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Fire and Ice Chapter 33
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"And were you two decided on dinner?" The waitress implored further, looking hopeful at Bette for the answer.
Bette quickly shook her head out of the clouds. "Uh, you’re chef…does he or she have any specials?"
"As a matter of fact, the chef recommends the Alaskan salmon finished in a miso glaze…and that is served with tempura vegetables…" The small woman recited quickly, eager to leave the women in seclusion.
Tina arched her eyebrows, nodding her head in approval.
"We’ll take two…" Bette stated, confident in the blonde’s cue.
As the waitress left them, they both eased back into the soft cushions of the couch, their eyes staring adoringly at one another.
"I feel like I’ve known you for years…" The blonde began, her eyes closing every so only to re-open with deeper tenderness.
Bette reached for Tina’s fingers on the couch, her own fingers brushing Tina’s lightly. She quietly listened as Tina went on, transfixed by the melodic timbre of her voice.
"I can’t explain it… and it really shocks me too…" Tina began again, her tone growing nostalgic.
"How so?" Bette reached for her bourbon with her free hand, never averting her gaze from Tina.
"Well…" Tina laughed lightly and looked down, gathering her courage. "When I first saw you…I didn’t think I would ever be able to act normal around you…"
"What do you mean?" Bette blushed and smiled all at the same time, quickly placing her glass before her lips to mask her flattery.
"Bette…you made me so nervous…" Tina shook her body lightly, her mind recalling the first minute she had set eyes on the brunette.
"Why?" Bette was growing increasingly curious as Tina opened up more and more.
"Because…because I don’t know…your reputation…and then seeing you for the first time…you…you just took my breath away. Nobody has ever done that to me before…let alone a woman…" Tina breathed, feeling lighter and lighter as she divulged herself to the brunette.
"You did the same thing to me, too." Bette reassuringly smoothed her hand over Tina’s. She set her drink down so she could take both of Tina’s hands into hers.
The blonde’s words continued to tumble out, deepening the intimacy of the conversation.
"And now…I still feel all those things, but I really feel comfortable with you. More at ease than I’ve ever been…It’s like you know me so well…" Tina laughed, shaking her head. "Anyway, I sound crazy."
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I forgot the hotel also,better start finding her a house abd get her stuff from Eric thanks
Did someone say hotel…get our girls there fast! PPS
HOTEL? did i read hotel?? ooohhhhhh too tempting to even go there!!!! but a girl can dream right??? lmao…another good one fire!
How convienent that they are going to the hotel bar, a short elevator ride away from bliss…
Way to manoeuver Bette Tina! Getting her to come to your hotel…night cap I’m sure! I LOVE this story Fire…have I told you that lately?
Fire- each word was exquisite…I loved the flirting…I loved the bourbon sharing…I loved that Bette focused on decreasing Tina’s discomfort…I love that Tina is made to confront her ideology. It was simply breathtaking… I can’t wait to see if the nightcap leads to more…and more…PPS
It is fun having Bette and Tina flirting and teasing one another. I am glad that Bette and Tina talked after being potentially busted by Jack. Though I understand how scary it is to come out publicly it also hurts to have someone seem ashamed of something so beautiful. Wonderful writing!
Was I the only one who remembered the hotel? Gold star for me!!! Great continuity fire…ure doing waaay better than Ilene. Uhhh, can I trade in my gold star for another chapter instead?
PS could the drink at the hotel bar please lead to a drink in the hotel room? Which could lead to…sexy time :)
WHAT HOTEL? Is that where T is staying? I forgot. I don’t blame T not wanting to wear other peoples’ labeling of her but do get Bette’s hurt. Didn’t last long tho’, thank goodness. Love this. PPS.
yeah, sorry…that was like, 80 chapters ago…i’m not surprised to learn you forgot! (she’s staying at the four seasons, btw. i’m trying to use real la establishments, save for the bette porter gallery, to give the story some angles…)
Great story. I love the pace, but at the same time it’s killing me :). I think Tina did remarkably well considering it’s her first real lesbian date/experience. Great update!
A nights recap it is. Got no problem with the pace whatsoever.PPS
i also forgot about the hotel… i think its also time for tina to find a place to live… and get her things from eric’s… after their drinks that is… maybe shane has a truck and the girls can help her move…
that was really perfect, thank you for this beautiful chapter and for this lovely dinner, I loved how their dinner date went, the drinks and the food were amazing, it really made me hungry, you make it sound very delicious and attractive, which I am sure is, I hope their night will never end, I am very excited to see what will take place next. post soon dear and I am glad you are fine. Take care Love
Okay nice dinner indeed love the playfulness. time for the ol’ night cap..:)PPS
I think Tina staying at the hotel was actually mentioned about 81 chapters ago (heehee)…and bring on the Four Seasons firestarter.
*glancing at me chilled beer… at the salmon… back at the beer…. salmon… beer…* can’t decide who’s the winner… the beer cools me down… and the salmon heats up the ladies… either very nice… BUT i love the way you charge the conversation with the nuances that make your story so special. thanks fire!
“Mrs. Kennard?!” Tina’s not married, right? Jack just made a slip of the tongue, right? Anyway, I knew it, that shot of bourbon won’t really help Tina because she’s already in heat. It’s like spraying gasoline on a raging bonfire. I loved the banter, the endless teasing and the way they fed each other the same dish was really sweet. They are moving forward, firestarter. And I’m glad that my unfounded fear and anxiety that this relationship would take as long to build as it took to build Rome is now fading fast. I’m glad to be proven wrong! :) Thank you for writing and posting this update, firestarter, and for putting up with all my teasing. :>
A nightcap, at Tina’s hotel right ;) pps
That was great and they are sweet!