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    Drowning 22 (part 2)

    Story written on August 15, 2005 by lucia.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56041
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    And it continues, a little drunken Alice, a little angst, a little humor, read part 1 first!

    “Thanks for the help friend.” Bette mumbled under her breath.

    “Anytime Porter. Anytime.” Alice cheerfully replied.

    “Robin, I don’t know how many times I need to tell you I’m sorry. I didn’t mean that the way it came out. I didn’t mean that you weren’t my family. I don’t know what else to say. I know this is hard for you. It’s hard for me. *****, I can’t imagine what you must be going through. But baby, we need to talk about this. Not fight over stupid comment I made.”

    Robin was shaking her head, “You don’t get it, Bette. You said everything you needed to with that comment. You said how you had destroyed your family once and that now that you were all together you wanted to enjoy it while you could. That means that if it was around more often, then you’d want it. You have no idea how telling that statement was, do you?”

    “Wow – guys, you do know I’m still sitting here, right?” Alice asked, “Well, I am. And I wasn’t going to say anything, but I am going to do, because I’m drunk and tomorrow I can regret it. Ok?”

    Bette shook her head as Robin said, “Go ahead Alice, I want to hear your view here.”

    “Careful what you wish for.” Bette muttered.

    “Yeah well here goes, remember you wanted this.” Alice warned.

    “Bette, dumb comment. But Robin, Bette is right. She wasn’t referring to you not being family. We, meaning Dana, Shane and myself, have not treated you the way you deserved to be treated. Tina was our family, like Bette is our family. There were no in-laws in our family. We were all one big happy family. But we treated you like an in-law. I am sorry for that. It has never been that we don’t like you, but when Tina left, she left all of us, not just bonehead over there who was the one who deserved to be left. We all lost her. And we sort of closed our little circle down to new people. Totally our fault, not Bette’s. But Bette, again, dumb comment. Think before you speak.”

    “Thank you, Alice. Bette has tried explaining that to me before, but I always took it personally.”

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    1. NOOOOO please don’t make us wait. I for the life of me can’t figure this out. What could have Dana so scared she would give everything. Now all I’m going to do is obsess even more about this story, so hurry up so I can have a life.

    3. Call the police, Dana! Call the FBI!!!!

      Do you think she can hear me through this internet connection????

      Alice was a soothsayer tonight, thanks to Jack!

    4. I loved it, as usual, but look at the state you have us all in now! You have to post again soon; we can’t stand the suspense. (And, Dana, since Alice is right there on the couch: tell her!)

    5. I forgot and Jo Dee Messina “Love is Not Enough”, that is the ultimate heartbreak song. Beautiful and each time I hear it, I thanked god, I’m not in the middle of a breakup.

    6. I was waiting for you lol! Alice’s collection of songs had me cracking up, btw I love the Carpenters. Tina and Dana was touching and sweet. I missed this group of friends where everyone came together and helped out. You really aren’t gonna make this easy for us, aren’t you? What is going on with Dana? The suspense is killing me!

    8. Ok, I’m coming out of lurkdom to say how much I love this story but it’s driving me crazy. (In a good way) Just when I think Dana’s going to cave in and spill the beans with what’s really going on…she fools me once again! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

    12. i luv this fan fic!! This is such a great storyline!!! please write soon! the suspense is killing me! they gotta get back together! and tinas gotta stay!

    13. Dana has to go to the police, or at least talk to Alice.

      Alice hit the nail on the head with Bette, Bette has to decide what she wants, its not fair on Robin.

      Thank you.

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