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    Drowning 20

    Story written on July 18, 2005 by lucia.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=55474
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    Lunch at the planet and the gang’s all here – how did they all meet shane and dana?

     

    Oh, hi. Dana. Nice to meet you. She answered, taking Alices hand.

     

    So where are you running off to? The party is that way. Alice said, pointing towards The Planet.

     

    Dana started to shuffle her feet, Oh, Im not going there. Im notIm uh not *****.

     

    No way this woman is straight. She was checking me out. Oh, thats a shame. But I have to ask. What are you doing in West Hollywood on Pride Day? Not exactly the safest place for hot straight girl.

     

    Oh – I was just in town, I didnt really know it was a ***** dayDid you just call me hot?

     

    Yes, but I meant more as an informational thing than as a flirtatious thing. You know, the not ***** thing.

     

    Oh. Dana felt her face flush with embarrassment causing her to be even more embarrassed.

     

    Thats so cute. Youre blushing. Alice quickly noticed that her comments were causing the poor woman even more discomfort, but she couldnt help herself. It was just too easy.

     

    I should really be going. Um, it was nice meeting you. Dana said, backing away.

     

    Alice grabbed the fleeing womans arm and Dana looked up at her. Wait. Im sorry. I didnt mean to embarrass you. Its just cute. Why dont you come have drink with my friends and me.

     

    Dana smiled at Alice, Thanks, but I really think I should go. Like you said, not really a safe place for straight girl.

     

    Alice shook her head at Dana, Youre really a straight girl?

     

    What, you dont believe me?

     

    Relax, I was just asking. Alice answered, But come one, have a drink, we are a fun group and we dont bite, unless someone asks us to. Alice said, grinning at Dana.

     

    Dana just couldnt say no to this woman, Just one drink.

     

    Yay. Come on, lets go. Alice grabbed Danas hand and started pulling her towards the entrance. Ready?

     

    Dana stood at the door, unable to move, Yeah, just a little nervous. Ive never been in a place like this?

     

    Youve never been in a coffee shop?

     

    Dana rolled her eyes, You know what I mean.

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    Comments

    1. I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.

    2. Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.

    4. This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!

    6. Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.

    7. So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
      Thanks!

    13. I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.

    14. Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )

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