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    Drowning 20

     

    Well, I need to go catch up with my friends, but since youre new in town, why dont you give me your number, Ill show you around sometime.

     

    I dont give out my number. Its nothing personal, just not my thing. Why dont you give me yours?

     

    Im not too keen on it either. Know what? Im meeting some friends at the Planet at seven, I can at least introduce you to a few people.

     

    Sounds cool. The Planet?

     

    Yeah, its a coffee shop, but they have a bar thing at night. Its two blocks east of here. Youll come at seven?

     

    Ill be there.

     

    Do you have ID? I mean can you get into a bar?

     

    Shane laughed, That wont be a problem, but thanks for checking. See you later. She turned and walked away.

     

    Alice stared after the girl for a minute. She was surprised at the affect Shane had on her. It wasnt a sexual thing, though it was obvious, the girl was hot. Alice had a need to protect her. She was lost in her thoughts for a bit, trying to figure out where the sadness came from in Shanes eyes.

     

    She realized the time and ran towards the Planet. She only had 20 minutes left and was till two numbers short. Well, technically, if Shane showed up, that had to count as a number. As she turned the corner on The Planets block, she ran into a woman walking backwards mumbling to herself.

     

    Whoa. Sorry. Alice said as she caught the woman before she hit the street.

     

    Oh, Im sorry. I just, I wasnt looking. Im sorry. The woman stammered as she turned around to face Alice. Alice looked up at the woman and smiled as she realized that her night was looking up. She was a beautiful woman, long dark hair with piercing blue eyes.

     

    Hey, no problem. Just try to avoid the whole backwards walking thing. It takes a trained professional to pull that off.  Alice said, smiling at the woman.

     

    Im sorry. I should have watched where I was going.

     

    Its ok. Im Alice. Alice said, putting her hand out to the beautiful stranger.

    Comments

    1. I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.

    2. Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.

    3. This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!

    4. Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.

    5. So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
      Thanks!

    6. I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.

    7. Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )

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