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Fall in Vermont – Chapter 21
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Chapter 21 – Promises
Dana, there is no way I can move that direction not being this
pregnant Ok, just move your leg Baby, oh yeah Baby just like that
Oh God Dana that feels really good
Alice and Dana saw the flashlight approaching the house at same time.
They is frantically scrabbled and rolled for their clothes finding
shelter in a closet. Oh my gosh Alice whispered. You and your ideas
Dana whispered back. 20 seconds ago you were saying something
different Dana quickly covered Alices mouth as the light came right
to the window.
From the outside they could hear a couple of voices. I dont see
anything Yeah so whats with the car in the drive way? Just so long
as its not a couple of kids doing drugs or something Well we dont
have a key and none of the windows look open The voices began to fade
the other direction away from them and they both breathed a sigh of
relief
Im glad you closed that window behind us Alice giggled. Alices
phone started to vibrate and she answered. Hello Al, its Tina. Kit
is the hospital she collapsed at The Planet we dont know whats going
on yet but shes a Cedar Sinai Tee, well be right there. Do you need
anything? No, just hurry
David Porter was enjoying the success of his medical career with
privileges at several L.A. hospitals, a place by the beach and the
company of many beautiful women. He had not seen his mom Kit in about 8
months and their last conversation had not been a good one. It was good
they had contact but there always seemed to be a wall between them on
an emotional level.
David was on his way to meet a friend when his cell phone rang. This
Doctor Porter Yes, she is my mother. Whats her status? Ok, Ill
right there
Hospital corridors and waiting rooms always felt so sterile and empty
to Bette. But the smell was always the same. Flashes of painful
memories were pounding through Bettes head. Melvin Porter on life
support, weak and a shadow of his former self. Bette and Kit had felt
so helpless during those days waiting for some hope about their
fathers condition.
Bettes eyes were closed and the only thing she could feel was Tina
caressing her back. Tina felt her own agony in this situation but she
knew this was overwhelming and crushing for Bette. Kit and Bette were
sisters but Kit was really more like a mother to Bette. The Porter
sisters were fierce in their protection of one another. They did not
see eye to all the time but there was never any doubt about their love
and devotion to one another.
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Glad that Kit’s going to be OK and nice to see David be decent-not always a strong suit for the Porter men. Please let Alice and Dana get their house as well, Alice is way too pregnant to be busted for breaking and entering.
You scared me for a minute with Kit passing out like that. Just when you think everything is going to be okay, something bad happens. Life really does suck, but you need a little happiness somewhere. It is nice to see the gang working together and for Tina to be there for Bette. Thanks for the latest chapter and can’t wait until next week.
Glad Kit ok now and hope she will get well soon. Let get Bette and Tina get married again!
Oh I have been so deliquent and I’m sorry. i owe you a PM, I just didn’t want to dash something off and so it just hasn’t got done and I’m sorry. I love the strength they find in each other. Thanks I know your time is short the fact you do this every week is so enjoyable. Have a great weekend.
Great update, beautifully phrased. Thank you.
glad she’s fine.please make everything ok.loved that part where david took control of everything in hospital.please post soon
I’m happy Kit is ok and I’m thrilled for our B&T!
ChakaSB,So what’s up with the formatting??? Other than that this was a prime example of how to write a beautiful and tramatic chapter. There was love emitting for your words as Bette and David dealt with their distress as the reality and severity of Kit’s condition bacame apparent. Then having the gang, Bettte’s other family around her showed the supprt system in play. And finally having Bette and Tina open up and admit the depth of their love for one another was a brilliant closing. Thank you so much, Your Loyal Fan.
Such an excellent chapter. I am truly glad Kit is going to be alright and that David put all bad feeling aside for his mom. I love the strength in B&T love, I wish all to have that same kind of love. Thank you for the great chapter.
That was a great chapter and so happy that Kit will be alright once she has recovered, and that David was a great help to his mother, Kit needed that and happy that Bette told her about it. Also happy that our girls are expressing their love for each other. Thanks for the post.
WHat a wonderful update. I am lost for words. Thank you
Breaking and enteing, hate to see a pregnant women go to jail and have the baby there. Glad Kit is better and David got his b$$t where is belongs. Bette and Tina seems to be doing fine thanks
thanks for a lovely chapter, i’m glad Kit is doing well and that B&T are still going strong
I didn’t see that one coming….god this is serious for Kit – and Bette. But Kit is a fighter and I hope she is going to be okay. Alice is just as crazy as always LOL….I’m glad Tina is taken care of her love, more of that please :o))
Leave it to funnyone to crack me up with a comment when I’m wiping away tears. LOL I hadn’t expected a new chapter this early on a Friday. I just happened to still be awake and caught it. Looking forward to more!
Glad to read kit will be better! and David was good with her. Things like this make B&T have a stronger relationship cause they have the each other support! nice very nice
great update glad kit is ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So glad Kit is going to recover from surgery. Poor Bette, her flashback was so sad. Losing Kit is not an option. Glad David wasn’t a jerk…and decided to act as he should towards his family. Hope Al & Dana get their house too, considering they already “christened” it.