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I can’t even begin to describe the look on her face. I would rather have seen disgust, or simple disappointment. These are things that I can work with. This face was the mirror of cold blooded hurt. This, well this was something all too new to me, something that I didn’t have a simple cure for. All I can do now is hope my love would be the remedy; the answer that would end her pain and mine. As tears of truth flowed from my eyes, I hoped that the truth would pass from my mouth just as easily.
“Tina, I’m sorry you feel that I did this because you didn’t mean enough to me. You couldn’t be more wrong. I did this because you mean too much to me. I was afraid of what you would think, of what your family would think. I know with every miserable cell of my body that I could not survive if I didn’t have you in my life. Please forgive me. Forgive me, all of me, even the part of me that you just met. The part of me that has been held captive against its will, the part of me that has had the misfortune of being withheld from your presence.”
As I am looking in her eyes I can see the beginning of forgiveness playing peek-a-boo with her irises as my eyes are begging it to take up room and board, for I do not want it to leave just yet. I still have words that require forgiveness and hope that it stays to play for a little while longer.
“Just, well, I will hold off on full forgiveness until you tell me there are no more secrets. So, go ahead, tell me there are no more secrets.”
“There will absolutely never be any more secrets, after I tell you this one last tiny little thing. See, I probably never would have kept the other secret from you if it weren’t for this minor detail. This, this woman that I am in love with…..”
“This fucking woman! I don’t even know who she is and I think I hate her already. She is just proving to be a real, a real…..problem maker if you will. I could have called her something else, but I will give her the benefit of the doubt, since you are in love with her and all. What is it about her? Huh? Tell me what it takes to make Better Porter fall in love with you?”
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Hoping you won’t keep us waiting too long with Tina’s reaction. PPS
Whoa! Come back and finish :) please.
I love stories that just reach down and grab you by the pit of your stomach … I will confess that Bette’s speech had me “mesmerize”. You truly have a graceful way with words.Now for the love of all that is “Virginia ” post the next set of chapters :-)Thanks for a great story !!!
Come on now! I am sitting right here till this story continues. I cannot go to sleep without knowing what happens next.
After this ending u have to post like now, PLEASE, love this story n this chapter was just beautiful.PPPPS
Bette’s confession was absolutely beautiful.
oh you dirty dog. Loving this story more and more with each chap. It reminds me of how falling in Love for the first time brings out the best in you. PPS
Ugh…what a cliff hanger! I so hope that Tina has a positive reaction to Bette’s confession. I love the humor you add to this but I’m feeling the drama right now. I hope Tina doesn’t break Bette’s heart by rejecting her. Please post soon!
Bummer you stopped.
Loved this. Absolutely loved how Bette just came right out and said what she said. OMG. Wish my name was Tina. Her Tina. LOL.
That’s a lovely confession by Bette. I hope Tina was ready to hear it… *Please* more soon. thanks for posting! :)
That was EVIL!! We waited 4 chapters for the drama, and you do this.. =(( Please please please post soon. I loved Bette’s description, the hurricane comparison was amazing. =)) Thanks for this!! I hope Tina secretly loves Bette too, if not poor Bette will be devastated. PPVS! =D
Now that it is out in the open, I want to know just how Tina reacts to the news. Tina’s mother already knows that they are in love with each other, I think Tina is the only one that has not realized her true feelings for Bette. So glad Bette told her. You do have a fully developed sense of humor and I love it. Virginia, that was too funny. Thanks for posting and please, please post again very soon. Can hardly wait to know Tinas reaction.
Loved Tina’s humor and Bette’s confession. Can’t wait for Tina’s reaction. Very curious indeed!
OMG are you kidding me, you just leave us like that, very mean lol. Damn that was so good, Bettes word is beautiful sweet, Im so into it lol, now let see Tinas reaction. Please post more thanks!
This was an amazing conversation…but you now have to post really soon so I that I can read about Tina reaction
I’m sorry I never left a comment on your story before. I really enjoy it, though. I usually love stories where B&T are best friends before becoming anything more (wait… they will be more than friends here, right? ;) ). And in this area, you story is great. I love the humour and the gravity at the same time. Thank you for sharing with us.Oh and congratulations, too : you sure know how to write a cliffhanger lmao.
Why did you stop! That was sooo good! Can’t wait! Thank you!
Tease! I hope Tina is receptive to Bette. Can’t wait or more!
You’re kidding right? Leaving off there…Not cool. I sure hope you post soon. But this was a really great post. I think I would have cried too if I heard Bette speak like that. *sigh*
i knew you were going to end there… and PLEASE… bette has just poured her heart out… don’t let tina walk all over it… i hope tina says she ia also in love with bette and has been forever… maybe she was also scared of saying it first… love this… pps
ahhhhhh this is unbelievable entertaining and well written and awesome..i love the relationship between bette and tina in this story, its like nothing ive read on here before