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FEB FF CHALLENGE: A Time For Healing Fourth Final Chapter
“What?” Bette asked softly, smiling at Dana’s smile.
“I just find it completely amazing that she looks like you. I mean she has the same deep brown eyes…” Dana trailed off, remembering being caught up in looking into Bette’s eyes feeling the love and safety there. Bette chuckled at Dana’s observation, but voiced her own opinion as well.
“Oh, Boo and I have the same skin tone and the same eye color, but her smile and her nose? All Tina’s. I curious to see when she grows up, if any of Marcus’ characteristics will come out.” Bette replied.
Dana looked back at the baby and then looked to Bette, finally shrugging her shoulders. She appeared to disagree with Bette.
“If you say so, but I still think she looks like you. And it has nothing to do with the skin tone. It has everything to do with those big brown eyes the both of you have.” Dana crossed her arms over her chest and pretended to sulk. Bette smiled at Dana and placed her hand on Dana’s leg.
“Awww..come on Dane. You don’t have to pout. I didn’t disagree with your opinion.” Bette playfully apologized, sticking her lips out in her own version of a puppy dog pout. Dana turned her head to look at Bette and was completely floored by how adorable Bette looked. It was then that it occurred to Dana that this was the Bette that no one saw, that maybe only Tina had been privileged to see. Dana couldn’t help but smile at Bette and move over to the brunette and place a soft kiss on her cheek. Bette smiled softly and glanced down before looking back at the road, but Dana could see that she was blushing.
“What was that for?” Bette asked quietly.
“That was for you being you and for letting me in and showing me a side to yourself that I have never witnessed before. Thank you.” Dana responded tenderly, caressing Bette’s cheek.
Soon enough Bette got to Dana’s house. Dana looked up towards her condo and let out a long sigh. Bette could already see the tension re-building in the brunette. She took Dana’s hand into hers and gave it a soft squeeze.
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(56 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
very beautiful, thankyou.
WOW that was heartbreaking. Bravo for Dana,she told Tina like it was, At least Tina can see some of the things that she has been doing and how wrong she was and is. thanks so must for this story.
That was heartbreaking pands! And very beautifully written…You’ve done brilliantly with this challenge…and I think you deserve to win it…you’ve definately got my vote…as soon as I get these tears all mopped up!!!
That was so beatiful and painful. It was so much more than sex with them, it was actually helping and getting each other through terrible times… How deeply they were able to affect the other for good… so wonderful. Thank you. (I’m actually tearing up, and I’m pretty much a robot when it comes to emotions)
Wow, wished you were writing this during the 3rd season. Amazing story, thank you.
Absolutely beautiful, pandamel. It must make it all worth while when you receive such heartfelt comments like jomarad’s. Thank you for sharing your lovely words with all of us.
Wow Pands…..I’m speechless….that was beautiful…Thank you for sharing.
A zillion stars – WOW doesn’t begin to say how moving and impactful this was. Thanks
:*( That was the ending I wanted. Thanks for writing it so beautifully
I just read this all at once, and it is indeed a beautiful story, Pands! Everyone so true to their characters, and so much love expressed in so many ways. I did sense something special when Bette showed Dana how to meditate–this was so much better than what we saw on the show. They should definitely hire you! Simply beautiful, kid!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wow.. pandamel, this was so beautiful and sad…
Absolutely heartingbreaking…yet so full of hope and love. Thank you…thank you.
I’m not a writer, I can’t express what I feel in words like you do, but if you could look in my eyes for just one moment you would know what this story did to me. I’ve saved it in a word document, I’ve printed it out so I can treasure it and read it every time I feel the need too. Thanks.
wow, that was just beautiful, you should have written that chapter for the show,it sure beats the shit ileane wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aww that was amazing, P… really really beautiful.. thank you for bringing this to us..
I agree with annieb69, I wish they’d used that on the show.
Thank you for this heartbreaking yet ever so beautiful story! I’ve read it from the day your posted the first chapter. I’m most grateful for you sharing this wonderful story of yours with us readers.
Wow that was amazing and beautiful, thank you for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon!!!!!!!!