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“She is just the most amazing and beautiful and unique person I have ever had the pleasure of knowing. God, I don’t even know where to begin. She has the most honest eyes I have ever explored. I get so lost in them sometimes, but then I never want to find my way out. Her smile actually makes my heart smile. I have to hold my hand over my heart for fear of it bursting right out of my chest. She loves antiques, and finding broken things and making them even better than what their own inventor’s imagination could ever have fathomed. She has a sweet tooth, but drinks her coffee black. She picks at her eyebrows when a thought is consuming her mind. She is so artistic and brilliant, but has the worst memory. Yet, she never forgets to make me fall in love with her a little bit more ever day. She tackles the flaws of every person like a line backer on a mission, and brings their best in off the bench to take their place. Her temper is like a hurricane. It comes in classes. Class 1 is just some minor repairable damage, but when it gets to class 5, you better take cover, because the calm before the storm is just a cover, a patch, for the eye of the hurricane, and she will tear you apart. She is a good book on a rainy Sunday afternoon; she is a cold glass of water on a hot and humid summer night. She, she……she is the breath that fills my lungs and the blood the travels my veins, the very being that brings me to life, and she very well may be the death of me as well. These are just a few things that made me fall in love with her.”
I feel like I said that all in one breath. I close my eyes and take in a deep breath to fill my empty lungs. I open my eyes and look at the woman that I just described. She now has tears threatening to escape from their beautiful prison. I see confusion dancing the waltz across her face. I wonder if she knows. Does she? Does she know that she is my soul? Does she know that she is my drug? Does she know the she is my rehab?
“Tina?”
“Wow, Bette, I have never heard anyone describe another person like that before. She sounds amazing and very blessed to have someone like you, love her, like only you can. Who is this person, I need to thank her for bringing you to life, and for making you happier than I have ever witnessed. What is her name? Say her name.”
“Tina.”
“What?”
“No. Tina.”
“What Bette?”
“No. Tina is the name of this person that you wish to thank. Don’t you know when someone is talking about you? Don’t you know yourself at all? You are the one that makes me happier than you have ever witnessed, you are the one that brings me to life. It is you, it has always been you. I love you, I am in love with……..you.”
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Hoping you won’t keep us waiting too long with Tina’s reaction. PPS
Whoa! Come back and finish :) please.
I love stories that just reach down and grab you by the pit of your stomach … I will confess that Bette’s speech had me “mesmerize”. You truly have a graceful way with words.Now for the love of all that is “Virginia ” post the next set of chapters :-)Thanks for a great story !!!
Come on now! I am sitting right here till this story continues. I cannot go to sleep without knowing what happens next.
After this ending u have to post like now, PLEASE, love this story n this chapter was just beautiful.PPPPS
Bette’s confession was absolutely beautiful.
oh you dirty dog. Loving this story more and more with each chap. It reminds me of how falling in Love for the first time brings out the best in you. PPS
Ugh…what a cliff hanger! I so hope that Tina has a positive reaction to Bette’s confession. I love the humor you add to this but I’m feeling the drama right now. I hope Tina doesn’t break Bette’s heart by rejecting her. Please post soon!
Bummer you stopped.
Loved this. Absolutely loved how Bette just came right out and said what she said. OMG. Wish my name was Tina. Her Tina. LOL.
That’s a lovely confession by Bette. I hope Tina was ready to hear it… *Please* more soon. thanks for posting! :)
That was EVIL!! We waited 4 chapters for the drama, and you do this.. =(( Please please please post soon. I loved Bette’s description, the hurricane comparison was amazing. =)) Thanks for this!! I hope Tina secretly loves Bette too, if not poor Bette will be devastated. PPVS! =D
Now that it is out in the open, I want to know just how Tina reacts to the news. Tina’s mother already knows that they are in love with each other, I think Tina is the only one that has not realized her true feelings for Bette. So glad Bette told her. You do have a fully developed sense of humor and I love it. Virginia, that was too funny. Thanks for posting and please, please post again very soon. Can hardly wait to know Tinas reaction.
Loved Tina’s humor and Bette’s confession. Can’t wait for Tina’s reaction. Very curious indeed!
OMG are you kidding me, you just leave us like that, very mean lol. Damn that was so good, Bettes word is beautiful sweet, Im so into it lol, now let see Tinas reaction. Please post more thanks!
This was an amazing conversation…but you now have to post really soon so I that I can read about Tina reaction
I’m sorry I never left a comment on your story before. I really enjoy it, though. I usually love stories where B&T are best friends before becoming anything more (wait… they will be more than friends here, right? ;) ). And in this area, you story is great. I love the humour and the gravity at the same time. Thank you for sharing with us.Oh and congratulations, too : you sure know how to write a cliffhanger lmao.
Why did you stop! That was sooo good! Can’t wait! Thank you!
Tease! I hope Tina is receptive to Bette. Can’t wait or more!
You’re kidding right? Leaving off there…Not cool. I sure hope you post soon. But this was a really great post. I think I would have cried too if I heard Bette speak like that. *sigh*
i knew you were going to end there… and PLEASE… bette has just poured her heart out… don’t let tina walk all over it… i hope tina says she ia also in love with bette and has been forever… maybe she was also scared of saying it first… love this… pps
ahhhhhh this is unbelievable entertaining and well written and awesome..i love the relationship between bette and tina in this story, its like nothing ive read on here before