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Dana couldn’t understand how in one moment she wanted to cry and cheer at the same time. “Please don’t say that. We can’t be over. It’s us. It’s me and you. Alice, that isn’t supposed to end.”
“Maybe it wasn’t, but it’s all different now.”
“Alice, I never meant to hurt you…”
“Yeah, but you did.” Alice fought back the tears that were starting to fill her eyes, “Whether you wanted to or not, Dane you did more than hurt me, you destroyed my trust in you and in turn my trust in us and in what we had. I’ve spent the last two days looking back trying to figure out how I missed the problems that must have been there for you to do this.”
“That’s just it, Al. There wasn’t a problem with us. We were happy. I was happy. I think I was just scared.”
“Scared?” Alice let out a laugh, “You’ve got to be kidding me. You were scared? It’s been almost six years and you’re still scared? What the hell do I have to do to quell that fear? That fear almost destroyed us five years ago, remember when Tina left? I thought we got past that.”
“We did, sort of.”
“Sort of? I’ve based my life on sort of? You let me base my life on sort of?”
“I knew then that I couldn’t bear to lose you. I needed to find a way to get past that fear of losing you. If I didn’t, we didn’t have a chance. So I buried it. I just tried to take things at their face value and not think of what could happen.”
“Let me get this straight, you buried the fear, you didn’t get over it?”
“No, how could I ever get over the fear of what my life would be without you in it. For as long as you’re in it, there is always that chance that you’ll stop. As long as that chance is there, so is the fear.” Dana turned to face Alice, “You used to have all this fear too, did you really get past it?”
“Yeah Dane, I did. It wasn’t easy. Over time, I grew to trust you and us more and more. As that trust grew, the fear lessened. It’s called a relationship. Do you seriously still doubt that I love you, after all this time, can you seriously doubt that?”
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I love this story. Any chance of an update soon? Please?
this is my first time to leave comment coz i’m very desperate… i dont know if lucia can actually read this… but if not, anyone know her pls give my thoughts…lucia… you know know how happy iam with your stories… ive been reading this since it started… and i lose track of it coz the next story is too long to come out and went busy at my work too… ive read your 5 times … after a few months i read it again and again… then i went working… i know it doesnt matter… then i noticed its been months… i forget the title… what i did was leave a comment in one of the fic… but no body answer whats the title of your story… i write telling them the story ive read.. but with no luck. i began reading each fan fic from the updates to the last digit of pag3 77… to look for your stories… for 5 days i didnt sleep that much to find your stories again and to read it, that brings a smile on my face… always… i really like your story… please continue this …. pls… thank u
Good job getting them to talk Shane!
Great to see this story updated – as usual, top quality stuff!
wow, i cant believe ive missed this story this entire time. i just went back and read the last few chapters, which were all very good. but this one was truly excellent. i cant wait for the next, pps!
Yes! Too Cute! Dana will have some making up to do…PPS
That was great Shane’s plan worked perfect
this is great but what will this person do when they get to the hotel was that shane or someone else can’t wait to find out please post soon great update love it as always
you really wrapped that all together well. good job. the fighting was really intense and the makeup was super cute. i am scared of that crazy stalker though. post soon and once again – thanks for not bailing on us. also – are you updating the christmas one soon? ;)
How did i miss this!? i’ve been waitng (not so patiently) and it slipped right by me. It was worth the wait Lucia. That was wonderful- i’ve wondered how you were going to make me (and Alice) understand the Why’s of it… both the explaination and Dana’s unfolding of her feelings were so natural and true to her character… they are both heartbreaking in this scene. thanks.