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    FEB FF CHALLENGE: A Time For Healing Chapter 3

    Story written on February 8, 2007 by pandamel.
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    sweet surrender is all that I have to give

     

     

     

    “Turn over Sweetie. Let me admire your back.” Bette murmured to Dana, who kept her eyes closed as she rolled over to her stomach to allow Bette’s unrelenting caresses to continue.

     

     

     

    “Your inner strength to fight this and to try and beat this amazes me Dana. I am in awe of you and your strength. Now you can lean on me, and just rest for a while.”

     

    Bette began to undress Dana, moving slowly with awing regard. She paused after each article of clothing was removed and would replace the clothing with a soft tender kiss, before moving on to the next piece of clothing. Bette kissed every body part that she exposed with open mouth kisses, using her tongue to taste and to soothe.

     

     

     

     

    Dana felt herself moving upward in slow motion. Feeling things she didn’t think her body would ever feel again. The music penetrated her mind as Bette continued to undress her and kiss her slowly exposed body.

     

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    “it doesn’t mean much

    it doesn’t mean anything at all

    the life I’ve left behind me

    is a cold room

    I’ve crossed the last line

    from where I can’t return

    where every step I took in faith

    betrayed me

    and led me from my home

     

    and sweet

    sweet surrender

    is all that I have to give”

     

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    Dana began to tense as Bette slowly dragged her bra straps over Dana’s slender shoulders, slowly opening her eyes. She felt a vulnerability that she never even knew could exist. She was afraid Bette would recoil in disgust at her deformed body. She felt the tears pool in her eyes as Bette leaned over to comfort her.

     

     

     

    “Sweetie, it’s ok.”

     

     

     Bette held Dana’s gaze and Dana found herself falling into the brown pools of emotion that were Bette’s eyes. She could see that Bette would do no harm.

     

    The warmth and safety that she felt earlier had returned and surrounded her, as she brought her hands up and removed her bra. Bette stroked over her face and chest, keeping away from the cups of the bra, that Dana still held within her hands covering her last line of defense.

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    1. That was really wonderful… I’m completely won over. And I definitely think Bette was the only one who could have given Dana that kind of peace and understanding. She’s a bigger softie than she seems. Quite beautiful, thank you.

    4. This is amazing Pands, simply amazing, i’m awe struck, so beautifully written, so much love and compassion and so very real. What a talent you have, thank you for sharing.

    5. You know- I never would have thought Bette and Dana as a pairing could be so great- I still don’t to be honest- which is a great compliment to you as a writer pands- you have written this beautifully and you deserve to win. You’ve got my vote- you always do! :) Thanks for this experience.

    6. I did wonder what happened when B closed the blinds in this episode. Thanks for showing what could have happened in those very vulnerable and painful yet tender moments. Well, deserved praise.

    7. I’m in awe…I was so wrapped up in reading this that I didn’t even realised that I was crying at the end. The combination of happiness and grief that was shown here can only be described by someone who is very sensitive and caring in my opinion. Pands you’re gifted.

    8. Pandamel, This chapter is awesome. Full of tender and gentle love. There was a real sense of support and comfort from Bette that calmed and consoled Dana. This is a sad delight to read as you realize that this situation comes from despair and people searching for sloce from the harsh reality of disease and death. You just touched my heart and soul. Thank you, Your Loyal Fan.

    9. BRAVO – extremely well written. You captured the very essence of how the ill person wants so much to “feel” something beyond the pain, the changes to their body (particularly from Cancer treatments), and the need to feel beatiful. Excellent! You are a wonderful writer who is highly expressive.

    11. Amazing… this is really beautiful P… I continue to be amazed by how much this fits together! Bette really is what Dana needed at that time. Thanks, post soon!

    13. This is a wonderful and tender story – thanks for going in a different direction – very beautiful and I love your use of the songs ( which I usually don’t care for in other stories).

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