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Fall in Vermont Chapter 12
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“At the same time Bette I was still angry in many ways and I felt like
I need to create my own life and independence” “I knew that and I also
knew I had no right to be in your life” “Well Bette it looks like fate
decided something different. Even without me knowing” Bette and Tina
snuggled together watching the waves with only the sound of their
heartbeats reuniting and connecting.
Kit and Devon sat in the living room while Shane and Jessie played with
her big wheel outside. “Devon how is that you did not know Tina was
Bette’s former partner?” “She never talked about her by name and
honestly did not talk about life in L.A. much” “God I cannot imagine
what they must be feeling this is all so strange” Kit was really
concerned about this would effect Bette and Tina” “She’s a really
beautiful child I cannot believe how amazing she is” Devon felt
overwhelmed by seeing Jessie. He and Tina had agreed in writing that
Tina was her parent and Devon waved any parental rights but now he
really wanted to get to know his daughter.
“Devon what did you and Tina agree about her child?” Just then Bette
and Tina stepped back inside from their walk. They looked relaxed and
connected. Tina and Bette sat down on the sofa across from Kit and
Devon. “I can answer that question Kit” “Devon agreed to be my sperm
donor and we have a standard agreement about parental rights and
financial responsibility but I have no problem with Devon getting to
know Jessie as a friend, I think explaining sperm donor is a bit
complex right now” Bette watched Devon’s reaction very carefully. There
was something in his manner, his expression that made Bette feel
uncomfortable. “I just want to get to know her a bit while you are here
visiting” “That sounds good we can talk about it later in the week but
for now I need to give Jess a bath and get her off to bed”
Tina went to relieve Shane from babysitting. Shane had been a lifesaver
the last couple of hours. The day was long for Jessie and she went to
sleep quickly. Tina sat at the side of the bed caressing Jessie’s soft
curls thinking about what a miracle her daughter is and how much she
loved her.
The rest of the evening Bette, Tina and Kit watched a DVD and relaxed.
Shane went into L.A. to meet up with someone and Devon took off before
Tina even finished giving Jessie a bath. Kit excused her self and went
off to bed and Bette and Tina snuggled on the couch with a fire in the
fireplace. Tina was lying on Bette’s chest. Bette was running her hands
through Tina’s hair and they were quiet. “T, today was an amazing day
the best and strangest Christmas ever” “I completely agree but more
than anything it wonderful to be with you and Jess” “She really flipped
out when she saw that big wheel it was great. I’ll never forget it. I
just eat up all those moments with her” Bette said with a twinkle in
her eye. “Bette?”
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I hope Devon is smart enough not to cross Bette in trying to be in Jessie life. Then Tina will set him straigh on who the real parent will be. Doe he have the money to take her to court for rights to Jesse. Bette has more. . Thanks for posting.
What a light touch you have with them. I love the texture of their love for each other. It comes through in how you write. Thanks
Oh my goodness, this is just wonderful. I am so happy that there is someone out there that wants them together again and with a family. LOVE IT. Just keep Devon out of their hair and lives. I think he could be a problem for them. Let Bette adopt her before he gets the idea to insinuate himself as the second parent. This post was wonderful, THANK YOU THANK YOU. Post soon please.
What a delightful chapter but Bette needs to beware of Devon.
Love it! Patiently waiting for next Friday, or whatever day works for you!
Beautiful Chaka! Just perfect!
This story is so incredibly sweet. I can’t wait for Tina’s surprise.
I agree with so many of these comments that have been placed here about your story. Jwet’s comment about the texture and flow of the characters rings true for me also. Your style of writing helps the characters to leap out of the written word and into a screen of their own (even if that screen is in my own head). Take it easy and I will wait for your story whenever you can write. Thanks!
Wonderful! Delightful! Why is Bette suspicious of Devon?
Well Ms. Chaka, I was thinking it was late and I should go to bed, but then I saw you had posted, so I had to read. Glad I did. Keep Devon on a short leash please. Don’t let him try to usurp Bette’s place as parent, OK? Otherwise, everything’s just grand.
Awwwwwww this is so sweet and amazing. You are amazing Chaka – the way you write is so fantastic and wonderfull, I love this…..Sorry to hear about your lack off time to write, but post what you can and I will definitely read :o))……Oh by the way I totally understand Bettes hesitation towards Devon, but I hope the 3 off them will work it out….Have a great weekend and thank you for this :o))
I hope Devon doesn’t cause any trouble. I think Bette’s jealousy could die if she expresses her wish of being Jessie’s other mum and Tina agrees.
this chapter is great, i love that B&T are getting together slowly…i hope devon won’t try to contest his parental rights…
Thanks for posting this wonderfully long chapter C…I know how tired you probably were by the end of this!! I agree with everyone else and hope that Devon doesn’t try to contest anything!
sweetttttttttt becareful tina watch out for devon
I’m a little apprehensive about Devon myself. Chaka…Have I told you how much I love Friday’s. I hope life doesn’t get in the way of your writing too much…thank you for this story!!!
This makes my Fridays bearable. Thank you!
sheesh thank goodness that Tina had pares drawn up. so devon can’t claim to anything!!!! UPDATE SOON…YA HEAR!!!!!!
I see no problem with Devon wanting to spend some time with Tina and Jessie as long as he remembers to keep some distance.
That was an amazingly beautiful chapter. I can understand Bette being apprehensive of Devon’s desire to be in Jessie’s life. When he was looking at Jessie, he kept seeing her as his “daughter.” He wants to be in her life, but in what capacity? He agreed to be a donor, but I think he’s going to want to be an active figure in her life. I think Bette senses that is where he’s leaning towards. Love how B & T are taking it slowly and reconnecting. Thanks so much for this lovely chapter…later.
Lovely! I love this story, it’s one of the best on the site!!
Hey my friend. I know I congratulated you on the phone earlier, but I wanted to be the first to do so in writing as well. You have been a rock for me this past year, one of my closest friends, and biggest supporters…and for that I am incredibly grateful. And, because of who you are as a person, I am even more excited to see that others get to share in how wonderfully your mind and heart works. You have many gifts C, and I am so happy that you are sharing this one with those of us who love The L Word. Your writing is as big as your heart. Congratulations on this well deserved award…I can see your smile from here.
Thank you Seahurst!I am really touched and very honored that so many of you love this story. I love this has been a wonderful experience. And thank you Jacky for this amazing site and a place for all of us. Please, please everyone continue to support the site so we have a place like to write and create.
Good chapter. This is beautiful and sweet!