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Drowning 20
Bettes eyes filled up with tears and she smiled at Cara, I am very happy to meet you Cara. Im Bette.
Cara chuckled, Dats a silly name. Bet, ha, isnt it Juwia?
Julia smiled at Cara, Very silly sweetie.
Shane, Dana and Alice looked on watching the scene play out in front of them. Each lost in their own thoughts, both glad for the reunion and sad for the loss of what they all thought would be. It was such an end to an era, to watch Bette meet Tinas daughter for the first time, knowing that she wasnt a part of their lives.
Tina watched the interactions carefully as well. She noticed how protectively Julia was holding Cara and realized that she must know who Bette is. Though she is typically protective of Cara, if she didnt know Tina and Bettes background, there would be no reason to act like that around Bette. According to Alice, they had met and gotten along very well. She knew she was going to have to talk to Julia about it otherwise Bette would be in for bumpy ride. Julia was overly defensive of both Tina and Cara.
Tina also noticed the way that Bette was staring at Cara. She looked like she was in awe of the girl, almost afraid to touch her, like she wouldnt be real.
Lets sit down. Tina suggested. Everyone sat down, Tina between Bette and Julia, with Cara between Julia and Alice.
Dana took a seat next to Alice, Hey Al.
Hi Dane. How was practice? After the alcohol last night, you must have been hurting. You drank lots for water, right? Everyone at the table just looked over at Alice and started laughing.
Since when are you the mom type? Shane joked.
What? Its bad to sweat after drinking if you dont have water. You can dehydrate. Right?
Dana grinned at the blonde, Yes, you can and I did have a lot of water this morning. Thank you checking on me. She said, placing her hands on Alices, I still think Im a little too old to keep up with you guys at night and work out in the morning.
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(69 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
I’m totally agree with lights, Dana is a difficult character, maybe for that the writers in the show don’t try to do something better with her and let us that job. Anyway thanks for this.
Really good job, again :) I hope that hug means something progress in Dana’s and Alice’s relationship. And Julia really needs to tell Tina how she feels.
I fucking love this story, update soon… waiting for more kills me!
This story is one of my favorites. Love the interaction between all the characters and the way you portray the Alice/Dana relationship. REally curious to know what is going on with Dana. Look forward to your next post. Yeah, Drowning and Laws of Attraction rule my fan ficton world!!!
I love this story…great work..
Really enjoyed it. And I really really want to know what Dana’s problem is, but then I fear we might be in for some angst next chapter. Loved “Dana you might want to close your mouth a little”. So gay! I would love to see that scene.
So long and so satisfying. I really can’t tell where this is going to go. You aren’t telegraphing your ending. Bette and Tina could or could not get back together.
Thanks!
Great job. I love this story.
This is fast becoming a favorite. I can see a nice love triangle between Bette, Tina and Julia.
I love this story…
Thank you.
Update soon =D
lucia – great job – i am dying to know what dana’s secret is. hurry up and post
I am really enjoying this story. I like how easily you make dialogue transitions between each of the characters. I love how Alice knows Dana so well and is trying to understand her. Dana is the hardest character to write, but you do a fabulous job in trying to make the reader “see” that she truly is a complex character. I love this story and I hope that you post soon.
Everyone else had said what was in my mind! You’re doing a much better job with them than the show. Now I’m looking forward to dinner ; )