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    Drowning 22 (part 2)

    Story written on August 15, 2005 by lucia.
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    And it continues, a little drunken Alice, a little angst, a little humor, read part 1 first!

    Dana looked away from her friend. She was torn, She wanted to tell someone about what was going on, she wanted to have someone else hear about it and maybe they would have an idea of how to fix it, but she was scared. And scared tended to win with Dana.

    “Tina, I love her enough to let her go. That’s why. She deserves more than I can give her. She deserves someone better than me. I love her enough to give her the chance to find it.”

    “Dane, that’s beautiful,” Tina looked at Dana, “But hon, it’s a crock of *****. Suddenly, you are different person and Alice deserves better? And last I checked, Alice wasn’t the type of gal that liked people to think for her. So if she doesn’t think she deserves better, than you letting her go and ‘giving her the chance to find it’ means nothing. Try again.”

    Dana got up and started pacing back and forth. “Tina, I don’t’ know what to say. OK? I just don’t know. You need to trust me, I am doing this for Alice.”

    Tina stood and walked to Dana. She put her hands on her shoulders in an attempt to get Dana to stop pacing. She put on finger under Dana’s chin and look in her eyes, “Dana, I promised you that I wouldn’t push you about the letter and I won’t. But two people, whose instincts I trust, asked me to make sure you were ok today. Both were scared that there something really wrong with you. Dana, please talk to me?”

    “Two people? Who else besides Shane?”

    “Who do you think? Alice.”

    “She told Alice too?” Dana asked nervously, “I can’t believe she told Alice.”

    “She didn’t tell her Dane. Alice first brought it up this morning before breakfast. But then you came downstairs. After I spoke with Shane, I reminded Alice of the conversation. She’s really nervous.”

    “She is?”

    “Yes, Dana. She is. She said you were crying about something but wouldn’t tell her about it. And I think that scared her most, because you always talk to her.” Tina looked at her friend and saw the sadness again. “You want to know how scared she was?”

    “I don’t think so.” Dana answered

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    1. NOOOOO please don’t make us wait. I for the life of me can’t figure this out. What could have Dana so scared she would give everything. Now all I’m going to do is obsess even more about this story, so hurry up so I can have a life.

    3. Call the police, Dana! Call the FBI!!!!

      Do you think she can hear me through this internet connection????

      Alice was a soothsayer tonight, thanks to Jack!

    4. I loved it, as usual, but look at the state you have us all in now! You have to post again soon; we can’t stand the suspense. (And, Dana, since Alice is right there on the couch: tell her!)

    5. I forgot and Jo Dee Messina “Love is Not Enough”, that is the ultimate heartbreak song. Beautiful and each time I hear it, I thanked god, I’m not in the middle of a breakup.

    6. I was waiting for you lol! Alice’s collection of songs had me cracking up, btw I love the Carpenters. Tina and Dana was touching and sweet. I missed this group of friends where everyone came together and helped out. You really aren’t gonna make this easy for us, aren’t you? What is going on with Dana? The suspense is killing me!

    8. Ok, I’m coming out of lurkdom to say how much I love this story but it’s driving me crazy. (In a good way) Just when I think Dana’s going to cave in and spill the beans with what’s really going on…she fools me once again! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    12. i luv this fan fic!! This is such a great storyline!!! please write soon! the suspense is killing me! they gotta get back together! and tinas gotta stay!

    13. Dana has to go to the police, or at least talk to Alice.

      Alice hit the nail on the head with Bette, Bette has to decide what she wants, its not fair on Robin.

      Thank you.

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