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Fall in Vermont Chapter 12
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“Yes T” “Do you think we should say anything to Jessie about all of
this?” “I don’t know Tina my first thought is that it’s too much and
the part about me is not that important. It’s about explaining William
or Devon and who he is” Tina nodded her head in agreement. “Tina what
have you told her about having a father?” Tina sat up and so did Bette
so that they were facing one another. “I explained that I wanted a baby
and that a special donor gave me a way to do that and that he’s her
sperm donor”
“So she does not have concept of dad really?” “I guess in a way you
could say that but she also understands that there are all kinds of
families. Some with two mommies, or dad’s” The look on Bette’s face was
cautious as if she was holding back what she was thinking. “Tee, I have
one suggestion take it slowly with Devon” Tina placed her hand on
Bette’s cheek stroking it with appreciation and tenderness. “Bette you
are forever protective aren’t you?”
Bette smiled shyly, Tina’s hand was caressing her face but it was
really her soul that was being touched and moved so deeply. “I can’t
help myself where you are concerned and that goes for Jessie now too.
It’s so natural” “And Bette the part about you being related to Jess is
very important, please don’t ever say that”
Tina could no longer hold the words inside. There was no question about
her feelings and no turning back. She sat there touching Bette knowing
that it was a miracle and Tina knew it was time to go with the miracle.
“Bette, perhaps this is too soon or crazy in a way but I have to tell
you but I love you, you are my Christmas miracle”
Bette kissed Tina’s hand and moved even closer to her. “Tina, I love
you too. My heart is so full and this is a miracle to me too.”
Tina pulled Bette to her and began a slow powerful assault on Bette’s
lips and then her earlobe. Bette could feel her self being swept away
and she thought she should keep some of her wits about her. Tina wanted
Bette to give in to yield so she made the kiss more intense, sucking at
Bette’s lower lip and then moving to her neck. And Bette knew she was
losing. Tina moved and lowered herself on the sofa and pulled Bette on
top of herself. Bette whispered in Tina ear “God, I love making out
with you” Their hearts had already begun to reconnect and to create a
new love and their bodies were beginning to come together in a new
passion for one another.
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I hope Devon is smart enough not to cross Bette in trying to be in Jessie life. Then Tina will set him straigh on who the real parent will be. Doe he have the money to take her to court for rights to Jesse. Bette has more. . Thanks for posting.
What a light touch you have with them. I love the texture of their love for each other. It comes through in how you write. Thanks
Oh my goodness, this is just wonderful. I am so happy that there is someone out there that wants them together again and with a family. LOVE IT. Just keep Devon out of their hair and lives. I think he could be a problem for them. Let Bette adopt her before he gets the idea to insinuate himself as the second parent. This post was wonderful, THANK YOU THANK YOU. Post soon please.
What a delightful chapter but Bette needs to beware of Devon.
Love it! Patiently waiting for next Friday, or whatever day works for you!
Beautiful Chaka! Just perfect!
This story is so incredibly sweet. I can’t wait for Tina’s surprise.
I agree with so many of these comments that have been placed here about your story. Jwet’s comment about the texture and flow of the characters rings true for me also. Your style of writing helps the characters to leap out of the written word and into a screen of their own (even if that screen is in my own head). Take it easy and I will wait for your story whenever you can write. Thanks!
Wonderful! Delightful! Why is Bette suspicious of Devon?
Well Ms. Chaka, I was thinking it was late and I should go to bed, but then I saw you had posted, so I had to read. Glad I did. Keep Devon on a short leash please. Don’t let him try to usurp Bette’s place as parent, OK? Otherwise, everything’s just grand.
Awwwwwww this is so sweet and amazing. You are amazing Chaka – the way you write is so fantastic and wonderfull, I love this…..Sorry to hear about your lack off time to write, but post what you can and I will definitely read :o))……Oh by the way I totally understand Bettes hesitation towards Devon, but I hope the 3 off them will work it out….Have a great weekend and thank you for this :o))
I hope Devon doesn’t cause any trouble. I think Bette’s jealousy could die if she expresses her wish of being Jessie’s other mum and Tina agrees.
this chapter is great, i love that B&T are getting together slowly…i hope devon won’t try to contest his parental rights…
Thanks for posting this wonderfully long chapter C…I know how tired you probably were by the end of this!! I agree with everyone else and hope that Devon doesn’t try to contest anything!
sweetttttttttt becareful tina watch out for devon
I’m a little apprehensive about Devon myself. Chaka…Have I told you how much I love Friday’s. I hope life doesn’t get in the way of your writing too much…thank you for this story!!!
This makes my Fridays bearable. Thank you!
sheesh thank goodness that Tina had pares drawn up. so devon can’t claim to anything!!!! UPDATE SOON…YA HEAR!!!!!!
I see no problem with Devon wanting to spend some time with Tina and Jessie as long as he remembers to keep some distance.
That was an amazingly beautiful chapter. I can understand Bette being apprehensive of Devon’s desire to be in Jessie’s life. When he was looking at Jessie, he kept seeing her as his “daughter.” He wants to be in her life, but in what capacity? He agreed to be a donor, but I think he’s going to want to be an active figure in her life. I think Bette senses that is where he’s leaning towards. Love how B & T are taking it slowly and reconnecting. Thanks so much for this lovely chapter…later.
Lovely! I love this story, it’s one of the best on the site!!
Hey my friend. I know I congratulated you on the phone earlier, but I wanted to be the first to do so in writing as well. You have been a rock for me this past year, one of my closest friends, and biggest supporters…and for that I am incredibly grateful. And, because of who you are as a person, I am even more excited to see that others get to share in how wonderfully your mind and heart works. You have many gifts C, and I am so happy that you are sharing this one with those of us who love The L Word. Your writing is as big as your heart. Congratulations on this well deserved award…I can see your smile from here.
Thank you Seahurst!I am really touched and very honored that so many of you love this story. I love this has been a wonderful experience. And thank you Jacky for this amazing site and a place for all of us. Please, please everyone continue to support the site so we have a place like to write and create.
Good chapter. This is beautiful and sweet!