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Drowning 22 (part 1)
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Shane was too stunned to stop Dana from walking out of the room. She
just stared at her back and watched her walk away. After a few seconds,
she walked over to the bathroom. She was about to knock on the door
when she heard the water for the shower turn on. She leaned in closer
and gently took a hold of the doorknob. She wanted to get into the
bathroom and find that letter. She didn’t know who sent it or what it
said, but whatever it was, it had scared the ***** out of Dana. She
wanted that letter. If Dana wasn’t going to talk about it, Shane was
going to get the information on her own. As a whole, Shane was never
the type of person to butt into other people’s business. But if someone
was hurting her friends, she was going to do whatever she needed to in
order to protect them. She tried the handle, but it didn’t go. She
leaned her head into the door in frustration and she could hear soft,
muffled sobs coming from beyond the door.
“***** Dane. What the ***** did you get yourself into?”
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Cara was upstairs napping. Alice, Julia and Tina were sitting around the kitchen table drinking coffee.
“So Julia, you’re taking on a 2 and a half year old tonight, huh? Pretty brave.” Alice joked.
“Yeah, well I am a brave woman. And I’ve been spared. Chris did what
I think might possibly be the most important thing in her parenting
life. She banned Barney from Cara. Cara has never seen anything
involving Barney. When she got a Barney doll for her second birthday,
she actually hid it before Cara ever saw it. Brilliant I tell you!”
“He scares me. I don’t understand him and I do not want me daughter
watching him. Eww. There is just something wrong with Barney and Baby –
Bop, Don’t even get me started on her.”
Alice just laughed, “You really don’t mind baby sitting?”
Julia smiled, “Not at all. Well, not at all with Cara. I can’t say I
would normally like to spend my Friday night with a two and half year
old. But Cara, I would spend any night with her. Honestly, she was the
hardest part of leaving New York.”
Alice looked from Tina to Julia and back again. “And you two are only friends. Nothing more?”
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A motion has been brought to the floor to appoint Lucia captain of the Danish Ship ….. All in favor say I….IIIII…motion carried!!!! You are the Shit!!! This is another great post! Can’t wait for the next chapter…the suspense is killin me :)
I was about to send out a search party for you Lucia!
A Bette-less chapter – and we got through it! Could it be that we could survive her loss? I wonder.
‘Chris’ and Julia and baby makes three. They seem to be a comfortable nuclear family.
BOOM!!!
P.S.: Has your Dana been training with your namesake, Lucia Rijker? If so, she should be able to take care of an evil stalker by herself.
Alice and Dana better get a gun. Shoot first and ask questions later. Better to be judged by 12 than carried by 6, and all that…
I thought Shane was the resident ass-kicker. She better get busy! And I’m glad Lara is not the reason. I guess…
I’m the first to comment *dances around happily* I’m gonna have to suffer for another week, am I? What’s going with Dana? I love how you wrote Shane and her concern for her friends. Cid, so when can we expect Part 2? I’m so ready with my utilities belt to beat up whoever is torturing Dana. Lol, I’ll being a kid now. You’re my favorite writer!
Another week to know what is going on? that’s cruelty girl. Post soon and thanks.
Can’t wait to find out what is going on please post soon!!!
yes the soap opera thing is good because i love soap operas…anyways another week eh? thats cool but im am excited to see whats next.
Great chapter, all your chapter are great even if I don’t always post comments. But now you gone and done it. I won’t be able to do anything but consistently check the fics board to see if you have posted the rest of the chapter. No shopping, no cleaning, no hanging with friends, just me sitting at the computer checking for updates. I know we (danish/or other’s not tibette) don’t have as many writer as some of the other ships. But damn the ones we have are in a class of their own. And you are at the top of the class. Please post soon. This plus your other story. Deb
love it love it love it loooooovvvveee it…..
I love how you wrote Shane also. I hope she can help Dane. Please update soon! This is like the best story ever!