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    Feelings… Chapter 1

    Story written on June 22, 2006 by arkaycee.
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    FIX IT CHALLENGE #8–How the conversation should have gone when Tina told Bette she had feelings for men again.

    They had never processed their feelings about all of that. Tina left, and they didn’t talk for months. Then, when they did run across each other at the Planet that morning, Tina already could sense that Bette had been with Candace the night before, so she responded out of the hurt she felt as Bette tried to plead her case.  The scab was ripped off the deep, deep wound of her heart.  She didn’t need this…

    Especially after she had confided in Dr. Wilson about wanting “to be sure that everything was okay this time” before she told Bette “because [she] knew Bette couldn’t take it,” she felt betrayed once again.  Would she ever again be able to trust the woman who had been her soulmate?

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    Bette looked at Tina and, with tears filling her eyes but not yet falling, she said, “Tina…please…  I need for us to talk.  I need to know how you feel—how you’ve been feeling.   We’ve not talked about what’s happened this past year.  I’ll just listen, because I imagine you’ve got a lot to say to me—“

    “You still have to be in charge, don’t you?  Tina hissed.  “’I need for us to talk.’  HA!  Bette, I’m so sick of your controlling ways and the way you still act as if you’re running this relationship!”

    Bette was taken aback.  She thought she came to Tina with this as humbly as she could.  She certainly didn’t expect this outburst, yet she understood where it came from.

    Tina continued, “Look, Bette—I don’t even know where to start.  I just know that I’m angry, and hurt, and feeling so alone…”  She fought back tears, but they began to fall as her body quivered with all the emotion struggling to erupt as she tried to hold it in.  Tina didn’t want to be vulnerable this way with Bette.  She didn’t trust her, and Bette was certainly not in a place to take care of her.  It didn’t even seem as if Bette wanted a job.  Now, they had a baby—the baby that they went through so much to have.  She suddenly remembered how Bette pleaded with her to try to start their family again—just hours before she saw what was going on between Bette and Candace.

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    10. I liked how Bette let Tina blurt out what she was thinking without responding until Tina was done. I know I have a bad habit of interrupting when I’m being confronted.

    17. This is defintely the way that it should have gone when Tina opened up to Bette about her feelings towards men. Bette listening and then actually telling Tina that she was totally wrong but was working to keep her soul mate from running away.

    22. Just came back from holidays and while catching up with fanfics I saw you posted already the fifth chapter of a story. I’ve started with the first one, which I see was already written a long time ago. I can tell you from the first paragraph your powerful writing amazed me. I’m gonna read the next chapters in a bliss and comment on all of them.

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