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    FEB FF CHALLENGE: A Time For Healing Fourth Final Chapter

    Story written on February 21, 2007 by pandamel.
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    I don’t know how to let you go…

     

    When Bette returned a moment later, Alice relayed what had happened. Bette sighed, but didn’t reprimand Carmen after all it was quite obvious that she already felt like shit. She made her excuses and left, calling Dana as she got to her car. She found the brunette wandering and immediately stopped the car.

     

    “Get in the car.” Bette demanded. Dana didn’t bother to look up.

     

    “Go away Bette, I want to be alone.”

     

    “I don’t give a fuck if you want to fly, I’m taking you back to my place and then you can be alone all you want in my room. If you want to mediate by yourself fine. If you want to sit by the pool by yourself fine. If you want me to join you, that’s fine too. But I’m not leaving you here.” Bette finished. Dana tensed and whipped around to shout at Bette. But when she turned to look at her, all she saw was vulnerability. She watched as Bette took a deep breath and flinched a bit, waiting for the verbal barrage. Dana swallowed when she realized that Bette would probably take any and all verbal abuse that she dished out. And in an instance she knew it wasn’t because she was sick, it was because it was what she was used to. It was like when you saw those kids who were always hit and abused, and when the parent would raise their arm to move, the kid would reflectively flinch. Dana felt nausea roll up in the pit of her stomach and she quickly turned away from Bette before the vomit left her mouth. Part of this was reaction to what she had just witnessed; the other part was her feeling lousy from the chemo treatment. Bette quickly made it to Dana’s side, holding her hair while she got sick. After she was done, she meekly allowed Bette to help her into the car.

     

    Once in the car Bette began to drive without any conversation. While at a stop light, Bette turned to look at Dana.

     

    “You can yell at me when you feel better ok?” Bette tried to joke, but this cause Dana to get emotional. She immediately took Bette arm and clutched it shaking her head.

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    2. WOW that was heartbreaking. Bravo for Dana,she told Tina like it was, At least Tina can see some of the things that she has been doing and how wrong she was and is. thanks so must for this story.

    3. That was heartbreaking pands! And very beautifully written…You’ve done brilliantly with this challenge…and I think you deserve to win it…you’ve definately got my vote…as soon as I get these tears all mopped up!!!

    4. That was so beatiful and painful. It was so much more than sex with them, it was actually helping and getting each other through terrible times… How deeply they were able to affect the other for good… so wonderful. Thank you. (I’m actually tearing up, and I’m pretty much a robot when it comes to emotions)

    6. Absolutely beautiful, pandamel. It must make it all worth while when you receive such heartfelt comments like jomarad’s. Thank you for sharing your lovely words with all of us.

    10. I just read this all at once, and it is indeed a beautiful story, Pands! Everyone so true to their characters, and so much love expressed in so many ways. I did sense something special when Bette showed Dana how to meditate–this was so much better than what we saw on the show. They should definitely hire you! Simply beautiful, kid!

    13. I’m not a writer, I can’t express what I feel in words like you do, but if you could look in my eyes for just one moment you would know what this story did to me. I’ve saved it in a word document, I’ve printed it out so I can treasure it and read it every time I feel the need too. Thanks.

    17. Thank you for this heartbreaking yet ever so beautiful story! I’ve read it from the day your posted the first chapter. I’m most grateful for you sharing this wonderful story of yours with us readers.

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