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Drowning 20
Yes, actually we are very close friends. Its a quite a coincidence, that your Tina and my Chris are the same person and I end up out here working with Alice and meeting all of you.
Bette looked up surprised, both by the name Chris and the my thrown in front of it. She didnt pick up on the sarcastic intent of the statement, mimicking her earlier statement of Our Tina, Chris?
Yes, Chris. I never knew her as Tina, in New York, she goes by Chris.
Really, Im surprised. Tina always said that she hated being called Chris thats why she used Tina once she got to LA and could start over.
Julia looked up and met Bettes eyes, I think she learned to hate Tina almost as much. She started over again in New York, so I guess, unless she was going to change names entirely, it was back to Chris. The lesser of two evils.
Shane and Alice just sat watching the two women interact. Their eyes going back and forth with the conversation as if watching one of Danas tennis matches. Shane decided it was time to break this up, So Alice, are you all packed yet for DC?
Alice smiled at Shane, thankful that she changed the subject, I havent done a thing yet. I still have two days, so I guess Ill get it done. Im not good at the packing bit. Dana always handled that for us. She makes lists and checks things off, I just throw things in a bag and hope I have what I need.
Alice, you really should just make a list. It can save a lot of trouble later. Bette stated.
Yeah, but Porter, come on, how long have you known me? Im not the list sort of person. Just too much of a hassle. Whatever I dont have, Ill buy when I get there. No biggie. I just need to remember to do my laundry before I go. Or She looked up at her boss, So, if Im the hotel, do I get to expense laundry services? That would save me a lot of trouble.
I dont think so, Al. But that was a nice try. Julia responded.
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(69 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.
Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.
I fucking love this story, update soon… waiting for more kills me!
This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!
I love this story…great work..
Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.
So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
Thanks!
Great job. I love this story.
This is fast becoming a favorite. I can see a nice love triangle between Bette, Tina and Julia.
I love this story…
Thank you.
Update soon =D
lucia – great job – i am dying to know what dana’s secret is. hurry up and post
I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.
Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )