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FEB FF CHALLENGE: A Time For Healing Fourth Final Chapter
Dana accepted the hug but would not be deterred off track. She smiled at Bette, before turning to Tina.
“Yeah. Tomorrow Helena’s taking everyone to the basketball game. And Since Bette wasn’t even suppose to be here, I want to make sure she comes.” Dana stated. Tina frowned a bit and didn’t respond right away.
“I mean you were going right Tina? And if Bette wasn’t suppose to be here, you would have…” Dana suddenly got angry and clenched her jaw. ‘Why in the hell are you explaining yourself to her? If I want Bette there, I’ll get Bette there!’ Dana angrily thought.
“You know what?” Dana changed tracks. Bette noticed immediately that Dana had gotten tense. She stared at Dana hoping to give her some emotional support, unsure of what was going on in her head.
“I’ll pay for Angus to watch Angelica.” Dana suddenly stated. Bette’s eyes widen and immediately started to shake her head. Tina felt an embarrassment rush through her. She didn’t realize that the gang was aware that she was giving Bette a hard time in regards to money.
“Dana that’s not necessary.” Bette stated holding the former brunette’s gaze.
“Look all I know is, I want you there. You help me relax. And I don’t want anything to screw that up. I don’t want you two to fight about who should stay home with Angelica or God knows fight about paying for a sitter.” With that Dana stood up and started walking towards Angus.
“Dana, wait. It’s no big deal. I don’t need your help to pay for this.” Tina tried to redirect. Both Dana and Bette were well aware of the fact of Tina’s use of I instead of we. And that angered Dana even more. Dana didn’t acknowledge Tina’s comments and tapped Angus on the shoulder. Tina quickly looked at Bette.
“Stop her!” Tina hissed at the brunette. Bette raised an eyebrow at Tina and shook her head.
“Tina. You’ve missed the past couple of days with the way Dana has been coping with her illness. I’m not stopping her. It’s something she feels she needs to do.” Bette replied quietly. Dana’s exchange was quick with Angus and both Bette and Tina could see his head move up and down agreeing to whatever Dana said. She walked back the two women and stopped in front of them.
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(56 votes, average: 3.46 out of 5)
very beautiful, thankyou.
WOW that was heartbreaking. Bravo for Dana,she told Tina like it was, At least Tina can see some of the things that she has been doing and how wrong she was and is. thanks so must for this story.
That was heartbreaking pands! And very beautifully written…You’ve done brilliantly with this challenge…and I think you deserve to win it…you’ve definately got my vote…as soon as I get these tears all mopped up!!!
That was so beatiful and painful. It was so much more than sex with them, it was actually helping and getting each other through terrible times… How deeply they were able to affect the other for good… so wonderful. Thank you. (I’m actually tearing up, and I’m pretty much a robot when it comes to emotions)
Wow, wished you were writing this during the 3rd season. Amazing story, thank you.
Absolutely beautiful, pandamel. It must make it all worth while when you receive such heartfelt comments like jomarad’s. Thank you for sharing your lovely words with all of us.
Wow Pands…..I’m speechless….that was beautiful…Thank you for sharing.
A zillion stars – WOW doesn’t begin to say how moving and impactful this was. Thanks
:*( That was the ending I wanted. Thanks for writing it so beautifully
I just read this all at once, and it is indeed a beautiful story, Pands! Everyone so true to their characters, and so much love expressed in so many ways. I did sense something special when Bette showed Dana how to meditate–this was so much better than what we saw on the show. They should definitely hire you! Simply beautiful, kid!
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww wow.. pandamel, this was so beautiful and sad…
Absolutely heartingbreaking…yet so full of hope and love. Thank you…thank you.
I’m not a writer, I can’t express what I feel in words like you do, but if you could look in my eyes for just one moment you would know what this story did to me. I’ve saved it in a word document, I’ve printed it out so I can treasure it and read it every time I feel the need too. Thanks.
wow, that was just beautiful, you should have written that chapter for the show,it sure beats the shit ileane wrote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aww that was amazing, P… really really beautiful.. thank you for bringing this to us..
I agree with annieb69, I wish they’d used that on the show.
Thank you for this heartbreaking yet ever so beautiful story! I’ve read it from the day your posted the first chapter. I’m most grateful for you sharing this wonderful story of yours with us readers.
Wow that was amazing and beautiful, thank you for sharing this story with us and hope to see you soon!!!!!!!!