Fan Fiction
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Chaltsy and I saw each other until the end of my freshman year. She was a senior so she was headed back to Australia after graduation. It wasn’t a sad goodbye. We had served our purpose in each other’s lives, and it was time to move on. I have kept in touch with her over the years, and we have met for “coffee” a few times. She is a professional tennis player now and our little meetings were convenient for both of us.
Tina called me right after finals to tell me she was taking an internship at a law firm for the summer and it was really close to my school. I had decided to take some summer classes, so I was staying there and she wanted to stay with me. I of course was thrilled at the idea of spending the whole summer with Tina. This feeling of being thrilled dissipated very quickly though. Not that I didn’t enjoy spending time with Tina, quite the contrary. I found myself looking at her in a whole different way. She caught me staring at her sometimes. She would ask why I was looking at her that way and I would just say it was because I missed her, or because I had forgotten what she looked like. She would say she missed me too, and that I really needed to get out more.
I had always thought Tina was beautiful, but now it seemed like her beauty was slapping me in the face and holding my attention hostage. She had let her hair grow out. She always kept it above her shoulders in high school, now it was well past her shoulders and becoming acquainted with her back. She had spent a lot of time in the sun and that had made her hair that much blonder. When we were outside the light that illuminated of her hair was hypnotizing. She had started to run every morning and her toned thighs showed of her efforts very well. And of course there are her eyes. They are hazel and change color depending on what she is wearing. Blue is her favorite color and she wore it most during the summer, so most of the summer her eyes were green with a hint of blue. I have always told her that they should make crayons out of the different colors of her eyes.
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(44 votes, average: 4.02 out of 5)
That’s interesting!! And, well written too!
Great story! And like lodeerca said so well written. You look like a writer to me. PPS looking forward to reading more. Soon. :) thanks
Maybe you didn’t used to be a writer but now you are I hope you will continue with this story has my attention
Hope this doesn’t post twice, my previous comment hasn’t shown. This is a wonderful start, please continue and soon if possible.
Looks like a story I might truly enjoy, in fact I aldready do. Please continue!
Wow great start, beautiful story, I love it already and I agree very well written. more please:)
Absolutely fantastic start!! Engaging, well written, my heart goes out to the person writing the story. Thanks!!
This was great, please post more! Poor Bette. And poor Tina, too, kept in the dark.
This is really good. Well written and interesting and intelligent as well. Keep on writing!
Great start, very intresting and can’t wait to see Tina’s reaction. PPS
Well, what are you waiting for? Post more already! Seriously, that was a wonderful start.
Welcome to the Fan Fiction part of the site. It is always a joy to find new folks sharing their creativity, and I can tell you that it is always refreshing to have more choices for readers. Thank you…and for the record, don’t doubt yourself. ;-)
Loved the setup! Bette’s dilemma seems very sincere and heartfelt. I’m looking forward to more! Thanks!
I’m willing to bet that she will not be thrown out of the house! good start. pps
Really, really nice.
str8 you are a breath of fresh air. the story is well written and off to a great start, I look foward to reading your next chap. PPS
welcome to our little family here in fan fiction… i must read on and i’ll comment on the next chapter… loved this first chapter
I know im late leaving a comment, but i just wanted to let you know that i am loving this story,cant wait to read more.
This is interesting and like it, please post more, thanks!
well…all I can say: it truly was a pleasure to be your guinea pig! ;)
great start to this storyhave faith in yourself,cant wait for more
Wow, I’m hooked already. Can’t wait to see what happens when Bette confesses. She sure doesn’t do things halfway….it might have been nice to let Tina know she’s gay first and then spring the rest on her but that just wouldn’t be Bette.
Great first chapter, I really liked it, and can’t wait to read more.
this is interesting and really really awesome!