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Dana’s hands left Alice’s head and quickly found her favorite spots on Alice’s body. As her hand found it’s way under Alice’s shirt, to lightly graze Alice’s stomach, she felt Alice moan into the kiss, causing a great fervor in Dana’s touch. She quickly grabbed at the bottom of Alice’s shirt and in one movement, lifted it off. Dana gasped at the sight of Alice. Her mouth, hungry, went to her *****. Sucking, licking, biting, eliciting all of the reactions she wanted. Alice’s hands pulled at Dana’s shirt in an attempt to get it off, but Dana wasn’t letting go of Alice.
“Dana, please, I need to feel you.” Alice gasped. Upon hearing the plea, Dana could do nothing but comply. She wanted Alice to feel whatever she needed, whatever she wanted, whatever would leave her knowing that there was nothing about her that Dana didn’t want. Dana pulled her own shirt off and grabbed Alice and slid her down on the couch. She laid on top of her and kissed her neck, her ears, anything she could reach.
She let her hands wander over the body that has given her so much pleasure and she needed to prove it. She slowly worked her way down Alice’s body. Kissing her neck, then her *****, one at a time, slowly and steadily moving from one to the other, while her hands slid further down. Moving down to her stomach, down to the waistband on her pants. She pulled herself off of Alice just enough to allow her hands entrance to her jeans, pulling then open. She leaned back on her knees and pulled the pants down. Dana breathed in the scent of Alice and moaned loudly. Alice’s hands went to Dana’s pants, jerking them open. Dana helped Alice get them off as Alice pulled Dana down onto her.
She wrapped her arms around Dana and pulled her tighter to her as she raised her lips to Dana’s. She forced her way in and began to move her tongue to explore. Her kiss heated and raw, searching and claiming. She moaned into the kiss, over and over. She let her hands wander over Dana’s back and arms and *****, desperate to touch all she could, desperate to feel her skin.
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I have finally caught up with your story, i’ve been reading for weeks., and what a chapter i eventually get to comment on. I am nearly speechless. WOW, WOW, WOW! <-I said nearly.
That was really really excellent – you know I love this story but that was definitely your best chapter. I particularly enjoyed the interaction with Alice and Bette/Robin. So like a drunk Alice would be!!!!!! Really looking forward to the next chapter – what is in the letter???………oh yeah and the sex scene was kinda hawt!!!
wow. that was great. i actually got a bit teary-eyed. i love danish and thank you for dana finally showing alice the letter. can’t wait for the next update. great job!
Noooooooooooooooooo what a way to leave it,grrrrrrrrrrrrrrr, i hate cliffhangers, dont leave us hanging for too long, this chapter was wonderful, i hope Alice stays and does’nt go to W.D.C. You have got my head spinning..lol.
Thank you.
oi,dont leave us hanging here!!!! What an amazing chapter…wow
God you are good at dragging this out, and yet its always enough to pull us in for more. Of course, i cant wait for the next chapter so get a move on it. :) *****
lol “you work for IC”, O_o really? haha ok better post soon, I only forgive you ’cause the sex scene and all the argument was great!
Oooh… what’s in the letter? What’s in it that causes so much drama? Where’s the next chapter?
CCCCCUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNN! update soon i’m sooooooooooo p’od that we didn’t get to see it yet! Ah! But that was fuckin’ awesome chapter! Update as soooon as you possibly can, Love it as always!
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, You’re going to make us wait a week aren’t you. You can’t do this to me. I’m running out of food, my friends think I’ve left the country. All I can do is wait and check my computer. LOL Looking forward to your next chapter.
You just wouldn’t tell, I’m on the verge of pulling my hair out lol. That was wonderful, the sex was hot and emotional at the same time. Please, please update soon before I really go crazy.
betru2u checking in. OMG this chapter was incredible. I think you managed to trigger every single emotion I have. Yet, you still had to keep us waiting just a little longer for the big secret to be revealed LOL! Admit it, you work for IC. ;) I’ll be waiting patiently for the next round. Btw, the sex was hot!
CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP-CRAP!
That’s all I was thinking when I read how you ended this. Luce, you’re driving me crazy here! I hope you’re happy that I was crying for most of this one too – even during the HOT sex scene! I complain, but you know I love the tease. (hey, my “skip-a-chapter” plan worked!)
Ok, I have spent the majority of the day and night reading all of the chapters to this story. This is an outstanding story! I love it, love it, love it! Your writing ability to tell a story is fantastic. You are awesome at describing scenes, you use direct quotes perfectly and grammatical it’s wonderful. Keep up the unbelievable great work! I cannot wait to read the next chapter and the next and the next, etc… I love it!
Finally something happened! I hate (and LOVE) your cliffhangers :D Danish can solve the stalker problem together! Hopefully you are not going to make us too long *fingers crossed*. *5*
Loved the pace of this chapter. And the cliffhanger is so perfect that this time I don’t mind it all, provided you post again soon, that is!
just found your fic here and good job! just when i thought i could know the real reason, u left it there…please update ASAP.. :)
Were are you. I’m a little worried haven’t seen anything from you anywhere, here or the media boards. I hope your OK. I know you’re from the US I just hope not the Gulf coast.