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Drowning – 23
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Dana’s hands resumed the path they had started earlier, her tongue following a second behind. When her hands got to the bottom of her torso, she let one finger trail the inside of her thigh while her tongue slid down the other.
“God, Dana, Please.” Alice gasped. When she didn’t think she could wait another second, Dana let her finger circle around Alice’s *****, feeling the heat and wetness. Hearing the moan coming from Alice, she entered her, slowly, moaning with Alice. As she moved her finger in and out, pushing farther with each movement, her tongue moved in to taste Alice. She sucked and licked as Alice bucked beneath her. She pushed another finger in and pushed deeper, curling, feeling Alice constrict around her.
“Come here.” Alice’s voice dripping with desire. Dana took one last taste of Alice, sucking on her ***** as she kissed her way up to the blonde’s mouth, her fingers keeping their rhythm inside of Alice. Their mouth’s met, Alice tasting herself, sucking, licking. Her fingers worked their way quickly into Dana. Their rhythms fell in synch, a frantic pace that quickened with each second. The need to feel all there was to feel. They both were reaching their peaks, their kisses sloppy, desperate and needy. In a moment, their bodies moving together, their fingers digging deeper and deeper with each movement, release washed over them in waves.
They lay there spent for quite sometime. Their arms and legs a tangles mess, Alice’s head resting on Dana’s chest. Both lost in the pain that any movement could release the spell there were in and reality would break back in. They weren’t ready to accept that. They wanted this momentary reprieve from life.
Alice broke the silence, “God Dana, that was…”
“Amazing, I know. Wow.”
“That probably wasn’t the smartest thing we’ve ever done, huh?” Alice joked, kissing Dana’s neck.
“Probably not, but I don’t care. I needed you.”
“I know. Me too.” Alice said, putting her head back down on Dana. “Dane?”
“Yeah Babe.”
“We can fix this right? I know it won’t be easy, but we can fix this, right?”
Dana lifted her head slightly and kissed the top of Alice’s, “I don’t know. I really wish I could say yes, but I just don’t know how to, Al.”
Alice sat up on leaned on her elbow, looking down at Dana. She studied her and felt an anger grow inside of her. She wasn’t sure why, probably just all of the emotion through the last few hours. “You don’t know? What was that, just a mercy *****?!?”
Dana recoiled at the words, never hearing anything that spiteful from Alice, “Al, of course not, how could you think that?”
“Well, what the ***** else could it be? We have like the most incredible ***** but you still don’t want me. It was like you just felt sorry for me.”
“Baby, don’t ever think that. No. I wanted you, I needed you. I just needed to feel you.”
“Know what Dana? None of this makes any ***** sense to me. You want me so much but you are willing to just push me aside, and for no reason. No reason, Dane, what do you expect me to think?”
“Alice, you know I would never do this without a reason.”
“Really, then tell me the reason, Dane. Because I have to say this whole I can’t talk about it thing is wearing damn thin.”
Dana’s frustration and anger was growing. Why wouldn’t anyone trust her when she said she was doing this for Alice? She was getting pissed.
“You want to know why, Alice? Are you sure?” Dana spat out.
“Yes, Dana, I do.”
“Fine.” Dana reached over Alice, grabbed her jeans and pulled a piece of paper from her pocket. “You want to know why? Here. Here is why.” Dana yelled, throwing the letter at Alice.
tbc
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.