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Drowning 20
It was worth a shot. I guess Im doing laundry tomorrow. I hate laundry. I always lose a sock. I dont know how. Alice said excitedly, her hands going up in air, There arent any spare ones laying around the house, but as soon as they get out of the dryer, there is always one missing. I dont get it. Its like there are little sock elves hiding in the house. Its kinda creepy.
Juwia!!! All heads turned towards the door, where they saw Cara struggling to get out of Danas arms and run towards to table. Julia bent down and picked up the little girl, placing kisses on her cheek. Hello Sweetie. She stood up with Cara wrapped around her neck and turned around to find Tina approaching, smiling at her.
Looks like someone missed you. Tina said as she walked over to Julia. They embraced with Cara between the two. Ive missed you too. Tina whispered in her ear. Julia just smiled as they stood their hugging.
Bette looked on at the scene, a little uncomfortable. It seemed much more like a family reunion than friends who hadnt seen each other in a week. But her discomfort was eased as she found herself staring at Cara. She was a beautiful girl. She had Tinas features, unmistakably, Tinas face, but with much darker coloring. She couldnt believe Tina used a black donor. She had put up such a fight when Bette first suggested Marcus, she couldnt imagine that on her own, Tina decided to do that.
Julia let go of Tina and backed up a little bit. Tina glanced at the table and saw Bette was there. Bette, you were able to make it. Come here. I want to introduce you to someone.
Bette rose from the table and walked slowly walked over to Tina. Tina leaned in and gave her a soft kiss on her cheek. She grabbed Bettes hand and pulled her over towards Julia and Cara.
Cara, sweetie, I want you to say hi to someone. Honey, this is Mommys friend
I know who dat is, shes da one fwom the pictuwes in your woom Mommy. Cara said, she moved her arm from Julias neck and stuck it out towards Bette, Hi, my name is Cawa. Its nice to meet you.
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(69 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.
Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.
I fucking love this story, update soon… waiting for more kills me!
This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!
I love this story…great work..
Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.
So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
Thanks!
Great job. I love this story.
This is fast becoming a favorite. I can see a nice love triangle between Bette, Tina and Julia.
I love this story…
Thank you.
Update soon =D
lucia – great job – i am dying to know what dana’s secret is. hurry up and post
I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.
Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )