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“No, Alice. That isn’t it. I wasn’t finished.”
“You know what? This is a waste of time. I’m done.” With that, Alice turned and began to walk away. It took Dana a few seconds to respond, but when she did, she was a different person. Dana stood up and grabbed Alice’s arm.
“Wait! My god, Alice! I get it. I fucked up. I really did. I’m the first to admit it. But do me a favor and get over yourself for a minute. I might have fucked up, but I am not going to let you walk away from this without so much as a conversation. We deserve more than that. Even if you can’t see it right now, I can.” Dana took a deep breath to calm herself, “So Alice, please, just sit down.”
Alice was too taken aback to argue so did what she was told. “Ok, you have more to say. I’m listening.”
“Thank you.” Dana tried to display a calm she didn’t exactly feel as she sat back down. She wasn’t even sure she knew what she was going to say, but she knew she was going to have to come up with something. “So, like I was saying. Alice, I did a stupid thing. I’ve thought about this over and over and I meant what I said in that letter to you. Any explanation I give you will sound like an excuse and I don’t want to excuse the behavior.”
“Then what’s the use in talking? If you aren’t going to try to explain why, if you can’t or aren’t willing to answer the one simple question I’m asking of you, then what is the use?”
“It isn’t that I’m not willing to answer the question, it’s that I’m not sure how to answer it. I wish there was one single thing I could point to and say that’s why I did this utterly stupid thing. I just don’t know what it is.” Dana paused to gather her thoughts, “I lied to you and I’m sorry. I was a coward.”
“Which part? Dana, you lied to me on a few items. Not the least of which would include you ending our relationship so that you wouldn’t have to tell me that you cheated on me. Was that the cowardly act or was it when you told me about your crazy ass stalker but failed to mention the art work she had?”
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I love this story. Any chance of an update soon? Please?
this is my first time to leave comment coz i’m very desperate… i dont know if lucia can actually read this… but if not, anyone know her pls give my thoughts…lucia… you know know how happy iam with your stories… ive been reading this since it started… and i lose track of it coz the next story is too long to come out and went busy at my work too… ive read your 5 times … after a few months i read it again and again… then i went working… i know it doesnt matter… then i noticed its been months… i forget the title… what i did was leave a comment in one of the fic… but no body answer whats the title of your story… i write telling them the story ive read.. but with no luck. i began reading each fan fic from the updates to the last digit of pag3 77… to look for your stories… for 5 days i didnt sleep that much to find your stories again and to read it, that brings a smile on my face… always… i really like your story… please continue this …. pls… thank u
Good job getting them to talk Shane!
Great to see this story updated – as usual, top quality stuff!
wow, i cant believe ive missed this story this entire time. i just went back and read the last few chapters, which were all very good. but this one was truly excellent. i cant wait for the next, pps!
Yes! Too Cute! Dana will have some making up to do…PPS
That was great Shane’s plan worked perfect
this is great but what will this person do when they get to the hotel was that shane or someone else can’t wait to find out please post soon great update love it as always
you really wrapped that all together well. good job. the fighting was really intense and the makeup was super cute. i am scared of that crazy stalker though. post soon and once again – thanks for not bailing on us. also – are you updating the christmas one soon? ;)
How did i miss this!? i’ve been waitng (not so patiently) and it slipped right by me. It was worth the wait Lucia. That was wonderful- i’ve wondered how you were going to make me (and Alice) understand the Why’s of it… both the explaination and Dana’s unfolding of her feelings were so natural and true to her character… they are both heartbreaking in this scene. thanks.