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    Drowning 22 (part 1)

    Story written on August 14, 2005 by lucia.
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    “Fuck Dane. What the hell did you get yourself into?” and it begins….

    “Yup.”

    “OK. You need to talk to her.

    “Right Shane. But how?”

    “What do you mean how? Just talk to her?”

    “You aren’t helping me here. I mean how? Like how would I know about anything.”

    “Oh *****, I forgot, Alice is there, you can’t speak. You suck at this.”

    “You aren’t funny.”

    “Yes I am. OK, you can tell her that I told you about it, that I was
    worried. But T, you need to get her to talk to you. I think someone is
    hurting her or threatening to hurt her. I think this is something big.”

    “OK. But what about Al?” Tina was trying to remain calm while
    talking to Shane, but her resolve was weakening. After seeing Dana’s
    eyes this morning on the way to lunch, she wouldn’t doubt it if
    something was happening.

    “What about me?” Alice asked.

    “Oh, Shane was inviting me to breakfast tomorrow. Want to join us?”

    “Only if it’s after 10.”

    “That’s not breakfast, Al.”

    “It is for me on Saturday.”

    “Sorry Shane, she’ll try to make it.”

    “What did you mean, what about Al? Are you asking why I’m not having this conversation with her?”

    “Yes I am.”

    “Because I don’t want to scare her. Because if she knew about this,
    and there really is something going on, she would never get on that
    plane on Sunday. Once we know what we’re dealing with we’ll tell her.
    And if you and I can’t get it out of Dana, we’ll sic Alice on her. No
    way she’ll hold out on Al. Sound good.”

    “As good as it can. Ok. Listen I need to go. Julia is over and we’re
    all chatting and I need to get ready, Dana should be here in about an
    hour.”

    “OK. Thanks T. Just try to talk to her. She really freaked me out before.”

    “I can tell. I will Shane. Talk to you later?” Tina hung up the
    phone, looked over at Alice, and smiled. Julia looked at Tina, could
    see the change in her face, and gave Tina a questioning look. Tina gave
    a small shrug back.

    “Hey Alice, this morning before breakfast, you said you wanted to talk to me about Dana. What was that about?”

    Alice got up from the table, poured herself another cup of coffee,
    and sat back down. Julia spoke first, “Alice, would you like me to
    leave so you guys can talk? I really appreciate you inviting me to your
    house and around all of your friends, but if you’re not comfortable
    talking with me around, I understand.”

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    1. A motion has been brought to the floor to appoint Lucia captain of the Danish Ship ….. All in favor say I….IIIII…motion carried!!!! You are the Shit!!! This is another great post! Can’t wait for the next chapter…the suspense is killin me :)

    2. I was about to send out a search party for you Lucia!

      A Bette-less chapter – and we got through it! Could it be that we could survive her loss? I wonder.
      ‘Chris’ and Julia and baby makes three. They seem to be a comfortable nuclear family.

      BOOM!!!

    3. P.S.: Has your Dana been training with your namesake, Lucia Rijker? If so, she should be able to take care of an evil stalker by herself.

      Alice and Dana better get a gun. Shoot first and ask questions later. Better to be judged by 12 than carried by 6, and all that…

      I thought Shane was the resident ass-kicker. She better get busy! And I’m glad Lara is not the reason. I guess…

    4. I’m the first to comment *dances around happily* I’m gonna have to suffer for another week, am I? What’s going with Dana? I love how you wrote Shane and her concern for her friends. Cid, so when can we expect Part 2? I’m so ready with my utilities belt to beat up whoever is torturing Dana. Lol, I’ll being a kid now. You’re my favorite writer!

    8. Great chapter, all your chapter are great even if I don’t always post comments. But now you gone and done it. I won’t be able to do anything but consistently check the fics board to see if you have posted the rest of the chapter. No shopping, no cleaning, no hanging with friends, just me sitting at the computer checking for updates. I know we (danish/or other’s not tibette) don’t have as many writer as some of the other ships. But damn the ones we have are in a class of their own. And you are at the top of the class. Please post soon. This plus your other story. Deb

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