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Drowning 27
As Dana laid on the couch watching Alice laugh at the paperboy with skis on his bicycle asking for his two dollars, that was the thought that gave her relief and haunted her. Alice didn’t ever stop loving. The idea that Alice would always love her was amazing and comforting. At least for the moments when she allowed herself to believe it, but at the same time, Dana knew that she was going to be the one who broke Alice. The one responsible for her suddenly being capable of letting her love go away. Sometimes, no matter how good a person’s heart is, no matter how much they love, a situation comes that breaks them. And Dana was convinced it was her and her actions that would do that to Alice. And that thought absolutely broke her heart. There was no one on Earth that Dana would do more for or risk more to protect. Alice was her heart. So when the time comes that she would see Alice broken, she too would be broken.
Alice looked over at Dana and saw the stress lines between Dana’s eyes, the lines that only came to be when Dana was totally obsessing over something. “There is no way you can have stress bunnies when that kid is screaming for his two dollars across the mountain. What’s wrong, Babe?” Alice lifted herself off of the couch and reached for Dana’s face.
“Nothing, I was just thinking about everything.” Dana said, moving her hand to Alice’s, “I’m just so happy to be lying here with you. I didn’t think I would again.”
“Baby, you aren’t going to get rid of me that easily, you’re going to have to try harder. You’re sorta stuck with me.” Alice lifted Dana’s hands to her lips, “I’m here and I’m yours. It’s that simple. And if that little freak thinks differently, we’ll show her. Together. Ok?”
Dana smiled, wanting to badly to go with that thought, to forget about everything else. “OK.” She said, leaning in kissing Alice softly on the lips. That kiss, meant as a chaste kiss, grew.
Dana leaned into the kiss desperate for the feeling of unadulterated love and want. Dana let her tongue run a course along Alice’s lips. As soon as Alice’s lips parted, Dana found her way inside. Alice moaned into the kiss, which only served to heighten the frenzy of Dana’s kiss.
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(72 votes, average: 3.88 out of 5)
someone told you your chapters are too long?? May i emphatically disagree? i’m wracking my brain trying to figure out WHAT Dana has done- i got nothing. post soon! i also want to find out what happened with Tina and Bette. congratulations!
Yay, you’re back and with a prize :D congratulations!, I like that Dana needs grown up. Waiting your next post and trying to guess what Dana has done.
Congratulations on the award… thanks for the chapter..I for one like long chapters…Alice and Dana so cute, Bette and Tina what is going on with these two and will Julia ever get the chance to show or tell Tina how she feels about her? I hope so….Thank you Lucia.
It’s great to see you back!
I love this story, and each time you update. Congrats congrats on the award! You certainly deserve it. :)
Yeah you updated. great chapter so well written and congats on the award. Please post soon i want juwia and chris together pwease pwetty pwease lol. and what has dana done? i am so curious.
Congratulations on the award! And thanks for updating even though you’ve been really busy. Now who said your chapters are too long? You can write an 100 pages and people will read them happily. When are you going to give up the rest of Dana’s secret? Great update!
I love this as i have from the start and I can’t wait to see what happens next but I do hope that it all ends well for alice and dana please post soon
Great chapter, and I agree with capes not your chapters are not too long. You can make them over 10 pages and I’ll still be hanging onto every word. Congrats on the award, you deserve it and it warms my heart everytime I see a danish writer win one. And so far they really have picked another of the best. Great job once again, and can’t wait for the next chapter.
I hate the comment sections doesn’t have an edit botton. The line was “I agree with capes THAT your so on and so on”
Im really enjoying your story.Everyday Im looking at the site hoping you posted a next chapter. Ill keep hoping.