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Fire and Ice Chapter 33
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"No. No you don’t. I feel the exact same way Tina. And despite what you may or may not have heard about me prior to meeting me, well, I can assure you. I am not the same person I was four weeks ago…" Bette’s words were firm but her tone was so gentle Tina though she might melt right into her…
Tina looked deep into Bette, knowing her statements were indeed true.
"Can I ask you a question?" Tina smiled, her confidence building slowly as they became more familiar with one another.
"Sure. Anything." Bette nodded, her smile welcoming.
"Were you flirting with me…that first night, when we met…" Tina’s face grew a little rosy as she asked the question, causing Bette to feel a little frisky.
"Well, I wouldn’t call it flirting…" Bette began, timidly defending herself. She liked where this was going. "I was simply reacting to how you made me feel…you made quite an impression on me right away…" Bette arched her eyebrows, allowing Tina to watch her eyes run up and down the blonde’s curved body.
"I did…?" Tina’s body rose as the brunette’s eyes took her in, her heart pouding with incredible speed.
"You know you did." Bette stated as she lightly smoothed Tina’s thigh. Tina lost her breath in that moment, unaware that her drink had arrived.
"Ma’am, your pinot grigio." The waitress quickly yet skillfully delivered the glass to Tina’s right, taking her exit hastily. Tina blushed, removing one hand from Bette’s to wrap it around the chilled glass.
"Do you think we’re making her nervous much?" Tina laughed as she watched the waitress quickly disappear from sight.
"No…I think she just knows we need our space. I thinks she’s atuned…to our need for privacy…" Bette tapped Tina’s fingers lightly, sipping slowly from her own glass.
"Well…what were we talking about?" Tina couldn’t stop from blushing every so often as the heat of the situation occured to her in waves. She couldn’t believe this was all happening.
"We were talking about how hot you thought I was…" Bette boldly stated, her expression a little deviant.
"Bette Porter! You do have a slight ego, you know that?" Tina gasped, shocked but thankful at the brunette’s attempts to lighten the thick air that surrounded them.
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I forgot the hotel also,better start finding her a house abd get her stuff from Eric thanks
Did someone say hotel…get our girls there fast! PPS
HOTEL? did i read hotel?? ooohhhhhh too tempting to even go there!!!! but a girl can dream right??? lmao…another good one fire!
How convienent that they are going to the hotel bar, a short elevator ride away from bliss…
Way to manoeuver Bette Tina! Getting her to come to your hotel…night cap I’m sure! I LOVE this story Fire…have I told you that lately?
Fire- each word was exquisite…I loved the flirting…I loved the bourbon sharing…I loved that Bette focused on decreasing Tina’s discomfort…I love that Tina is made to confront her ideology. It was simply breathtaking… I can’t wait to see if the nightcap leads to more…and more…PPS
It is fun having Bette and Tina flirting and teasing one another. I am glad that Bette and Tina talked after being potentially busted by Jack. Though I understand how scary it is to come out publicly it also hurts to have someone seem ashamed of something so beautiful. Wonderful writing!
Was I the only one who remembered the hotel? Gold star for me!!! Great continuity fire…ure doing waaay better than Ilene. Uhhh, can I trade in my gold star for another chapter instead?
PS could the drink at the hotel bar please lead to a drink in the hotel room? Which could lead to…sexy time :)
WHAT HOTEL? Is that where T is staying? I forgot. I don’t blame T not wanting to wear other peoples’ labeling of her but do get Bette’s hurt. Didn’t last long tho’, thank goodness. Love this. PPS.
yeah, sorry…that was like, 80 chapters ago…i’m not surprised to learn you forgot! (she’s staying at the four seasons, btw. i’m trying to use real la establishments, save for the bette porter gallery, to give the story some angles…)
Great story. I love the pace, but at the same time it’s killing me :). I think Tina did remarkably well considering it’s her first real lesbian date/experience. Great update!
A nights recap it is. Got no problem with the pace whatsoever.PPS
i also forgot about the hotel… i think its also time for tina to find a place to live… and get her things from eric’s… after their drinks that is… maybe shane has a truck and the girls can help her move…
that was really perfect, thank you for this beautiful chapter and for this lovely dinner, I loved how their dinner date went, the drinks and the food were amazing, it really made me hungry, you make it sound very delicious and attractive, which I am sure is, I hope their night will never end, I am very excited to see what will take place next. post soon dear and I am glad you are fine. Take care Love
Okay nice dinner indeed love the playfulness. time for the ol’ night cap..:)PPS
I think Tina staying at the hotel was actually mentioned about 81 chapters ago (heehee)…and bring on the Four Seasons firestarter.
*glancing at me chilled beer… at the salmon… back at the beer…. salmon… beer…* can’t decide who’s the winner… the beer cools me down… and the salmon heats up the ladies… either very nice… BUT i love the way you charge the conversation with the nuances that make your story so special. thanks fire!
“Mrs. Kennard?!” Tina’s not married, right? Jack just made a slip of the tongue, right? Anyway, I knew it, that shot of bourbon won’t really help Tina because she’s already in heat. It’s like spraying gasoline on a raging bonfire. I loved the banter, the endless teasing and the way they fed each other the same dish was really sweet. They are moving forward, firestarter. And I’m glad that my unfounded fear and anxiety that this relationship would take as long to build as it took to build Rome is now fading fast. I’m glad to be proven wrong! :) Thank you for writing and posting this update, firestarter, and for putting up with all my teasing. :>
A nightcap, at Tina’s hotel right ;) pps
That was great and they are sweet!