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Drowning 20
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Dont you worry. Ill protect you from all the big bad lesbians. Alice quipped, giving Danas hand a little squeeze. She liked this girl. She didnt quite believe she was straight, but she liked her.
As they walked through the doors to the club, Danas eyes widened. She was looking around the place in utter disbelief. She had never seen so many women in one place. Alice looked over at her and quietly smiled, sooo *****. Dana was enjoying this too much. Dana, you might want to close your mouth a little.
Oh, I just..
Its ok, there is some nice eye candy in here. Enjoy, straight girl. Alice said. She spotted Bette and Tina in the corner and pulled Dana out of the entrance and walked over to them.
Bette, Tina, this is Dana. Dana, these are my friends, Bette and Tina.
Tina smiled at Dana, Nice to meet you Dana.
You too. Dana said shyly.
Bette pulled Alice aside, So?
So? What?
Did you get the ten numbers?
Well, actually I got 8 – plus Dana here, and another girl is coming in a few.
What did she have to go home to get her number?
Funny Bette, she didnt want to give it out, so we decided to meet here instead. As Alice finished her sentence, she felt a hand on her shoulder. She turned around to see Shane.
Hey, you made it.
Yeah, hey.
Shane, this is Bette, Tina and Dana. Guys, this is Shane.
So we drank and danced the night away. Bette finished.
Yeah, and the rest is history. Alice added, You still owe me 20 bucks Bette. You never paid up. Alice stated.
I do not owe you anything. The bet was for ten numbers. Not eight numbers and two women.
Nine numbers, Dana gave me her number before she left that night. Didnt you? Alice asked Dana.
Yeah, I did, Bette. Come on, look at her, how could I not?
Aww, thanks, Hon. See Bette, you owe me 20 bucks.
No, thats still only nine.
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I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.
Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.
I fucking love this story, update soon… waiting for more kills me!
This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!
I love this story…great work..
Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.
So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
Thanks!
Great job. I love this story.
This is fast becoming a favorite. I can see a nice love triangle between Bette, Tina and Julia.
I love this story…
Thank you.
Update soon =D
lucia – great job – i am dying to know what dana’s secret is. hurry up and post
I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.
Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )