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Fire and Ice Chapter 45
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"Bette Porter…" The brunette began, quickly fumbling through her cluth for her id and credit card. Her voice implied that she had no time to waste.
The hotel representative quickly looked for the name in his computer, immediately sensing the brunette’s hurry. Her command frightened and excited him all at once.
"Uh, yes. Ms. Porter…booked for three nights…in a suite, correct?" He offered politely as he accepted the cards being thrust in his direction.
"Yeah, that sounds right." Bette nodded, quickly brushing the hair out of her eyes.
The clerk quickly looked from Tina to Bette and back again before posing his next query.
"Would you prefer one king size or two dou…"
"One kingsize." Their voices chimed together, causing both women to look at each other with tiny shy smirks.
"Uh, of course…" The hotel employee stammered, looking down at his computer for the remainder of their transaction.
The man clicked his keyboard a few times, matching the rhythm of Bette’s anxiously drumming fingers on the counter.
"Okay, Ms. Porter. We have you on the top floor, I’ve put your room number on your key jacket here. You’ll find the elevators to your left…."
The hotel employee trailed off as the women quickly began walking towards the elevators, waving their hands over their heads in polite acknowlegment. They had already wasted enough time. They were so close to the moment that their bodies had ached for, so close they could both taste it as it washed through their mouths…
Bette insistenly pushed the up button on the elevator, her eyes darting around to catch the first car to arrive. Tina paced a little, her body needing movement in order to keep her from shaking. Her desire was so piercing at this point, she could hardly breathe.
An elevator chimed and the pair quickly stepped in front of it, anxiously waiting for the doors to open.
Several people spilled out before Bette and Tina could find themselves alone inside, Bette pushing the close door button like a madwoman.
The elevator doors closed, and as soon as Bette turned around to expel a long held breath of air, Tina dove directly into her arms.
Bette moaned as the blonde skillfully devoured her neck, her warm kisses covering soft honey skin.
Bette passionately tugged at the blonde’s hair, coercing their mouths to meet in an uncensored kiss. They allowed their mouths to completely explore one another’s, their tongues already addicted to the others taste.
They shifted abruptly as the elevator began descending upward, destination unknown as Bette had forgotten to punch the floor needed. She quickly punched the top floor, pouring herself back into Tina’s body without missing a beat. Bette slowly let her hand explore the length of Tina’s body, all the while keeping perfect time with their deep kiss. Tina’s breath caught a little as the brunette found the blonde’s breast, her palm gently rubbing circles over the already excited tip.
"I can’t wait to taste you…" The brunette breathed, her unfiltered passion eliciting a deep moan from the blonde.
Bette allowed her hand to descend further, gently lifting the blonde’s buttocks and bringing her forward. Tina moaned as Bette changed directions and backed the blonde into the elevator wall, the brunette’s lips all the while dragging across Tina’s heaving chest.
"Bette…" The blonde panted as new light dripped into her closed eyelids. The smell of flowers coming from the hotel’s top floor slowly drifted through the now open elevator doors.
"Tina…" Bette managed, her oral exploration of Tina’s collarbone now commencing.
The blonde took the brunettes face into her hands, their eyes searching each other’s passionately for an explanation to this overwhelming need. Tina nodded her head slowly, pouring her very heart into the brunette with her eyes. "We’re here….were finally here…"
TBC
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It’s on !!! Next post will be …hum…YUMMY !!! lol! pps ;-)
I am so with Amanda MG on This!!!! That was A HOT Chapter!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you PPVSLN
goood lord have mercy! That was SO frickin hot…wowza! I can’t wait for the next chapter!!!
Intense…Passionate…Sexy…Sweet…Loving! You hit ’em all!
Hahahahaha…I knew it wouldn’t be this chapter. I wonder how long the hall is to get to the room…one more chapter? I love the way you have written this. I’m counting on patience being a virtue!
You did such a fantastic job with Tina’s fear and agitation – being unable to stand still as they waited for the elevator doors to open. It’s easy to forget all that Tina has been through in the relatively short period of time represented in the story. Thank you for this wonderful journey. I confess I’m hoping for an NC-17 next posting…but if not, please make it as HOT as this chapter…whew!
waiting, anticipation, an explosion of a very good kind is about to happen! PPS:)
Have mercy!! If this was sooo hott and it was just the beginning, what’s gonna happen when our girls finally seal the deal? Ure gonna be held responsible for a lot of fainting spells, weak knees, and heart attacks…make sure u post a warning on ur subsequent chappies, fire!
They are getting hot in here!
Good thing there was no blackout during their elevator ride. Okay, firestarter. They are FINALLY at the threshold! They are ready! No more interruptions, right? Thank you for posting, firestarter! Hope all is well in your world! :>
Ah, this was posted just in the nick of time for me to go and have sweet dreams now that B&T are there…finally there ;)
I knew you’d post, I have put off going to sleep, not that I’m going to be able to now, thankyou very much!!! Pls, 10pages on the next chapter….this is just too much I’m going to explode
Ok I know I am ready and Tina is ready and I was expecting an NC-17 for this one but I have to admit that it was Hot Hot Hot. Great build up for the next chapter. Can’t wait to read it.
oh my god… they are there… what are you waiting for… post the nexy chapter
This is indeed a very long torture and I am loving every minute of it, wow you are incredible, and what you make me feel is indescribable, I can’t wait for what’s coming next and I know it will be mind blowing, you have so much love and passion and I am sure it will appear when you write the next chapter. with all my love and best HunHave a great day
I thought for sure the elevator would get stuck, or they would get stuck in traffic for hours,lol… i know they are so ready… all they need to do is get in the room,lol :)PPS
OMG how can you stop there.i don’t think i can wait for the next chapter so please please please post soon Thanks
Are we really here or did Tina fall asleep in the car? Just kidding… Great chapter and definitely can’t wait for the next few…damn firestarter we will all need cold showers.
Jeepers, that was HOT and its only the preliminary stage. Next chapter should be sizziling. PPS
They are finally there. I just wonderIwonder how many cloths will be tip and torn before they are naked before each other.. Lets see if you can get another out fast, thanks
I’m not sure if Tina is completely ready, but I am. DAmn. I felt bad for the guy at the desk, you could just imagine the two and Bette being her usually alpha self, cos all she can think about is getting Tina to the room. I do believe its time for some lovin.
Are we really there firestarter?? REALLY? I won’t believe it until I read it with my own two eyes. Fantastic story and the anticipation has me sitting on the edge of my seat. PPS. **Thank God honda90 is still with us. Does she always comment first? LOL!***
AMEN!!!! they are soooooooo there!! go Tina..claim what is yours without fear….and no lol i cannot imagine Bette just holding Tina for 3 days..