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Drowning – Chapter 21
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Julia smiled uncomfortably, “The hots for you? Come on, who would believe that?”
“Thanks, Jules. That was sweet.” Tina replied, feigning insult.
“Hey, you brought it up.” She joked trying to avoid eye contact, fearful that Tina would see what she has tried to hard to hide, “Come on, last night?”
“Right, by the time Bette got there, I had one or two too many glasses of wine.”
“Oh Chris, you can’t drink wine in emotional situations, it doesn’t lead to good things.”
“Yeah, I figured that out later, but it wasn’t too bad. It was shocking to see her at first. She looks so good. She hasn’t aged much. She still carries herself with such confidence. My heart actually fluttered when I saw her.”
Julia visibly flinched upon hearing this.
“Are you cold?” Tina asked, feeling Julia’s body shiver she pulled Julia closer and began to rub her arms.
“No, no, um, nah, I the wind just caught me. I got a chill.” She answered, shaking her body as though trying to shake the emotions running through her. “I’m fine, go on, it’s like pulling teeth to hear about this.”
“Yeah well, I’m just not sure, Jules. It was so normal sitting in a room with her and everyone else. You know, the gang’s all back. But at the same time, it felt so foreign. She looks so good. Its like the last five years haven’t happened, at least not physically. But she has changed, she was so open and that isn’t the Bette I know.” Tina stared out at the water and her eyes caught Cara running off following a seagull, “Cara, come back here!”
Cara came running back and plopped into Julia’s lap, “Did you see the bawdie, Juwia? Did you?
“Yes, it was a pretty bird, but Cara, you can’t chase them.” Julia answered, taking one of her arms from Tina and wrapping it around Cara.
“Cara you can sit with us or you can go back to your pail. But no more chasing birds, OK Honey?”
“Sowwy Mommy. I’m going to play.” And she was gone, running back to her toys.
Tina watched her daughter run back to her pail and watched her face change to determination as she tried to build a sand castle, “One of these days I won’t take it personally that she runs to you when I call her.”
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What?, Who? damn post soon! I have to say that I really like Julia, difficult situation for her. Thanks.
Way with the cliffhangers -lucia! Whatever Dana has done, I think I’m dreading it more than she is. You really write all these characters well; I even care about Tina in your story, which I don’t so much in the show, and Julia is a nice one too. Awesome that you manage to keep this and your other fic going at the same time, so different from each other but both so good.
holy crap! what’s wrong with Dane! I didn’t think it would be anything serious, sounds like it’s gunna be totally awesome. I hope she tell’s Shane. Yoda’s good with advice lol!!! Update soon!
Wow! Great chapter… can’t believe you stopped there. LOL. I love how you are developing Dana. She is my favorite and you are just making me love her more. So Dana has a “stalker”, I knew that she loves Alice to much to simply walk away b/c she’s scared of losing her friendship. But she would walk away if someone has been threatening to physically hurt Alice. Come on Yoda you can get her through this. :)
I am starting to really like Julia a lot, especially after she tells Tina “No, lie to me, please, yes, honestly.” LMAO.
So…how long will Julia have to suffer i slience? Tina could move back to L.A. to be with Julia. Bette could develop a relationship with Cara. All would be right with the world, almost.
man..u know u are on my favorite writers list right? this was a great chapter it was like i was watchin a soap oprea and a big even just happened finally some light on why dana is doing this….thanks for the great chapter lookin forward to anything that u post next cause u talented like that
Hmmm, I wonder which phsyco ex this is…lol
Just when I thought it can’t get any better, it just did! Like lights, Dana is my favorite and you write so beautifully. You got me so curious now about that mysterious letter, please don’t keep us hanging for too long.
Lucia…I’ve read this story from the start, and this is def one of my top 5 ever!!!! Your story telling is amazing, and I love the suspense with Dana. She is my absolute fav, and this is a great storyline for her. Please post soon
Dana what is going on with you…Tina needs to move on i feel really sorry for Julia, I hope Julia is able to tell Tina how she feels about her and Cara adores her…looking forward to the next post.
Thank you.
Can’t wait to see who it is and what the letter says…post soon!!!
OMG what a twist. i HATE cliffhangers. god post soon *****
like others, i wish Julia can solve her “problem” and she make it happen with Tina. i love them together :) Yoda’s help is needed but i think Alice could help Dana too – unless it’s the way lights said.. Alice in danger :/ please, continue soon. *mumbles* cliffhanger after cliffhanger..