be late. Did Tina call you about lunch?
Bette looked up at Shane, No? Was she supposed to?
No, its a long story. But maybe Alice is right with that chart, it is a small world. Turns out that Tina and Julia, Alices editor, are friends from New York. Were all meeting for lunch in like fifteen minutes. Julia told her to ask you and Robin, but Tina wasnt sure how it would go over.
Oh. Was all Bette managed to get out. Her mind started to question things that she didnt have a right to question anymore, like how Julia and Tina knew each other and if Shanes reference to the chart was real.
Not, like that. They were friends Bette. Shane said, rolling her eyes at Bette. Besides, you shouldnt be thinking like that. Tina wasnt sure how Robin would handle lunch and she didnt want to put either of you in a bad spot.
Bette smiled at Shane, Robin is in meetings today. Think I could come with?
Yeah, itll be great.
Dana raced home after practice to grab a shower and pick up Tina and Cara. She felt a little uncomfortable going back to their house to shower, but Alice insisted, saying it was silly for her to go to Shanes to get ready then come over to pick up Tina and Cara. She felt so guilty about Alice being so good to her through all of this. A part of her wanted Alice to just yell and her and refuse to talk to her. She knew she deserved it. But there was this other part of her that knew that Alice made her stronger, gave her the confidence in herself to get through anything. Without Alice, she wasnt sure she would have the strength.
She walked into the house still lost in thought. Feeling horrible about herself. Feeling horrible for the situation the only person that ever truly loved her currently found herself in. She would do anything to take it all back and bring back the smile in Alices eyes. Anyone who knew the blonde could tell when it was only her mouth smiling because when her smile hit her eyes, the room lit up like the fourth of July. Dana missed that smile and knew it was her fault it wasnt there right now. As she walked into the living room, still silently berating herself, Tinas voice started her out of her head. Hey Dane. Youre here early. How was your workout?
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Once again you have done a phenomenal job conveying all the Danish heartache. I am glad that you are trying to make sense of the lovely mess that Dana has created. Dana is probably one of the most misunderstood characters on the show. I am glad that you pointed out how she really isn’t wishy-washy. Please post soon.
Bette can be a little selfish at times. I’m happy Shane called her on it before it could get out of hand. “One day soon, she would have to explain all of this to her, and then who knew what would happen.” That sounds scary…
Great Chapter, post soon!
lights has said what’s on mind, being a big Dana fan, I’m really glad that you made sense of her action which is severly lacking on the show.
Lots of stuff happening in this one, but mostly, it looks like wheels have been set in motion for what could be a bumpy ride.
Great chapter. You’re killing me though! What in the world is going on in Dana’s mind? Can’t wait to find out.
Great chapter! You’re a tease with all this drama, but I’m loving it! Doing such a great job with Dana’s POV. I’ve got my fingers crossed for an (eventually) ON-FOREVER Danish!
Loved it, loved it! Can’t wait for your next post. I’m very interested to see what you’re going to do with B and T and love the Dana and Alice interaction!! You’re awesome! More please! :)
Great one! *5* I like that there’s other plot lines and not just Danish. But it’s going soooo slowly with Danish ;) but please, continue like this (Julia better tell Tina how she feels – situation reminds me of Alice and Dana). I still have hope for happy Danish ending.. and hopefully Dana is worrying for nothing, and Alice can handle what ever is coming.
Amazing. How true to character you portray ALL of them! I absolutly love this fic, update soon PLEASE!!!!
Great chapter…And Shane is absolutely objective with the whole B&T saga. *applaudes* Loved it!!
Another great chapter Lucia.
Thank you looking forward to the next one.
great chapter. can’t wait for the next.
5 stars as always.
I love it and i do hope that alice and dana can work though this and get back together even if it is a long road to go down I just hope that dana will find that there is only alice for her but I will have to wait and see please post very soon
Dana’s explanation of herself in this chapter was very well written. I can’t wait for her to explain her big dark secret to Alice though. I wonder if she will tell Tina at dinner! Its starting to look like Dana’s secret is wicked heavy. I liked how you gave Julia more depth as well. So… where is the next chapter. *looks around*