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FEB FF CHALLENGE: A Time For Healing Fourth Final Chapter
“No. No I can’t and I won’t. OK. No one deserves to be yelled at.” Dana felt the tears trail down her face as she felt an immense guilt for doing just that to Lara. But she felt better knowing that Lara would not be around to watch Dana fade away.
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A new morning brought no new perspectives but at least there was peace for the two brunettes who have found themselves a very unlikely pair. After the cleansing process was complete Dana felt re-charged. Bette dropped her off at the Condo and soon Dana was out with Alice looking into a new hairstyle for the former tennis player.
When Bette arrived, from dropping Dana off, she found Tina at home with Angelica. Tina didn’t look to happy.
“Where were you? Why was Angus here watching Angelica?” Were the first words out of Tina’s mouth. Bette stared at her for awhile and didn’t answer.
“Well?” Tina inquired, obviously very irritated with Bette. Bette looked down at Angelica and smiled her daughter. She then looked at the scowling face of her former lover and raised her eyebrow.
“I took Dana to a place for a energy cleansing and I just dropped her off. Is that ok?” Bette poised. Tina’s eyes narrowed at the mention of energy.
“Well I hope to fuck you didn’t pay for it!” Tina spat out as she went to into the bedroom to feed Angelica. Bette felt a sudden calmness wash over her as Tina walked away. Before Tina reached the threshold of the room, Bette voiced her thoughts.
“What’s a matter Tina, Josh’s dick not enough for you?” Tina paused at the door and turned to look at Bette. It was quite obvious that she had not checked her messages nor that she knew that Bette knew she was in Canada with Josh.
“I was going to go on a Buddhist Retreat, but other things have convinced me not to. I think it would be in the best interest of everyone, if you moved into the guest room until you found a place to live.”
“Where the fuck am I suppose to go?” Tina inquired sounding exasperated. She realized that she had just pushed Bette too far.
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(56 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
very beautiful, thankyou.
WOW that was heartbreaking. Bravo for Dana,she told Tina like it was, At least Tina can see some of the things that she has been doing and how wrong she was and is. thanks so must for this story.
That was heartbreaking pands! And very beautifully written…You’ve done brilliantly with this challenge…and I think you deserve to win it…you’ve definately got my vote…as soon as I get these tears all mopped up!!!
That was so beatiful and painful. It was so much more than sex with them, it was actually helping and getting each other through terrible times… How deeply they were able to affect the other for good… so wonderful. Thank you. (I’m actually tearing up, and I’m pretty much a robot when it comes to emotions)
Wow, wished you were writing this during the 3rd season. Amazing story, thank you.
Absolutely beautiful, pandamel. It must make it all worth while when you receive such heartfelt comments like jomarad’s. Thank you for sharing your lovely words with all of us.
Wow Pands…..I’m speechless….that was beautiful…Thank you for sharing.
A zillion stars – WOW doesn’t begin to say how moving and impactful this was. Thanks
:*( That was the ending I wanted. Thanks for writing it so beautifully
I just read this all at once, and it is indeed a beautiful story, Pands! Everyone so true to their characters, and so much love expressed in so many ways. I did sense something special when Bette showed Dana how to meditate–this was so much better than what we saw on the show. They should definitely hire you! Simply beautiful, kid!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wow.. pandamel, this was so beautiful and sad…
Absolutely heartingbreaking…yet so full of hope and love. Thank you…thank you.
I’m not a writer, I can’t express what I feel in words like you do, but if you could look in my eyes for just one moment you would know what this story did to me. I’ve saved it in a word document, I’ve printed it out so I can treasure it and read it every time I feel the need too. Thanks.
wow, that was just beautiful, you should have written that chapter for the show,it sure beats the shit ileane wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aww that was amazing, P… really really beautiful.. thank you for bringing this to us..
I agree with annieb69, I wish they’d used that on the show.
Thank you for this heartbreaking yet ever so beautiful story! I’ve read it from the day your posted the first chapter. I’m most grateful for you sharing this wonderful story of yours with us readers.
Wow that was amazing and beautiful, thank you for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon!!!!!!!!