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Fall in Vermont – Chapter 21
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Bette Bette turned to see David. Can I be alone with her for moment
Bette did not want to leave Kit but she knew David must have a great
deal on his heart. Bette kissed her forehead one last time and walked
out of the room.
David stroked his mother head whispering softly in her ear. Im here Mom and its all ok, I love you
Bette walked back to the waiting room and collapsed in the seat next to
Tina. Tina wrapped her arms around her partner wishing she could lift
the burden and agony Bette felt. Finally Bette pulled away from Tinas
embrace to see everyone else. The look on her face was full of
gratitude for their love and support. Tee, why dont you go home and
put Jessie to bed Bette, Im not leaving you right now. Jessie is
with Shane and just fine. I called Shane and shes prepared to be there
all night They looked up to see David standing in front them now
dressed in scrubs. We are taking her up for surgery now and I will
come back and let you know the progress but its going to be number of
hours
Bette, lets go take a walk and get you some fresh air. I saw a place
near the upper deck to get a snack and theres an outside court yard
Bette said nothing she just followed Tina hand in hand Tina had to
practically spoon feed Bette the smoothie just trying to get some
nourishment into her partner. Bette closed her eyes and turned her face
to the sun. The sun feels good right now Tina gently caressed Bettes
face and Bette kissed her hand in thanks Thank you Baby, it feels
good out here I needed to clear my head a bit
I know Bette this is all such a shock I cant imagine a world
without her Tee Tina stood up and pulled Bette into her arms. Pressing
her as close to herself as possible, kissing both her cheeks firmly and
then pressing Bette into her shoulder. Dont even think like Bette.
Kit is a fighter, she loves you so much there is no way she is leaving
you
***Flashback 1970s***
A young grade school age Bette is sitting on the edge of a bed hugging
a worn out looking teddy bear. Tears are falling from her face and she
is pleading with Kit not to leave. Dont go Kit, please dont go! Kit
is frantically packing a suitcase and a backpack. Kit stops the frenzy
of packing knelling down in front of the devastated looking Bette.
Baby sis, I have to go. Daddy and I cant keep living under the same
roof. I need go do my thing sweetheart, make my music
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Glad that Kit’s going to be OK and nice to see David be decent-not always a strong suit for the Porter men. Please let Alice and Dana get their house as well, Alice is way too pregnant to be busted for breaking and entering.
You scared me for a minute with Kit passing out like that. Just when you think everything is going to be okay, something bad happens. Life really does suck, but you need a little happiness somewhere. It is nice to see the gang working together and for Tina to be there for Bette. Thanks for the latest chapter and can’t wait until next week.
Glad Kit ok now and hope she will get well soon. Let get Bette and Tina get married again!
Oh I have been so deliquent and I’m sorry. i owe you a PM, I just didn’t want to dash something off and so it just hasn’t got done and I’m sorry. I love the strength they find in each other. Thanks I know your time is short the fact you do this every week is so enjoyable. Have a great weekend.
Great update, beautifully phrased. Thank you.
glad she’s fine.please make everything ok.loved that part where david took control of everything in hospital.please post soon
I’m happy Kit is ok and I’m thrilled for our B&T!
ChakaSB,So what’s up with the formatting??? Other than that this was a prime example of how to write a beautiful and tramatic chapter. There was love emitting for your words as Bette and David dealt with their distress as the reality and severity of Kit’s condition bacame apparent. Then having the gang, Bettte’s other family around her showed the supprt system in play. And finally having Bette and Tina open up and admit the depth of their love for one another was a brilliant closing. Thank you so much, Your Loyal Fan.
Such an excellent chapter. I am truly glad Kit is going to be alright and that David put all bad feeling aside for his mom. I love the strength in B&T love, I wish all to have that same kind of love. Thank you for the great chapter.
That was a great chapter and so happy that Kit will be alright once she has recovered, and that David was a great help to his mother, Kit needed that and happy that Bette told her about it. Also happy that our girls are expressing their love for each other. Thanks for the post.
WHat a wonderful update. I am lost for words. Thank you
Breaking and enteing, hate to see a pregnant women go to jail and have the baby there. Glad Kit is better and David got his b$$t where is belongs. Bette and Tina seems to be doing fine thanks
thanks for a lovely chapter, i’m glad Kit is doing well and that B&T are still going strong
I didn’t see that one coming….god this is serious for Kit – and Bette. But Kit is a fighter and I hope she is going to be okay. Alice is just as crazy as always LOL….I’m glad Tina is taken care of her love, more of that please :o))
Leave it to funnyone to crack me up with a comment when I’m wiping away tears. LOL I hadn’t expected a new chapter this early on a Friday. I just happened to still be awake and caught it. Looking forward to more!
Glad to read kit will be better! and David was good with her. Things like this make B&T have a stronger relationship cause they have the each other support! nice very nice
great update glad kit is ok!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So glad Kit is going to recover from surgery. Poor Bette, her flashback was so sad. Losing Kit is not an option. Glad David wasn’t a jerk…and decided to act as he should towards his family. Hope Al & Dana get their house too, considering they already “christened” it.