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Everything and Nothing: 16.) Beautiful and Impossible
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Well, if you dont want to talk about this, I whisper, unobtrusively as I can, I understand, but I want to know what youre afraid of. Not to say that you dont have any right to be afraid, because that was horrible-
Darah.
What?
Im not afraid of anything.
You just said you were.
She sighs dramatically. Im pushing her, but I think I have reason. I dont want to be in bed with anyone who looks at me that way.
I liked it. She says. I can tell by the way her mouth twitches that she is uncomfortable saying it. Despite this the admission makes things in my body warm and quicken.
What? Really?
Yes! Really.
And you dont like that you liked it?
Yes!
Okay. I am quiet while I try to process that. I dont dare look at her, Im too far over the undrawn line as it is.
She turns and looks at me. I think that shes unsure what Im thinking, and wants to know. What? I ask.
Im sorry, she says, with eyes that have that puppy look.
Huh? Why are you sorry? You havent done anything wrong.
Im sorry Im like this. Im sorry Im the way I am.
Oh my god. Are we really having this conversation?
Dont apologize. I like the way you are.
No you dont, okay! It hurts you. She yells it and Im surprised at how frustrated she is. I never knew she was aware of my feelings to this degree. I stare at her, dumbfounded. I cant believe she just said that. I cant believe were having a conversation about these things.
Well, yeah, sometimes, but I care about you despite all that.
She is quiet.
I turn to her, heart pounding in my throat, afraid to fall on the wrong side of the very thin line I have to walk.
I press my face to her shoulder and put my arm around her tightly.
You can do it to me.
I dont wanna do it to you.
No?
I dont want to control people. Its not my thing.
Unless they get too close. I say it as an observation, not a condemnation.
She looks at me. God, why do I always talk before I think?
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That was a great update. I can’t wait for the next one. I want to know how that scene will ended. I loved it a lot. Need a fix soon.
great – you have a gift for showing the raw emotion.
-Kisses- : ) ur great babe
“When our eyes meet it reminds me of two magnets that repel. Gazes quickly swerve in opposite directions. And it’s like the Medusa legend in reverse. I can’t look for too long, because she will turn to stone.”
Damn! What a powerful image. The judges had their heads up their butts. Nobody writes this well on this site but you. And I think I broke a personal record for how long I could hold my breath because from that line on to the end, I’m not sure I breathed at all. Powerful powerful story!
Thank you guys, you’ve made my day.
No, Sakshi, I am not seeing anyone, but I am looking. :)
seriously your writing is excellent. the way you capture the charcaters
I agree. And I don’t know what the judges are thinking…you are, without a doubt, the best writer on this site. Your work reads like a professional’s. The storylines are mature, and real; your characterizations are perfect; your language is lovely.
so many moments of your story ring so true to me…so evocative of so many emotions
Where have you been? hope the next chapter comes up sooner…you are simply GOOOOOOD! BTW are u seeing someone?? :)