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Escort – Chapter 3 (Rewrite)
The girl walked up close to her, smiling seductively as she leaned in to whisper in her ear “Well…I’d dance with you…then I’ll let you take me back to your place and then…I’ll do anything you want” she whispered, lightly flicking Bette’s earlobe with her tongue before leaning back to look into the brunette’s eyes.
Bette was stunned. She was used to women coming up and flirting with her but it wasn’t often that a girl was so straight forward.
She swallowed before smiling at the girl “Well, that’s a pretty good offer”
The girl raised her eyebrows expectantly as she reached her hand out to Bette “So do you want to dance?”
Bette chuckled softly before taking another sip of her drink “I would love to but I don’t think it’s such a good idea” she smiled.
The girl raised an eyebrow as she walked up close to Bette “Why? You have a girlfriend?” she asked, her lips just inches away from Bette’s.
“No” Bette smiled.
“So then…what’s the harm?”
Bette felt someone watching her and looked across the room to find herself looking into Tina’s hazel eyes. She couldn’t stop the smile from forming on her lips as she saw the blonde.
“I’m sorry” she told the girl and gently placed her hand on her shoulder to make her step back. She downed the remainder of her drink and placed the glass back down on the bar before making her way over to Tina.
She smiled brightly as she walked up to her “Hey”
“Hi” Tina smiled shyly.
“What are you doing here?” Bette asked as she was surprised to see Tina in a lesbian club.
“I was hoping to see you actually” Tina blushed “Did I interrupt something?” she asked, motioning over to the bar where the girl was still standing, looking angrily over at Tina.
“No” Bette chuckled “Just some girl hitting on me”
“Oh” Tina said, looking down “I bet that happens quite a lot huh?” she asked as she looked up at Bette again.
“Sometimes” Bette shrugged her shoulders “But Tina how did you know I would be here?” she smiled “There are many other lesbian clubs in this town”
“I know” Tina chuckled “Actually my friends were going here tonight so I figured I’d go with them and if I were lucky I’d find you here” she blushed.
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(4 votes, average: 3.25 out of 5)
And so the plot thickens. Can’t wait for more.
Oh man, I’m really hoping Alice doesn’t get to Bette anymore than she has already. I respect her looking out for her friend though . . I hope it all works out, can’t wait to read more
wow lovin’ the rewrite, this is totally awesome. true story. more please
Loving it.
you rewrit amazing i love it thank you i can’t wait for more!!!!
Great update. thank you.
Thank you for the update.Love the rewrite.PPS
I like this version better! Love this story